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first off i give u major props for drawing on the cp. i cant for anything -_-'
so lets start this critique! the eye that is open looks good but for the closed one i recomend making it about the same size as the top of the open eye [in other words...make it a bit bigger :3] the nose looks good shape wise but maybe turn it a bit clock wise so it looks more like this: > instead of ^. the mouth looks good, maybe color the dark red as balck [thats what i do] but wat ever floats ur boat! the over all face shape looks good but i just cant tell if she is turning her head or not. is she isnt turning her head, make the neck more aligned with the chin [so that the tip of the chin is about in the middle of the neck. if she is turning her head to the side try to define the cheek more. this is the best example i can give [http://oxellebellxo.deviantart.com/art/ever-changing-minds-of-girls-127650638] the last two panels the fox [thats me!! XD] has her head turned and the cheek is sticking out on the right side. sorry if i didnt explain that to well...:/ ok last part......since the head and neck are pretty big, you want to make your sholders a bit broader or in other words make them go out further.

i hope that helped a bit!
keep up the good work! mrgreen

Very nice art. MS Paint ain't that good, I prefer GIMP or Photoshop..