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Chisel and the Stone (Writing only

Do you like Hiddochi's writing? At least a little? ._.

Yes, I love it.

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Nah, it sucks.

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Meh, a little. Could use a lot of work, though.

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This would make an awesome book, Hiddo.

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I would soooo NOT buy this book. >_>

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I JUST WANT MAH POLL-GOLD!!!!!! D<

100%

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Hiddochi wolf

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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 7:47 pm

Never mind.

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:22 pm

One thing I notice is that you have something I lack. You use metaphors and similes and stuff, whereas my imagery is strictly crisp detail. It's something I need to work on. Bravo.

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Hiddochi wolf

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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:29 pm

A girl lost in the depths of her own confusion, she last cried out...

"Thank you, Fatal. Though, sometimes I feel as if I'm too metaphorical, and pay much less attention to actual detail.

It's a balancing act that all writers must perfect, I guess. "

And there she remained. Forever forgotten.

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