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The only thing with me is that the mid section look short and it should be longer. But other than that it's good!

wow looks good! better then wat i can do on paint...then again that isnt saying too much cause i cant draw anything on pain XD

so heres the critique. ill start from the top then go down from there. the eyes look a bit close. u should be able to fit a third eye in between the two eyes that are already there. the neck and sholders look good :] the cleavage looks a bit big but what every floats ur boat XD. the stomach [like where the belly button is] looks a bitt small. if u make it a tad bt longer itll do wonders! :] as for the shorts...i give u major props. i cant draw pants for crap XD. [that is why i tend to try to make really long shirts :3. ok forgot the arm...lets go back. the arm that is on the left looks a tad bit longer then the one on the right but it isnt by that much so dont worry about it [just wanted to point that out.] and just as a question. why is her right arm [the one on the left] backwards? [i dont mean that offencivly so dont take it that wayy]
as for the legs. the shape looks good. the calve on the right looks a tad bit bigger then the one on the left but thats it!

i hope i helped you in some way!
keep up the good work! biggrin