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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:02 pm
Taken reference for characters! Jude SkyesHayley ZachariasDanny HarrisonPrelude It was dark. Too dark to even see the grooves of the wall I was enclosed in. The only light came from my glow in the dark watch, but I could hardly see the time since it was draped over the table in the corner. I knew it was a table because of the illuminating light my watch gave off. It was a circular table, with three legs in the middle. Not very big, but big enough to seat three people. And that's what it was doing. They completely ignored me, other than glancing to see if I was still tied to my chair. Like I could even sigh if I wanted; my chest was going numb. My wrists hurt, my arms were cramped and my butt was sore from sitting for so many hours. Even my eyes hurt. I did not want to sleep; if I slept, they would move me, and I didn't want their hands on me again. "So what are we going to do with her now? They know we have something to do with it." A man with shoulder length black hair gestured to me with his left thumb. I pretended to sleep, but I strained my ears. I knew they looked over at me then because I could hear their chairs screeching against the concrete floor. It was all I could do from trying to cover my ears; I hated that sound and they did it constantly. "The cops already checked out Barty. Sam and I have to be careful now. What did they ask, Barty?" They turned back, I could tell, so I opened my eyes again. A tall and skinny man looked over at the long haired man. "I already told you, Potter. They came to me at work, asked me if I saw this girl before, told them no and they looked at me suspiciously. Told me to go to court and testify, since we have a witness. I told you I shouldn'ta been the one to grab her! Everyone around there knows me!" I looked at the table again. They were all illuminated by my watch. I squinted to see the time. All I could make out was that it was one something AM. Why can't they leave so I can rest and put my brain back into relax mode? I mean, I've been on red alert since I got here at what? nine AM the previous morning? Wow, had it already been almost a day? It seemed like a couple hours ago I said good bye to Danny after leaving the cafe and was herded. I heard the chairs again but I didn't get my eyes closed in time. The one named Barty yelled. "Oi! She's up, finally!" He came over to me as if he were going to buy a coffee, like he did before following me after work. I already hated his guts. I felt like stretching my leg up and into his crotch but I resisted, knowing what would cost me. "Hey sugar. Had a good sleep?" I just glared at him. I took a breath and retorted to his smiling face, "If I had a good sleep, you'd be long dead and gone and in a hole dedicated to the runts of the family." I had no idea why I said "runts," because this guy was obviously not the runt of the family, but I apparently touched a couple buttons. He slapped me. Hard. I could practically feel the blood rushing to the spot. I could feel the hand mark embedded into my face. "Stupid b***h. Don't you ever insult me or my family. You hear me?" He grabbed a handful of my hair and hit me again, but this time like he was getting a dog to listen when told no. I would never tell him or the other two asses how much the hair grabbing hurt. Never. He leaned back and hit the side of my head again. Then he caressed my sore cheek as if I were his lover. "Never again, my sweet." That's when I kicked his little friend. I spent the rest of the night in the cellar practically bleeding to death. My lips was cut and my eyes were swollen. My arms were even more sore than before and my crotch hurt like Hell froze over. I was sweating and was lying down beside the table. I wonder if they'll let me have clean clothes since my other ones are covered in blood, sweat, tears and something else I know I'd rather not know.
