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Lupine Pyrefly

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:59 am


Hi! I'm writing a story, please read and review. Opinions are loved, and please be honest!

http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=9592354&page=1
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 5:05 pm


Wowza. Lots of names.
What breed of kitty are they?

Callowyn of Calypso


Poodle Crusader

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 6:45 pm


Have you tried posting it on fanfiction.net or fictionpress.net ?

If you haven't already, I strongly advise that you do so right away. You'll get lots of reviews there, whether they be from literates, trolls, illiterates, or flamers....

You'll come to see in time that whoever reviews you, and however good or bad the review you get, they all help you in some way, whether giving you a false sense of 'WHOAIMAGOODWRITERLOL!!11!", or slowly destroying you inside, and making you a better writer in the long run.

3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Nov 16, 2005 12:38 pm


Thanks, I'll try.

Lupine Pyrefly


Callowyn of Calypso

PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 9:26 pm


Poodle Crusader
Have you tried posting it on fanfiction.net or fictionpress.net ?

If you haven't already, I strongly advise that you do so right away. You'll get lots of reviews there, whether they be from literates, trolls, illiterates, or flamers....

You'll come to see in time that whoever reviews you, and however good or bad the review you get, they all help you in some way, whether giving you a false sense of 'WHOAIMAGOODWRITERLOL!!11!", or slowly destroying you inside, and making you a better writer in the long run.

3nodding

Uh...I coudn't tell if that was a slam or not.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 11:03 pm


Callowyn of Calypso
Poodle Crusader
Have you tried posting it on fanfiction.net or fictionpress.net ?

If you haven't already, I strongly advise that you do so right away. You'll get lots of reviews there, whether they be from literates, trolls, illiterates, or flamers....

You'll come to see in time that whoever reviews you, and however good or bad the review you get, they all help you in some way, whether giving you a false sense of 'WHOAIMAGOODWRITERLOL!!11!", or slowly destroying you inside, and making you a better writer in the long run.

3nodding

Uh...I coudn't tell if that was a slam or not.
..... same ....

Milkshake-in-a-Cup


Ravennwings

PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:16 am


Nah, I don't think it's a flame. Being a writer myself, I know he has a good point. A lot of people will say "Wow, this is really good" just to make you feel good or prevent hurting your feelings, and when that happens, you don't think you need to change, so you don't improve. Often, it takes someone to say "OMG. What the hell did you do, sit your dog down and tell him to write a story?" for you to realize "Wait. This SUCKS. I gotta get better!". (Not saying that's what I think! I've not even read it yet!)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 1:51 pm


That was totally not a flame. That was lovely advice that makes the world go round.

Lupine Pyrefly


Callowyn of Calypso

PostPosted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:41 pm


Lupine Pyrefly
That was totally not a flame. That was lovely advice that makes the world go round.

I'm sorry if I sounded too on gaurd. I just don't want anyone to get too offended at eachother.
whee
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