i'm writing a long book, and i want people to tell me wat they think on some of the emotionally stronger parts... so plz comment!!!
this is wen my character chose to die and was slowly doing just that.
"There were a lot of things running through my mind as i faded into the quiet black of infinity. Phrases like goodbye, why me, I love you, I'll miss you... but there was one that stood out among the others. It made me smile as it echoed in my dissolving mind. I breathed my last breath with relief as I thought the last words I'd ever know. I'm free."
I know u wudnt know who shes talking about wen she says i love you and miss u, but if u read the whole story u'd know.
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