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Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:51 pm
part one "What do you mean by 'I don't need you to know'? You tell me everything!" I couldn't take it anymore! Hayley and her nosy-ness! Why couldn't she just shut up when I told her to? But no, she had to pester me about why I was so basically brain dead the whole school day. Ugh. I just do not understand how she can talk so much without her brain registering every second word. Oops, I think I just insulted one of my best friends. At least she knows. "Jude! Answer me, man! What do you mean?!" Jeez. Hayley has sleek brown hair and shockingly blue eyes. She's very pretty and has absolutely no flaw to her appearance. Her nails are like every other top girl in school; claw-like. Apparently that's the new fad of the month. She wore a pink sweater on top of a flannel t-shirt and a mini skirt. To be honest, she looked gorgeous. Me on the other hand ... Let's just say that my blond hair and green eyes don't even come close to her. "I mean what I said, Hayls! I don't need you to know! I can't even understand it! Jeez, stop trying to gossip me." That's when I hit her button. "Okay, Jude. You know I do not gossip my friends. We have been besties since kindergarten and have I ever gossiped you?" "No, but you've gossiped about Danny." And on queue, Danny caught up and put his arms around us. "Well speak of the Devil and the Devil shall come." We laughed; Danny was known for popping up at unexpected times. Danny is very sweet and kind. He's also good looking. I think I surround myself with good looking people to forget about my own ugliness. Even though Danny tells me I'm hot, I know he thinks Hayley is hotter and I agree. I am very self conscious. But still, he tells me I am good looking. Everyone says I am, I just don't want to hear it. Danny has very soft black hair and smoky gray eyes. his body is fit and muscular and his mouth a bit big. But that's what is great about him. He was wearing jeans and a plain black t-shirt. I feel so left out. I was wearing a black sweater and tight jeans. Danny always said we just ironically match without seeing each other. I find it kind of funny that we dress correspondingly, but it's sorta awkward when you have people asking you secretly if we're going out. We are just friends. Get it, got it, good. "So Hayley, Jude, you both coming to the party?" He did a little jig and put his arms back around us. To the untrained eye, another person would think Danny was a player. But he was the opposite; he was a sweet, caring guy that wrote poetry. No cliche there. He is very talented writer and artist. Many who know him like in school or at work have given him money for one of his paintings. Even I have one and I'm not that big a fan of art. Other than sketching, but I really suck at painting and other things. I usually do portraits on charcoal pencil; Danny uses paint brushes and is absolutely a God when handed one. Hayley nodded feverishly. "Well, why not? We are so obviously coming! Who isn't?" Then she looked at me with guilt in her eyes. "Sorry Jude. Are you coming, though?" I nodded and she nodded feverishly again as Danny laughed at her. "Yes, we are coming. I am coming, well, because Kristopher is hosting!" Oh yes. Kristopher Johnson is Hayley's latest boy toy. It's really quite annoying having your best girl friend dating the most popular guy on campus. He's the typical popularity guy; glossy black hair, big arms and the captain of the football team. However, Hayley isn't even close to being a cheerleader if you count out the gossiping brain and hot body. But yes, she tried out and failed; her hand-eye co-ordination sucks almost as bad as mine. And I fall every second step practically. "All right! So, I guess I'll pick Jude up at, what, seven?" We laughed again. Danny usually made jokes like that; but again I'll say he is not a player. At last, we made it to the cafe Danny and I worked at. Hayley worked at her favorite store, Jennings. It was a shoe store, jewelry store and clothes store all at once. Think Walmart, except without the over exaggerating shelves and more exclusive. Of course, an advantage of being friends with Hayley was being allowed in top secret stores. Danny and I said good bye to Hayley as she waved and went across the street to Jennings. We talked for a bit before starting the shifts. I was a waitress and Danny was the cashier; we were practically the only people working other than the manager who had eyes and ears like a hawk and another boy with bad acne and a stubble that looked weird. He kept looking at me strangely. I don't like him and neither does Danny, though I think that's because the acne-dude asked me to the dance the other day. Hayley had a laugh when she was told why Danny was tenser and paranoid. All me and Danny had to do was wait out the five hours until we go to the party.
