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Noembelu You Smell Poo 2

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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 12:45 pm

I know I'm not a member, delete this topic if you want me to sign up... D:
But, I posted this in the Picture Post, and recieved 0 replies. Zero, damnit.
Lately, whenever I post my art I seem to get one or two comments, if not any. They always seem to be along the lines of 'kl.lol' >_>;
And you guys seem great... So... ;P

The exact post:
A little WIP.

Anyone that can colour professionally [or close to] here?

Girls in tight dresses
Who drag with mustaches
Chicks drivin' fast
Ingenues with long lashes
Women who long, love, lust
Women who give
This is the way
It's the way that we live

Talking, laughing, loving, breathing,
fighting, ********, crying, drinking,
riding, winning, losing, cheating,
kissing, thinking, dreaming.

This is the way
It's the way that we live
It's the way that we live
And love

The L Word Theme by Betty.

SMILE! :]

Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 7:18 pm

the art arena's slogan should be "if it's not anime we ignore it".

you're picture is lovely. the nostril line looks a bit off to me, then again it doesn't. *smacks self* i'd like to see this done.

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Noembelu You Smell Poo 2

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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 3:15 am

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the art arena's slogan should be "if it's not anime we ignore it".

you're picture is lovely. the nostril line looks a bit off to me, then again it doesn't. *smacks self* i'd like to see this done.

Exactly. D:

Though, when I post my cartoons, I get ten replies?! Thanks. I think I see what you mean by the nostril!

Here's an updated version... The one with no face IS a girl. D:
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[Ignore the items up in the right hand corner... xD I got bored.]

Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:44 am

Tegan and Sara! heart

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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 2:37 pm

It looks like you traced over a photo.

I say this because although the sense of anatomy and proportion seems very advanced....the quality of the line work is....really amatuerish. everyline in the drawing is the same weight as the rest, as though you dont know what parts to emphasize or minimize to give the face dimension.

I think it needs more original imput from you the artist, aside from trying to make it look like a real drawing, you might as well just post the photo. Instead, play with linewidths, colors, shapes....things like that. other wise, people are'nt going to be very impressed/interrested by the drawing.

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