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The welcomed and the forsaken (poem) (rate and advice)

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Dasuto

PostPosted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:06 pm


The welcomed and the forsaken

Death has welcomed me
Where life has forsaken me
As I look ahead, I fall behind
Is it true that justice is blind?
Are my emotions a gift or a curse?
I walk in the rain as I follow my hearse

Love is forsaken, only hate remains
Heaven and hell had me locked in chains
If I become free, death will surly follow
My heart has long been hollow
Darkness fills me to the rim
The outlook is really grim

The night has embraced me
Death is my gift you see
Doom falls now on the ones I once feared
My conscience remains cleared
All shall fall to my despair
My laughter fills the night air
PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 1:11 pm


Ya know what: there is nothing to fix! It's really good rhythm and rhyme^^

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Dasuto

PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:00 pm


thanks ^_^
PostPosted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:13 pm


Welcome^^

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