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Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 2:00 pm
part two "Hurry up, Jude! This isn't play time!" God, this manager was so infuriating. Why doesn't he become the waitress? He'd do a good damned well job of it, too! But why doesn't he? Because he cares too much for his manager belt. I swear if I ever get my hands on that thing I will throw it into oblivion! "I know! Besides, I am going to leave in five minutes!" I was mad and didn't care. The last of the customers I was supposed to serve was strange. I slammed the plate onto his table and turned to leave when he spoke. It wasn't a complaint, just the start of a conversation. God, I wish I could get out of here. "Hey. It seems like you're a bit bossed around here. Why do you take it?" He was tall and gangly. Well, I assumed since he was sitting, but still, his head was almost level with mine. He had glossy black shoulder length hair and was dressed casually but expensively. This guy must have some money. "I mean, a pretty girl like you shouldn't." That creeped me out. No way was I going to get involved with a perverted rich guy. I just smiled politely and said that I needed the money and turned and went to the back of the cafe before he could comment again. For some reason, my palms were sweating. I noticed it when I took off my apron and set it on the hook. I wiped them on my jeans and took deep breaths. Why was I sweating and getting nervous? Why did I feel like something bad was going to happen? Why did I feel like lying down on the cool floor to prevent myself from shaking and hyperventilating? I was leaning against the chair when Danny walked in to take the last of the empty plates to the sink. "Hey Jude? What's wrong?" I heard him dump the things in the sink and then felt his hands on my shoulders. I took another breath and plastered a casual look on my face. I shook my head and shrugged, telling him it was nothing. All I could do was hope he wouldn't think I was getting hyped up over something or becoming a drama queen with our work load. We left and it was already dark. I noticed the same man I had served watching me, so I turned and pretended I didn't see him. Man, I was shaking again. Good thing it was a bit cold; I didn't have my jacket. Danny ignored that fact the rest of the way. when we finally got to Kristopher's house, it was packed and loud. I saw Hayley dancing with him and smiling the whole time. Maybe she would keep him. Maybe. Danny asked me for a dance as friends and I said yes. Well, who wouldn't? Not only is Danny a great artist, he's an excellent dancer as well. When the song ended Hayley came up to us and told us about Kristopher. Again. ________________ To be perfectly honest, I though Hayley was the type that would get drunk in only two drinks. I was wrong. She was still perfectly right after her fourth. Very surprising, seeing as Kristopher was drunk after three. Danny and I were walking to the subway alone again, since Hayley decided it best to wait until Kristopher's parents got home; he was a hazard to anyone and anything shorter than him, which was almost everything. As we waited for the train, Danny fiddled with his pen and paper - writing a new poem I assumed - and I stared down the long tunnel, waiting. I didn't even notice when Danny was behind me, and when he spoke I jumped then giggled. "Sorry," he said, smiling sheepishly. "Any sign of light yet?" I shook my head. "Fine. I'll look at the times on the pole over there. Call me if you see light." I nodded and shoved my hands in my pockets. I didn't notice that Danny and I weren't alone in the station. It was maybe five minutes before I noticed him staring at Danny and then shifting his gaze to me constantly. I couldn't see his face, thus I did not know who he was. All I could see was his hood moving from side to side, staring. I ignored him, thinking he was just wondering why we were out so late. I shrugged it off. Well, until I felt a pair of hands on the small of my back. I thought it was Danny, turned to tell him to quit playing so close to the edge, but was a bit late as the pair of hands suddenly shoved me forward. I hit the ground. Hard. I could feel my twisted ankle growing, but I didn't move a muscle. I stared at the yellow line before me, praying at once to God - whom I didn't really believe in - thanking him with all my heart that I did not land on the yellow streaks. That would be even worse. Let's just say I'd be a fried chicken if I did. I didn't register the fact that the metal beneath me was shaking until Danny appeared above me suddenly and yelled my name. I looked at him, dazed, surprised at what just happened, and then looked to my left side. That's when I saw the light. All I could think was Oh my God, oh my God, I am going to die. I am going to get run over by a train and I am only sixteen. Oh my God, oh my God. The hairs all over my body raised as my body didn't listen to my brain. It was shouting for me to roll under the groove of the platform, but my body was now disconnected with my mind. Mind and body always have to be together. Oh my God, I am going to die. That's when my body reconnected with my brain's voice and made me lie down and roll for my life. I managed to get myself under the platform just as the wheels squeaked to a halt where my head had just been. I knew then that Danny must have done the first thing he though of; touch the bright red button for the electricity to stop. I heard angry and annoyed voices, but the only one I focused on was Danny's. "No! She fell onto the tracks and was almost run over!" I heard him shouting into the intercom as the bells of the train told me that the doors opened. I heard another voice, closer, mixed with Danny's. It wasn't the intercom. My body was its own again. I was cold and didn't even know my own name. "Excuse me, young man, but what seems to be the problem? My passengers are restless that the electricity has stopped the train." The driver was a man I could tell. "My friend! It's my friend, she fell onto the tracks! Jude! Where are you! Are you OK?" I found my voice, but it was just audible enough for him to hear over the edge. "I'm OK ... I guess ..." I heard his sigh of relief. I was soon taken from under the platform and my foot was placed in a cast for the sprain. I was sitting on the bench beside Danny when Hayley, my dog and my parents walked in, all with worried and frightened faces. Well, this couple weren't my real parents. My biological parents were supposedly only sixteen years older than me. My mother was sixteen when I was born; she and her boyfriend, my dad, had gotten carried away and produced me. I could only say silent thanks to my mother for not listening to other people to get an abortion. My life has been the best. I've even met my real parents; they are nice and funny and know how to be cool. My father is really good looking and my mother is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. The only one that compares to her is my foster mom. Anyways, they all came in and my mom and dad spoke to the police, wanting to know every little detail. I knew I was going to go through the same interrogating when we got home later. Sigh. Hayley came up to Danny and I with Jasper, my Labrador puppy, all white faced and scared. For once in my life I saw her true self; she wasn't a sneaky gossip; she was my best friend.
