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 Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:19 pm
 lineart  redline would be so very appreciated :O right shoulder and arm foreshortening feels wrong x(. also any opinions on the colouring? it's a bit off balance to me but not sure what to do instead. thanks thanks thanks!
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 2:36 pm
-: The picture is pretty. From I can tell, the shoulder should be a little bit more bulkier. The way you have the arm makes the palm goes upward, exposing the palm more.
The hat looks like it's blending towards one side. I may be wrong on thing but I tried to guess how it look.
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As for the coloring, I'm having a hard time figuring out the light source for it.
If I didn't explain something well, please feel free to ask. :-
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:44 am
ahh, thanks so much!! i see what you mean about the shoulder.. and of course, the palm makes sense surprised i think i need to work on necks, lol. i overlook them all the time but i'm realising they have a big part in deciding how uncomfortable the person looks.
the hat blending towards one side - how did you mean..? i remember struggling with the hat for a while lol
yeah the light source confused me too. i was originally going to have two... and then i realised the person wanted the light from somewhere else... so i just made a third. and then i kinda gave up. haha.
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:29 pm
-: Having three light sources can really be overwhelming. I'm sorry.
Maybe some visual aid will help? I don't know, let me know if you still can't understand. :-
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 7:08 pm
Ooooohhhhhhh.... I see, that makes a whole lot more sense, very helpful. I tried for ages to find a reference for a half-sunken or crooked top hat but those are rare and far between!! Thanks again!
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