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 Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:40 am
As the banner reads, Welcome to my quest thread.
Feel free to post any sort of critique. After all I need creative criticism in order to create a very interesting Raeven. =D
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:43 am
November 21, 2009 - Getting rid of two soul options and adding Gnome.
October 26, 2009 - Slowly working on things again
June 23, 2009 - Finally decided to work on the quest thread. ;3
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:16 am
( My current fel essence idea. Feel free to inform me if it crosses into anyone's turf. Rather avoid stepping on any eggshells. x3 ) Dehydrating Water One sip of this cool glass of h20 leaves your mouth surprisingly dry. Another sip and a headache begins to form. Could this possibly be? Seems like this water dehydrates your body instead of keeping it nice and healthy!
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:17 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:27 pm
Raeven Ohohohoho Fel Essence: Dehydrating Water Soul: Gnome Name: Gender: Male Alignment: Personality: Quirks: Food Source: ---------------Powers:--------------- Passive: - - Active: - - Ohohohoho Fel Essence: Dehydrating Water Soul: Chupacabra Name: Gender: Female Alignment: Personality: Quirks: Food Source: ---------------Powers:--------------- Passive: - - Active: - -
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:35 pm
Writing Samples Life Dust prompt response " 27....28....29....30! Ready or not here I come! "
Lemon stiffened at his guardian's announcement. The game of hide and seek had begun! The Color Dust found himself quite an amazing hiding spot in Friday's room. Right in between a medium sized cabinet and the wall.The only way Lemon could be seen was if Friday was standing directly in front of him but Lemon knew his guardian well enough to assume that he would never check this particular area. How so? Simply because he had hid there before! Who would check the same spot twice?
" Hehehe. " Lemon accidentally let out a giggle due to the excitement of the game. Realizing that this might prove a problem he went to cover his mouth with both hands. Then arose yet another problem....Lemon has squished himself SO perfectly that his arms and hands were pinned down to his own body. Not only was his arms unable to move but so was the rest of his body! This did not happen before....
Lemon's back pressed up against the cabinet while his feet bent awkwardly due to the wall in front of him. Both arms pinned by his own legs! WAIT! Maybe this was not such a bad thing. This particular situation prevented any sort of movement. Less adjusting equaled lowering the chances of ever being caught! " He is never going to catch me..." Now if only he just kept his mouth sealed.
The dust child's incapability of keeping his lips from moving was one of his biggest faults. Not only did it prove problems in games like hide and seek but in the outside world as well. Lemon would relentless chat about ANYTHING! On how he loved doodling while sitting in the park to explaining the fun of speaking to the elderly folks. Nothing seemed to be like a boring subject to this dust. If it gave Lemon the chance to voice his opinion it was perfect! Though the listener might just might walk away. Then he would resort to speaking to Cute Chan. " Because Cute Chan always listens to me! "
Determination was the key word in this round! The first few times this game was played Lemon either did not hide fast enough, caught in the middle of doing so, or just finding terrible spots where he was easily spotted. Also the fact that his choice in wardrobe was so unbelievably bright! Who could possibly miss out on the bright blue boy comfortably laying on top of the mattress pretending to be one of the pillows (which happened to be a few shades darker. ).
No matter! You gain nothing if you easily give up. Lemon learned from his mistakes, wore one of Friday's black shirts, and figured that using the same spot could lead to victory! Oh how he could see it now.....Friday was the type to sulk after losing a game. Especially since he managed to beat Lemon in possibly everything that was played. Hula hooping, racing to the bathroom in the morning, and even ' lets see who could dance in the middle of Aimes Circle for the longest '. Friday would let out that victory laugh, then offer some watermelon ice cream. Lemon loved watermelon flavored ice cream.
Foot steps brought Lemon back to reality though they were heard from the kitchen. Drawers were opened and closed, plates were moved, the faucet turned on? What!? How could he possibly be in the faucet? Lemon giggled, Friday was so silly!
Then there was a long drawn out silence. Was the giggle heard? Oh no! No no no no no! The game had lasted for what seemed to be more than five minutes. That was a record! Now if Lemon could just win the game. He would be able to shove it in his guardian's face on how he WON! This victory was needed in order to live!
The flushing of a toilet finally broke the on going silence. The click of bathroom door closing soon followed then Friday's footsteps approaching the bed room. Their home was not very large, this probably being one of the main reasons why their hide and seek games ended to quickly. A dining room/kitchen, bathroom, and one bedroom which both of them shared. It was a pretty large bedroom so it did not pose much a problem. The dust child's need for new clothing on the other hand did.
Lemon spotted Friday with the corner of his eye lay on the bed and stare at the ceiling above. " I know you are there Lemon. "
Lemon answered with silence knowing the EVIL TRICKERY his guardian was attempting to pull off. " I checked everything in our oh so large home, so you could only be in the bed room. Unless you decided to step it up and go outside. But you know very well that outside is off limits! " Friday spoke calmly, his gaze remaining on a spider crawling ahead.
" Eh...Guess I'll eat watermelon all on my lonesome this time around..." The guardian sighed sounding, surprisingly, upset.
" NO YOU WON'T! " Lemon cried out from his corner. The thought of his guardian eating his favorite flavor all alone was too much. " Please please don't! You love me right? And if you love me you won't eat anything without me. Cause then I would be sad. Do you want me to be sad? Cause then I'll run away! RUN AWAY TO WHI FOREST! I could be eaten by a fairy or something! Maybe not a fairy since I think they are nice. Are they nice? Have you ever met one? I bet they are nice. " Lemon went to continue but was met with Friday's glaring eyes.
" Hush your mouth already you loser. I would never eat any sort of ice cream without you. Now hurry up and get out. Cute Chan is sitting all alone in the kitchen. " Friday sat up on the bed, a bit puzzled on why the dust chose the same spot twice.
" But Friday~ " Lemon dragged on the name until he needed to take in a breath. " I can't! Will I die here? I don't want to die! " Lemon sniffled, his voice cracking due to the over flow of tears about to be unleashed.
" You silly thing. I'll help you out. Next time don't go jammin' yourself in tiny spaces. You never know...I MIGHT NOT BE AROUND NEXT TIME! " Friday let out his victory laugh while extending a helping hand in order to remove the child.
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:43 pm
Credits
[Lab 305] is © to Kyoupiruchi
Ravina Loki - For allowing me to us her set up and just about everything else.
Alexis Antico - For the banners.
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