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 12:14 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:13 pm
x x t o k o m ii k o x x Chronicles of Lyra Syrsalla
Story one
Prelude "You're late," a silky voice said, his figure moving in the shadows. A lighter voice answered, it's feathery smoothness enough to caress any worries. "That is only because of the idiotic mortal ways of transportation. If I was aloud to run -" "No." The single-syllable word had enough malice to last for a whole paragraph. The light voice didn't speak again, and neither did the silky one. After a moment of awkward silence, a man walked out of the shadows, his eyes hovering over the woman opposite him, obviously enjoying the sight. The woman scoffed, her voice hard and cold. "If you only wished to see me because of your ... your ... your sick 'sight-seeing,' then I will take my leave now. Good day, Lazarus." The woman turned, hiding her figure from the prying eyes of the man. The man's brows pulled together as if he had been physically injured by those simple words. "No ... Don't go, my love ... " Those were the magic words. The woman turned, folded her arms and walked slowly to her lover. "If word gets out, then we'll both be in danger. I know you are still wanted for that attack on that insignificant human girl. Why, Lazarus? Why did you do that to me? Of all the times you had said those three words ... I thought you meant them. But I was foolish enough then to believe the words coming out of a lying, cheating demons mouth. I was young, and you swooned me. I know you just wanted me because of my looks, because my father can kill you whenever he wanted because of all the mistakes you have made, and the danger you have created for all of us. "You wanted me, not out of love, but out of the mercy it gave you. You figured that if you were with me, I'd defy my father if he ever set a hand on you. But now I know that those words were just the catch. You kept reeling me in, Lazarus, with those words. I was too young then to see that they were emotionless. "You broke me, Lazarus. You broke me to pieces when you never returned when you said. I knew then that I was just a prop; a prop for you to not get killed. Then you came back after three hundred years. "Three hundred years! Those years were the darkest I've ever had! You demon! You coward! How could you do that to me! I thought, 'He left me. He never wanted me! He's the coward! I should have let him die at the hands of my father, and then laugh as his head rolled onto the ground at my feet; where he belonged!' But no, I stayed where I was. But I should have let the guards keep you! I would have laughed at your desperation. "But yet you return. You dare to show your face to me again. You dare to send word to me via a songbird. If that wasn't my calling, I would have burned it as soon as it came into view. But it came. It came and showed me your letter. I was furious. How could you dare to have sent a message to me after all these years! But yet you knew; you knew I've been waiting for you. You knew I have been waiting three hundred ears for a whisper of your whereabouts! You knew you had me wrapped around your horns, around yourself! All those nights were lies, weren't they Lazarus?" The man cowered at the woman's fierce words, as though they were slicing him with every syllable. As if he was getting lashed at with a whip instead of the venom that came out of his fiancee's mouth. "I loved you. I have always - " " You have never loved me! How dare you even say that you have truly loved me!" At this point, the woman had caught her words in her throat; the desperation she had to not start sobbing. She had loved him, and does love him still. Why? Because she knew. She knew deep down he meant those words. He was just too much a filthy liar to admit that. She was standing over him now, her eyes flaming, her nostrils flaring with each intake of breath. "Lyra, my love. Please forgive me. I know I have hurt you too many times to get you back, but I will beg. Please, give me one last chance. One last chance to prove to you that I'm not just an old demon." He had crawled to Lyra, his hands at the hem of her skirt, climbing his way up her body. "I have given you too many chances ... " With that, Lyra shook herself out of Lazarus' grip, and hurried off. At the red gates, she stopped and looked back, her left foot less than a centimeter away fro the bright red light. "Good bye, my love." And she stepped into the gas liquid light, her last words bouncing off the cave walls, leaving Lazarus to wither away in betrayal.
