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 Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:37 pm
Still a work in progress, well i am quite happy with this piece and happy with the style. In Future i am going to draw in this style. This piece is of two lovers one who is human (The man) the other who is not of this world (The women) but their love was forbbiden. He was killed for his love, while all she as left is a baby growing inside her, a necklace and his memory. Hope you all like so far, feel free to comment but don't be rude http://fleshfiend.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:16 pm
I like your style.
The only critiques I have are that the man's eyes look a little cross-eyed (or looking in opposite directions, rather) and the woman's face is rather wide for that angle. The left side (her right) should come in more, and the left (her right) eye should have a tilt to show the perspective.
Other than that, good job! The story sounds very interesting too.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 4:20 pm
Raiena-chan
I like your style.
The only critiques I have are that the man's eyes look a little cross-eyed (or looking in opposite directions, rather) and the woman's face is rather wide for that angle. The left side (her right) should come in more, and the left (her right) eye should have a tilt to show the perspective.
Other than that, good job! The story sounds very interesting too.Thank you for the advice dear much appreciated, i will keep that in mind. I am also glad you like the story with the piece. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 8:19 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 8:24 am
Awwwwwwwwww emo sad story...but very nice! 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:00 am
Dagger1819 Awwwwwwwwww emo sad story...but very nice! 3nodding Yes it is was feeling down when i started drawing this, so a sad story had to go with the piece. Also thank you i am glad you like the piece and the story 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:02 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:07 am
I love how you drew her clothes/armor and the details of the necklace <3
The only thing I see besides what was already mentioned is that her hand (one holding the necklace) is a little weird looking. Maybe if you show the thumb a little more and add some shading to show the knuckles, it'd look better.
Anyway...I like how you drew the man's face, also. Very masculine x3
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 10:12 am
Ziggehs
I love how you drew her clothes/armor and the details of the necklace <3
The only thing I see besides what was already mentioned is that her hand (one holding the necklace) is a little weird looking. Maybe if you show the thumb a little more and add some shading to show the knuckles, it'd look better.
Anyway...I like how you drew the man's face, also. Very masculine x3Thank you for the advice and yeah i will work on that hand and what everyone else as said. Also thank you i am glad you like the costume design, necklace, and the mans face/masculinity and yeah i think men have a much better look when they don't look to feminie. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:40 pm
Ah this is where my post went...
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