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The Most Devoted Follower
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 Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 5:35 pm
Lover Oh Lover,
Sing Me A Sweet Song,
The Melody A Sweet Horror,
Of A Life Gone Wrong,
Lover Oh Lover,
Show Me A Play,
Upon The Stage,
Of A New Day,
Lover Oh Lover
Keep This Heart Alive,
Once Its Dead,
It wont revive,
Lover Oh Lover,
Stay With Me,
For My Heart Is,
A Dead Melody
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 2:01 pm
that is really the sweeties sad poem u have it really good can u make a sequel to it
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Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 5:56 pm
not bad it very poetic and it is adventurous
it makes people feel really happy
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:58 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:06 am
it good it reminds me of Davichi song
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