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Do you like Hiddochi's writing? At least a little? ._.
  Yes, I love it.
  Nah, it sucks.
  Meh, a little. Could use a lot of work, though.
  This would make an awesome book, Hiddo.
  I would soooo NOT buy this book. >_>
  I JUST WANT MAH POLL-GOLD!!!!!! D<
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 7:47 pm


Never mind.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:22 pm


One thing I notice is that you have something I lack. You use metaphors and similes and stuff, whereas my imagery is strictly crisp detail. It's something I need to work on. Bravo.

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:29 pm


A girl lost in the depths of her own confusion, she last cried out...


"Thank you, Fatal. Though, sometimes I feel as if I'm too metaphorical, and pay much less attention to actual detail.

It's a balancing act that all writers must perfect, I guess. "


And there she remained. Forever forgotten.
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