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 Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 3:07 pm
Ok so here is where I'll post my poems I'm not the best let me know what you think k 3nodding
-Two Paths-
Which do I choose?
Can I even make a decisions?
What have I got to lose?
Wondering whats in store for me,
Trying to see far as my eyes will see.
But theres no cheating you wont see down them both,
You just gotta grit your teeth, pick one, and hope.
Hope that it's the right one,
Because a long way you have already come.
Can you turn back? no,
But can you change your path?
Maybe just maybe so
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:35 pm
Li-Mei Minamino Ok so here is where I'll post my poems I'm not the best let me know what you think k 3nodding -Two Paths- Which do I choose? Can I even make a decisions? What have I got to lose? Wondering whats in store for me, Trying to see far as my eyes will see. But theres no cheating you wont see down them both, You just gotta grit your teeth, pick one, and hope. Hope that it's the right one, Because a long way you have already come. Can you turn back? no, But can you change your path? Maybe just maybe so You think your not the best?????? I think u are amazing and i love it!!!!!!!! Li-li you rock!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:04 pm
Cool Li-Mei! xd You can be the poet, and I can be your editor! heart
-Two Paths-
Which do I choose?
Can I even make a decision?
What have I got to lose?
Wondering what's in store for me,
Trying to see far as my eyes will see.
But there's no cheating; you wont see down them both,
You just gotta grit your teeth, pick one, and hope.
Hope that it's the right one,
Because a long way you have already come.
Can you turn back? No,
But can you change your path?
Maybe, just maybe so.
(I edited your punctuation.) 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:49 pm
Cool thanks hun I'm not that good at puntuation lol!
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dewshine_angel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:11 pm
Wonderful poem as always hun, I read it earlier, just didn't post, got sidetracked by a cuteness lol heart
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:37 pm
It's easy to get sidetracked by the cuteness
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dewshine_angel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:43 pm
Speaking of, I like the new look 4laugh
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