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LunaRei_SilverBlood

PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 7:51 am


Basic Statistics

Name: Peprika Caoimhe
Age: 19
Nationality: Irish
Hometown: Boston
Current Residence: A flat near her campus (Tokyo Gakugei University)
Occupation: Student, Part time job at a local bakery. Hopes to become a teacher.
Talents/Skills: Cooking and cleaning. Good with remembering information.
Birth order: Unknown
Siblings (describe relationship): Unknown
Parents (describe relationship): Unknown
Significant Others (describe relationship): None
Relationship skills: Generally passive, but friendly. Has trouble meeting new people, is is likely to stick to anyone that she does meet that's friendly to her.

Physical Characteristics:

Height: 5’9
Weight: 145 lbs
Race: Caucasian
Eye Color: Light blue
Hair Color: Slightly darker red
Hair style (picture reference may be used): Long wavy/curly (so her lower back)
Glasses or contact lenses?: Yes, thickish black rimmed
Skin color: Pale
Distinguishing features: Probably just her height and hair. Her ears are pierced, four holes on each ear, the lobe piercing always has a dangling earing, the others are studs.
How does he/she dress? In a mature street style ( Her outfit )
Mannerisms: Likes to have a plan, she's usually very polite. But she has no issue letting her hair down when the time is right.
Habits: Chap stick. She has a strange obsession with always using it. has a habit of not talking when others are around, but not in a rude kind of way.
Health: Fairly healthy, though she could stand to be in better shape.
Hobbies: Cooking, video games on occasion. reading. She enjoys going out and dancing.
Disabilities: None
Style (Elegant, shabby etc.): A Street style
PostPosted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:22 am


Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes

Educational Background: All public schools, between Ireland, and then in America. So when she reached Japan she had alot of catch up to do.
How does the Character see himself/herself? As a good and intelligent person, but knows she lacks in confidence, because she doesn't feel like she fits in.
How does the Character believe he/she is perceived by others? Probably as "the foreigner" She tried hard to fit in, but it doesn't often seem to work.
How self-confident is the character? Not as much as she should be.
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof? Both; She's a girl after all! Emotions run their lives, but she's learned you need to use your brain, hence her liking plans.
Greatest flaw(s): Low self esteem
Best quality(ies): Able to hide how she's really feeling, her never ending positive attitude, and her logical side.

Emotional Characteristics


Introvert or Extrovert? neutral. She can be both, on extreme scales.
How does the character deal with anger? More likely to hurt herself them another.
With sadness? Likely to cry alone, or with someone VERY close. But will often pretend if others are around, that nothing is wrong.
With conflict? Tries to avoid it.
With change? Her emotions often will take action first, and then her logical side will try and figure out whats going on.
With loss? Very bad.
What does the character want out of life? To share her knoweldge and love of its subject to others.
What would the character like to change in his/her life? Meet and know her family.
What motivates this character? Finding true friends, love.. her place in the world.
What frightens this character? Being alone, getting left.. Things that make her think of her past without her family.
What makes this character happy? Cooking, sleeping, teaching... if she had a friend, that person ect.
Is the character judgmental of others? Depends, not usually.
Is the character generous or stingy? Generous
Is the character generally polite or rude? Polite

Special Characteristics

Do they fight at close or long range? Close
What is their weapon? Sai
Is there a reason behind the choice of weapon? It fits her overall style, and will allow her to grow more confident, because she'll have to fight.
In the real world what does the weapon transform into? part of her necklace. They're the pendant on it, the Sai's are interlocked facing eachothr.

LunaRei_SilverBlood


LunaRei_SilverBlood

PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 6:21 am


Her Story

Back Ground:

Peprika was born and raised in Ireland. That much she knew. But for some reason any memory or parents or family were nonexistent. She had a life like any child. She had toys, would be enrolled in school. She could always remember the sound of other children laughing. Where they her siblings? Years went by like this. She attended school, and slowly got older... Around the age of 8, she came home one day to find her house... Not there. Nothing but a smoldering pile of wood remained.

