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 Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:06 pm
In this topic i will be making a interesting story. In this story there will be
many new monsters i will be makiing up and new sections of the story as
soon as i think of more of the story. This will hopefully be a great story
and very interesting. I will also rarely make writing mistakes.
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 6:51 pm
"WAKE UP" yelled a mysterious man in armour. I pulled myself up. "Who are you?" I whisper in frustation and in pain. "This is not a time for joking, the fatalis isn't getting any weaker with you doing nothing". I've heard of a fatalis but have never seen one. Scared, i ran away from the man in the light armour and the Fatalis.
Returning home, i drag myself to the marketplace. "Cold drink please!" I murmured. "Hey, your back from the mission, is the village safe?" Replied the anxious merchant. "What mission?" The merchant stared at me like I did something horrible. Too bad I will find out what is happening tomorrow...
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 12:11 pm
*Yawn* Getting up is the worst part for me. Waking up today felt like me
drinking heavy last night and had a hangover. I had to take a bath but
from where? I suddenly remember that there is a lake about 3 miles away
from my village. As i started walking to the lake i took one last look at my
village as if i was leaving on a long quest like i always do. The walk was
gonna be long...
Arriving at the lake i slowly put my foot into the light blue water. The
biggest challange of getting into the water for me was to get accustom to i
t. After what seemed like hours of bathing in the water i head back home.
Halfway through the walk i see smoke rising from my village and it didnt
look like it was coming from a couple of huts neither. I started to run
towards the village but my clothes which i swam in were holding me back.
(See, you can't swim in a lake without clothing or else a small creature
called a maver will go up into unwanted crevices) I tore off my clothes and
ran naked to my village. At the very sight of my village the smoke got
bigger. I ran to the entrance where i saw the center part of the village
totally obliterated. Anger rushed through my viens as i ran closer and
closer to the center of the village. At the center of the village there is the
town chief's house and he rarely leaves it. Staring at the reminents of the
house i started sweating... Lightning! It must have been lightning i
murmurred to myself. Realizing that making asumptions isnt the best thing
to do i look for someone to tell me what has happened but find no one in
the village. I decide that leaving the village as well may be the best
choice. At the entrance i spot some figures in the smoke. Scouts... The
scouts start running at me as i run towards them. One of the scouts stare
at me in frustration. One of the scout bellows out " Why are you alive?".
Another yells " your partner is dead from the fatalis, the fatalis destroyed
part of our village, killed our village chief and your here?"
TO BE CONTINUED I KNOW IT KINDA SUCKS LOL
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 12:48 pm
Oy, the dudes nekkid. That must be a little awkward, no?
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:35 pm
Akito Uchiha Oy, the dudes nekkid. That must be a little awkward, no? i just remembered that it MUST have been awkward i like the story though
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:33 am
pretty good probably left the protagonist feeling guilty as hell but what I want to know is why he didnt remember when he took the mission
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