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:18 pm
x x t o k o m ii k o x x War Is My Past....Blindness Is My Future.... Okay. So, this story is about a young scholar who unfortunately had a destined accident. As she endlessly tricked the most popular woman in school, the joke ended up to be on the trickster. As she was beaten in the midst of the night, she soon found out that the popular woman took her eyes. Now blinded, the young woman faces a life through strength, downfalls, love, hatred, and destiny.
The young woman who's eyes were stolen is named Eve Manchester. She is beautiful, but not as beautiful as the thief, and her name is Melina. As Melina and her 'crew' left Eve for dead, she (Eve) found out she was thieved of her eyes. As the days, months, and years past since that faithful day, Eve's been having trouble with getting to be accepted. Blindness is not her weakness.
I would also like it if any of you who like this story, and are willing to help out, please via PM me some of your ideas to me with the title of 'Blindness is not a weakness'. I would appreciated it if you would. surprised Name+ Eve Manchester Age+ Eighteen Occupation+ High School / College Student Weakness+ Blindness Personality+ Calm, sweet, and collective. Eve takes nothing for granted and enjoys company, even if she doesn't get it often. Being blind is not her favorite thing, but she has learned to cope with it. As she progresses with her accident, Eve continues to struggle with school, as she has to cope with being alone. Being blind also has its advantages. Things like being helped out a lot, and getting out of gym. She likes to be treated like a normal person, instead of someone who has an affect. Unfortunate Events+ Eve has been through a lot. It would be a lot to take up this whole page. But what I will tell you is that she has been blinded by a young woman her age named Melina. As she walked home late one night, Eve was ambushed and taken into an alley, then beaten almost to death. As she was left for dead, Eve learned that her eyes were taken, but nothing will slow her down. Family+ Mother (Marie Manchester) Father (Bilius Manchester) Brother (Jackson Manchester) Looks+
 Name+ Melina Crosswurth Age+ Eighteen Occupation+ Waitress at 'The Open Cup' / High School + College Student Weakness+ Cruelty Personality+ Melina is often cold and mean to others she doesn't like, but she's awfully nice to her 'posy'. She's cold but is very smart, and her trust is often her downfall. Though she is ruthless, she does have a soft spot. Unfortunate Events+ Melina's family is, well, very cruel to her. Thus, the high self-esteem and coldness around people. She's distant because her family pays no attention to her, which she takes with her to school and draws attention to herself. She's always weary around her father because he constantly shouts at her and her mother. Because of this shouting, Melina closes herself off from the dreamy world and searches for comfort within her dreams. Family+ Father (Mark Crosswurth) Mother (Samantha Crosswurth) Looks+
Name+ Skye Melliya Age+ 19 Occupation+ Waiter at 'The Open Cup'/College Student Weakness+ Faith Personality+ Happy go lucky Skye is, well, always happy. He's protective and does everything he can for everybody, especially Eve. He helps here, even if she argues. He's loyal and a good friend. Unfortunate Events+ Skye came from a poor family, but gets along just fine. He's spoiled, but he doesn't really use the things he gets from his wealthy mother. He acts like a normal teenage kid in College, hanging out with his best friend. But when he found her alone, something on her head, he knew something was wrong. And that was confirmed when she told him her unfortunate event. Since then, he's vowed to help her through her troubles, and has been doing so for years. Family+ Mother (Sally Melliya)
Step-Father (James Melliya) Step-Sister (Jenna Melliya) Looks+ +Will update as story progresses ^_^+
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Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 9:20 pm
x x t o k o m ii k o x x Part oo1 / Chapter oo1 The Truth... Eve Manchester listened to the screeches of car tires along the streets. Glancing at her watch, the girl sighed as she saw how late she was. 11:30 pm. Way past her curfew. Sure, she was eighteen and making her way through her last year of high school. Well, having a pair of over-protective parents don't help that image. Snapping back into reality, Eve looked straight ahead of her, not aware of a group of unknown people stalking her. "Mother's going to kill me." Eve said quietly as she crossed the intersection. Running the rest of the way, for the light had turned yellow, Eve flattened her shirt. At the exact same moment her hands left the fabric, a pair of soft but cold hands grabbed her; one covering her mouth, the other around her waist.
