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 Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:47 am
Meep, I just wanted somewhere I could ranomly spew poetry out without swearing or punching things *twitch*
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:55 am
i would random you buttttttttt................................................................................................................................ you know I am bord!
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:56 am
Kiss my nose as you lay me to rest.
Tell me you loved me the best.
Brush my hair away from my eye.
As you whisper a heart felt goodbye.
Tell my parents it'll be okay.
Tell them I never really meant to stay.
Look to the sky when I'm lowered in the ground.
Say "I love you and I"ll see you around."
Place a rose down where I lay.
Then turn to the one you love and say.
"She was special to me, I hope you can see.
But she'll always have apart of me.
I'll love you as much as my heart can.
But I can't stand life now that she's dead".
Over time you'll love her again.
My soul will go to heaven where my watch will begin.
I'll be an angel in your dreams,
But never facing you it seems.
You'll cry my name when you awaken alone.
Cuz you'll realize then...
I'm not coming back.
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 12:28 pm
(*screams and bangs head into wall*)
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Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 7:19 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 10:40 am
so it this only for your poems or may other share their work with you
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Master of Your Thoughts Crew
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Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:10 pm
And i wouldn't bang your head into the wall if i were you, it ain't healthy. Are you doing it just because? Or are you depressed? If something's bugging ya, i wouldn't mind talking about it to relieve the pressure....if it help, ya know.
If not, than all i can say is that your poetry is freaking awesome. smile
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Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:24 pm
Thats really good poetry. Bettert than i could do.
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Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:39 am
everyone has the potenitial to write great poetry(not saying you're bad at it anawinee caus ei love this poem)it's just that some don't apply themselves enough to their peotry to make it come out as they wanted it to.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:33 am
*looks around and then looks back at Ness* yes..well...ummm...right
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:35 am
Wow I SO randomly found this thread....
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:42 am
well well well well*turns around on a chair*
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