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samsookool

PostPosted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 9:04 pm


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i drew it a while ago and i want an opinion. PLEASE!!
PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:18 pm


its awsome~ heart

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EnergyDrinkOtaku

PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 3:50 am


Page streatching... x: I don't like page streatching on forums XD Well, this is pretty nice o: Better than me x3 You did a beautiful job on the wings by the way.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:10 pm


thank you, and im sorry for the page stretch

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:22 am


It's really good the only thing I have to say is that her (on the right) feet are too small but other than that it looks good
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:48 pm


My opinion: It's cool! I think it's pretty.

Critique: Their boobs are defying gravity! eek Not totally, but you've got them all nicely rounded as if gravity is not making them hang down more naturally. I mean, I know they hang down, just not in the right way... sweatdrop And besides the feet thing mentioned in post above, her legs need to be slightly more curvy (like at the calves, and a small indication of the knees). Other than that, pretty well done. mrgreen Great Job! Have fun drawing!

Tarff


AppleStreet

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:06 pm


Tarff
My opinion: It's cool! I think it's pretty.

Critique: Their boobs are defying gravity! eek Not totally, but you've got them all nicely rounded as if gravity is not making them hang down more naturally. I mean, I know they hang down, just not in the right way... sweatdrop And besides the feet thing mentioned in post above, her legs need to be slightly more curvy (like at the calves, and a small indication of the knees). Other than that, pretty well done. mrgreen Great Job! Have fun drawing!

I think the boobies are fine. They are hanging down and that's how they should hang down ( I would know )
I think you should show the other leg a little bit more...You already know about the feet...and last but not least, why is only the bead inked?
PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 5:05 pm


Pretty good 9/10! WOOP WOOP. like everyon has said, ht eleg a bet curvy, and i think the boobs are fine, but shirts come in handy, and I really like it. keep on drawing!

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