Sweat trickled down the back of her neck as she struggled. Eve was let go at last, but only to be hit and knocked down onto the dirt ground. Coughing up the dirt in her mouth, Eve opened her eyes to a pair of frilly pink boots. Wondering who would wear such things while abducting, Eve's head was pulled up by her hair painfully, and she looked at the owner of the boots. Melina. She should have known. Now, I know what you are thinking. Who the hell is Melina? Well, Melina is the nastiest girl you would ever meet. She looked almost like Eve, but much more prettier and popular. The beauty on this creature was overwhelming, and Eve had pulled never ending pranks on her, envious of her life.
"Taking a midnight stroll, are we Eve?" The velvet voice asked as if she hadn't just nabbed at another persons hair. Without waiting for a response or hesitation, Melina and her 'posy' began attacking Eve. They kicked, punched, grabbed, and even spat at the lowly girl. At last when Eve was covered in her own blood and had several broken bones, the group laughed evilly. "Have a nice trip, Eve." Melina's voice called to her from a distance. Eve could hear the scrambling of their feet, running away from her. Eve coughed up blood as she turned onto her back, and opened her eyes to see the sky, but saw darkness instead. Panic rushed through her body as she blinked numerous times, but still, darkness. Fear on her face, Eve lifted her undamaged hand to her face, and searched for her eyes.
As her arm lifted, pain shot through, and Eve knew instantly some of her ribs were broken. Her sweaty hands met what Eve feared most. As the warmth of her blood touched her nerves, the thought came true. Instead of what she should have found, Eve found nothing. She tried to cry as her arm fell to her side again, but the only wetness she felt was her warm blood, spilling from her cuts. She wanted to scream. She wanted to scream for her parents, wanted to apologize for disobeying. But instead of thinking of a great apology, Eve thought what would be horrifying. My eyes are gone.....x x t o k o m ii k o x x Part oo2 / Chapter oo1 Facing the Guardian As the night continued on turning into day, Eve eventually stood up and walked to the empty streets. She had already ripped a piece of fabric from her shirt and wrapped it around the empty eye sockets. Her hands guided her as she wandered around the streets, trying to find her way home. The only people left out on the streets helped her cross the many streets, but never stuck around to ask her why she was out this late at night, and why she had blood all over her. But as she was waiting for the ding of the last set of lights, Eve heard a far too familiar voice call to her. "E-Eve? Is that y-you?" Asked Skye, Eve's best friend asked her. "Skye? Where are you? I can't see! Melina took my eyes..." Eve called out. Goosebumps covered her as the familiar warm hand stroked her skin and guided her to him. Fear was in his voice as he spoke. Eve could feel his hands shaking against hers, waiting until he was calm enough to speak. "What happened...?" He whispered in Eve's ear. As she was then guided to sit on a stool by a coffee shop, she told Skye what had happened. "I hope...I hope this won't--" Eve was stopped by the sound of her friends voice; he knew what she was going to say, but stopped her before she cried.
"It won't. Nothing will." Skye's voice soothed Eve, but they were both still shaking in the cold night. Eve was smiling, but facing the road, afraid to face him, scared he might turn away from her face, even though she couldn't see him. Instead, Eve sat there silently, remembering Skye. She missed him, even though he was right beside her, stroking her light hair. She missed his so much. His glowing eyes, the smoothness of his face. The flaming hair, the softness of his smile. She'll miss it all, for she will never ever see his face again. His beautiful face is shattered in her mind. All she will remember is the face of a boy. When they grow up, that's all she'll ever remember...
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