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Riyinn

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 4:18 pm


Accepted by Sou

Name: Atelli
Age: 19
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

Craft: N/A
Rank:

Physical Description:
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Her hair is at shoulder length any lower and it risks getting caught in things. She doesn’t wear heavy cloths but anything of fine materials risks being torn and damaged. Medium build and very tan skin she’s not someone you could just easily push around she stands around 5’7. She’s never broken anything, but due to her life standard she is littered with scars her hands being the most scared from cleaning.

Personality:
Abril’s always had it hard but even this has never made her lose her good willed side, she’s fast to offer help even before its needed, but she will not allowed someone to abuse her good willed side, and will often say no after so long.

She has a good deal of patients and will never complain even when given the worst of the worst job having done just about everything around the house. Shes only had one mild crush in her life and even that only lasted a week. Though mixed on her reaction to both males and females she never sees much more then a sexy body.

Not the lovely dovey type she would rather shake hands then hug say hi rather then a long speech. But doesn’t try to avoid people or even worry about how they see her.

History:
Birth: Cothold, located a bit north of ista
At a very early age her mother pasted away leavening her and her 2 sisters and father alone. Mela the oldest girl was the most girly of the 3, Sertin being middle child was the most boyish leaving Abril as a middle ground though she is hard skinned from work and tanned from days in the sun. She tends to pick up on most things. For about half a year the oldest sister did the house work however, she moved off soon after her mother passed away leaving her and her sister to take care of most of the women’s work. Her father mainly just another pair of hands never asked much of them but do to life both helped even when he didn’t ask. Her sister Sertin picked up most of his work and helped him with building and what not leaving Abril with the laundry cleaning and cooking.

At the age of 15 she had her first crush on a boy a bit older then her that she had a run in at one of the gatherings but this only lasted a week due to her busy life style. Taking on more of the chores around the house she learned feeding and care of most the animals around the yard, and started to pick up on a few of the ways of building.

At age 17 she almost gave her self a heart attack when a small green landed near searching but merely took another of the boys in town. She never seen her self as a dragon rider but never could push away the thought. At age 18 her father came down with a horrible flu, despite healing he passed away, leaving her and her sister alone. A few months later another dragon rider landed to her surprise she was picked and taken.

Pets: None

Other/Talents: cook as she had to learn, Good problem solving

Will this character be a candidate? Yes

Picture: None (cause I cant draw people)
PostPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 10:29 am


I'll have to ask you to change her name, since April nor Latin exist on Pern. xD;

Red hair and green eyes are both very uncommon traits, so I'll have to ask you to let her have one or the other. (Though preferably neither.) The fact she's littered with scars doesn't make sense, since she's just doing normal house work.

Her personality is alright, so if you could just fix those things, that would be great. Thank you!

soutou
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Riyinn

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:05 am


Her scars aren't that major just little things from scrapping on things things being knocked down.

Her hair color and eye color have been altered

I wouldn't understand the name issue as pern people have all sorts of names and the meaning doesn't have to be known I just thought it would be fun to put that there. Tho that also has been changed.
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