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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:09 am
hey i got bored and created this story for a class to try and show how dark and scary the human mind is enjoy. Also if anyone wets there pants or complains because of me cussing a lot sorry thats my story and i am stickin to it, lol i know lame joke but i am not fixing it enjoy,
darkness Once upon a time there lived a man and his wife, now this is how all fairy tales start but this story is far from that so lets just get to the main part of this dark story of how darkness can come out of some of the most innocent places and that evil is said to hide behind the most innocent of faces. Now are main performer John was on his way home to see his wife after work. While on he was parking his car he saw his friend’s car. He thought to himself,” why is Jarrod here, he didn’t ask me for anything or call me if he could borrow something, weird. As he was parking his car he thought he saw something in his review mirror with horns, something demonic. He then goes and enters his house and hears something like a screaming inside, as if someone was dieing. At first he thought that Jarrod was in pain or it was his wife. As he got closer to the steps of his staircase he could hear the screams louder and as if they were more of pleasure then pain. Right when he got to the door he felt something touch him like as if it was some kind of hand that had touched his shoulder. Something very cold and with claws. Then he turned the knob of his door and he saw something that no husband should ever see of his wife and best friend. They were both in the same bed having sex and at that moment something deep inside of his brain like a wire was snapped with something sharp. “YOU ******** HARPY HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME. I DID EVERYTHING I COULD FOR YOU HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME I LOVED YOU AND I WANTED TO SPEND THE REST OF THE WORLD WITH YOU. AND YOU WERE MY BEST FRIEND LIKE A BROTHER HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME’’ said John to his wife and friend. “ No, no, no it wasn’t like that way man your wife just had a heart attack, and I was just helping her out” said Jarrod.” “Yeah honey that’s all it was and nothing more he saved my life“, said John’s wife. “NO YOU LIERS YOU BOTH DESERVE TO DIE AND ROT IN HELL”. He charges both and strangles his wife and while that was being done his friend tries to fight or do something but with the force of ten men John was able to push down Jarrod. Then John blacks out after he pushed his friend away, a few moments later he awakes in a small cell and sees some figure across from him. Its his old friend Jarrod. “Ugh what happen where are we” said John in a half dazed and confused sounding voice. “We are here because you are a murder and I am here because I tried to save someone from a monster, LIKE YOU” with that being said Jarrod charged him with the intent of killing him however a guard stops them. “HEY YOU TWO DAMN ******** HEADS STOP THE MONKEY PLAY BEFORE I BEAT YOUR HEADS IN” roared the guard. “Why the hell am I here please explain this to me, how did I go from being in my house on day and the next day I am here” said John. “One day son you been here for about two months, and you killed your wife you sick ********, hell you even admitted it in court with a smile that you killed her. We just recently switched you two because you both begged and pleaded that we put you two together in the same room”. “What that doesn’t make sense why would I ask for that, when I tried killing this son of a b***h” said Jarrod. “ Don’t know myself but you asked for him and he asked for you so deal with it, now its time for lights out and for me to go home be good ******** heads or I will be your worst nightmare“. As the lights turned off John noticed the same silhouette of a horned beast as he did that one day. As he tried to go to bed he heard someone or something whisper “ I am going to kill you”. He thought nothing of it and went to bed, however a few hours later he heard it again this time in a louder voice “ I am going to kill you”. He awoke and in a panic looked around and saw nothing but darkness. He tried to go back to sleep however he heard the voice again but this time it was like it was screaming at him “I AM GOING TO KILL YOU”. He woke up sweating in a panic tried to find out what was in his cell making that sound but it wasn’t in there. To try and calm his self down he grabbed a cigarette from his pocket and he grabbed a match from the sink and after he lit it he saw something that had shocked and scared every fiber of his body. He saw a giant red demon in his friends bed, John didn’t know what to do he knew one thing, and that he had to kill it. He tore out a spring from under his bed and proceeded to strangle it to death until it stopped breathing. After that John went to bed soundly and didn’t wake up until he heard someone screaming when he opened his eyes he saw Jarrod died and that the guard was the one that was screaming. As it turned out that John was the one who killed Jarrod mistaking him as the demon and as the guards took him to put him into isolation all John could see was different horned demons different monsters and from what he saw he knew why he was put on this planet and why he agreed to go to this hell hole to kill these demons. As they put him into the new cell he grabbed on of the guards gun without them knowing and said “ these fools wanted to send me into this darkness however I will be the one to send myself there and kill their king. With that being said he shoot himself and fell to the ground unconscious, the guards rushed in and they both stood in awe as that when tried to move him his shadow had a halo of blood on it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:14 am
xp it's sloppy, i could only read half of it, but the story itself is pretty good. like alot of nightmares i had, but toned down, a sif trying to be explained. xd
still, it is so hard for me to read it... ._.
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:03 pm
DOUBLESPACE PARAGRAPHS PLEASE. WALL OF TEXT IS BAD.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:32 pm
what the story is going to be about is this guy who starts hearing voices, the voice i am going to kill you in what i wroute, and he thinks its the voice of god. Now after our little incident with the gun he survives and sees a shrink. The good doc says hes insane and should be released so he can become better. But right when he leaves the prison the doc dies mysteriously. Now the docs best friend is wondering what happend to him so he goes looking for the main charector. Right when he is about to catch him the friend has a heart attack. The same happens to others who try and catch him. Now are main charector is killing whoever the voice says to kill at first its like major bad guys like mobstors and corrupt men but then he starts turning on smaller crimminals. The people he will kill will be based off the 7 deadly sins. Its like death note meets dantes infernao. Yes i know i am a terribal writer but if you want to edit my work that would be awesome
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:38 pm
*sighs.* iii-_- i am sure you are capable of editing it yourself. i will edit it this one time, but later. however i have to insist that from now on you please type more legibly. you have to use proper punctuation, and avoid unreadable walls of text. understand what a paragraph is, and sepperate them to a readable distance.
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:06 pm
just forget it i dont think i am going to contiue because i dont have the want to do it later
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