From that day on, Peprika was alone. It was all fuzzy. It wasn't that her 'parents' died. They could no longer care of her. So they left her, and went to take care of themselves. She was to young to understand anything other then, her parents left her. The local orphanage would take her in.

When she turned 10, she was adopted by a family that came from America. They were Irish, lived in Boston... They treated her like a child, but taught her how to be responsible. She never viewed them as her parents though. They fine tuned her cooking and cleaning... How to take care of herself. They were a nice couple. Things were good to say the least. Until the women conceived her own child.

They would throw Peprika away. Not literally, but thats how she felt. She was placed into the system in America. it was a horrible place. But Thankfully she was able to keep going to her same school, even if she was struggling with keeping up. At the age of 15 Peprika was sick of all of this. The empty feeling she carried. Her self esteem plummeted. It was hard to run away from an orphanage. But... things looked up. She had been adopted again. Oddly enough because of her age...

Of course it was because of her age that she was adopted. The people that took her this time, had no intention of ever taking care of her. They jsut wanted the checks... Luckily for Peprika, she was able to take some of the money and run. She wanted to make the most of what she could with her life...

She got a one way ticket to the other side of the world. Japan. She never looked back, once she got off the plane. She was almost 16, and she was able to get a job, and they owner of the store let her sleep in a back room until she had enough saved... And she got herself enrolled into school. School seems to be a reoccurring theme here!

Peprika's love her education was unmatched by anyone around her. It was the only thing she needed to survive... After a year, she was doing cram school, and practice exams for university. She had moved to Shibuya, worked at a bakery a there, and lived nearby. She had finally started to make it on her own... But University would be expensive. So she busied herself with working. and trying to get scholarships.... The year passed like a breeze... She had somehow made it.

Part of her money earn was going into speech class. She was so busy that she never would have thought about what was coming in the next year. She made it into University with some scholarships...

But a part of her was still missing. She worked, took her speech classes... Did hr schooling. She never had any friends. She did her best to blend in with those around her, wearing fashionable clothing. But she rarely ever had more then an acquaintance.

Present Day:

Peprika is a healthy young women in her first year of college. She has a job, her Japanese speech has improved. She still carries a bit of an Irish accent. She has a wardrobe full of nothing clothing, a comfortable flat. Her own computer, a reliable job. She learned that she wanted to be a teacher, and was striving for that. She never told anyone her story. She never had anyone to tell it too. But she was content with her life.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:24 am


RP Sample

Her blue eyes looked out the window of the bakery... She stood behind the counter, no sound reached her ears. The sky was slowly getting darker, and the rain fell. People rushed past with this umbrella's opened. Just about everyone had dark and dreary colors for their umbrellas for some reason. Only every few minutes did someone with a color rush past. Her eyes closed for a blink and the red headed stopped day dreaming and she looked around. The bakery was empty. That seemed to happen a lot when the weather was bad. Though more so with rain.

Peprika wasn't in the store alone of course. There was the store manager, and then a new trainee. Peprika found it to be strange that a male wanted to work at such a feminine place, but the new guy seemed to be really nice. Although a bit clumsy. And with that thought a crash came from behind her, and she turned to look. Yep... He was clumsy aright.

Peprika leaned over and she pulled the pot off the boys head, and she gave a smile. "Are you okay?" Her Japanese wasn't perfect, for she wasn't a native to land, but it was definitely understandable. The boy on the floor laughed, probably more nervously then anything but nodded to her. Peprika helped him clean up when out of the corner of her eye she caught a flash of light...

It was quickly followed by a loud rumble of thunder that shook the store. Peprika felt a shiver slide over her body. This could turn out to be a long shift... She was scared of thunder. Lightening only through the cause and effect. A clack sounded by her feet when she realized that she had dropped the mop.

"Are you scared of thunder?" The new employee asked her, as he used paper towels to clean up.

"Yeah kind of. I always had trouble being around with it." She laughed a little. "As I have gotten older I have learn to deal with it better then when I was a child." Another flash of light a then a few seconds later a rumble came through, and Peprika gave another shiver, and she excused herself quickly into the bathroom. It was the safest place in the store from thunder.

LunaRei_SilverBlood


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 7:28 am


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