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 Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:30 pm
I want it flat out. Just tell me. What is wrong with this picture & tell me what I can do to fix it. :>
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:43 pm
Definantly the length of the arms, on both... The male, his seems like it was twisted all the way, unnatrual. Maybe too much fat, make him more muscular if you want to keep that amount on his arm, the girl's pose with her arms. What's up with that? But it's better than I can do. ^^ I hope I helped a little? sweatdrop But general idea you have is really nice.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:46 pm
xDD I don't know. I just make random...poses with arms & stuff. But thank you for the critique~! 8D Very needed, indeed.
&& you helped. A lot. THANKYOU. <3
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:54 am
i like it alot but i think the eyes are sort of strainge..
meh jus my opinion though sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 8:43 am
Oh, the eyes? I was using a similar style to an artist I watched on dA; her's looks better than what I try to do. xD
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 9:56 am
This is really nice, the only thing that seems to need to be fixed is the guy's arm. The best way to describe it is probably that it looks kind of.. floppy? I think it's just the lower part of the arm, it seems to curve a little bit to much. But other than that, I think it's a great picture. I really like those eyes on the girl too.
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:56 pm
Okie dokie then!
The guy's wrist should be narrower, his torso could also be longer
The girl's eyes should have that little light bubble and she should probably have that cornea looking circle thingy... O_o
or is it a pupil?
They both don't have eyebrows?
Other than that I like the smile. It's cute. LIKE THE GRUNNY!!! XD
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