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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:36 am


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Last year, during the SuWriMos, I started my biggest and most challenging project yet. It was to be a trilogy of novels working within the Fantasy genre (which I'd never really worked in before) with Magic and world-building - everthing that I had before been too scared to try. For most people fantasy is the first and easiest genre, for me it was like jumping into the deep end of a very cold lake.

Last summer I took the leap and found myself swimming. For a while it was scary, but I got myself going. Now I'm working well, and this year I've been working on the second novel in the trilogy. In the summer I also hope to both begin and complete the third novel.

In the trilogy entitled Exos: The Blonde, The Bad and The Artificial the novels were to follow the lives of three women in an attempt to understand the power of assumptions in ruining lives, and the delicate balance needed to keep a friendship steady. I wanted to question my readers, and so in That's The Beauty of It (the first novel, formerly titled Purple Mist) I attempted to explore the dangers of misunderstandings and the perception of reality.

In this second novel I'm attempting to look at the close relationship between friends, and how fragile that can be. I'm also hoping to impart a little moral message, but, hey. Who knows if that'll work? I'm currently (as of the end of May) getting towards the end of this novel, but I figure I might as well have this thread up here since I won't be writing much on the novel between the creation of this thread and the beginning of the SuWriMos due to exams. I'll probably post up little excerpts here and there, since there's no point putting all of it up, but if you read them I'd be really grateful if you'd give me some feedback. :]

Synopsis (or thereabouts): Medina had always had trouble in life. This was partly because of the colour of skin, which was a sickly purple and feared by many, but mostly due to her prickly, defensive nature. When she and her sister travelled to university in Itur City, she thought it would be the perfect chance to start afresh. Little did she know that her new life would be filled with cruel intentions, dishonesty, and obsession, and the sisters Ellette and Calina Roe would be her downfall. Murder, suicide and treason soon followed, and she found herself scared, alone, and wishing for the life she had once known. But, of course, that was impossible.

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124,oo5 / 1oo,ooo+ words. (We're: behind schedule on schedule ahead of schedule! =D)



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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:37 am


Characters

A list of characters always comes in handy, especially when you need to remember names of people that you've only used briefly. There's nothing more annoying than having hundreds of Bens, Bobs, Bills and Janes. =P

Medina Thurr - Main character (Protagonist)
Azaliah Thurr - Medina's sister
Ellette Roe - Main character
Calina Roe - Main character / Ellette's older sister
Madame Delehan - Head Mistress of Itur University
Nurse Annoa - The robotic 'Nurse' group chaperone for Calina, Ellette, Medina and Azaliah
Endara Jensin - Society girl, slightly richer than Calina and Ellette. The richest girl to have a Nurse chaperone, (shares a room with her sister and cousin)
Renani Jensin - Endara's younger sister
Vanora Jensin - Endara and Renani's cousin
Melliana - The Thau's corrupt receptionist
The Thau / The Wise Man - The ruler of Exos.
Iguan - Talking Big Cat
Miaan - Member of The Radicals, thief
Danus - Member of The Radicals, Miaan's twin, member of The Guard
Jackis - Member of The Radicals, sometimes bouncer
Luseo - Member of The Radicals, gangster
Farcia - Member of The Radicals, ex-exotic club dancer
Neon - Purple leader of house in West Kallippe
Nor - young purple ex-reporter, W.K.
Sassie - woman in house in W.K.
Molly - safe-keeper of Karajack
Jenkins - husband of Molly


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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:38 am


Unfamiliar words/terms

It's a fantasy. There's bound to be something people won't understand- but actually, again, this post is more for my own benefit. If I create some kind of creature, colour, race, or material etc. I'll definitely be wanting to keep them written down somewhere so I don't forget. Sounds silly, but it's the kind of thing I'd do. Maybe it'll enlighten you guys as well.

[+] Sheeyma (She ' mar) - A silk-like material made from the Sheeyma plant which only grows in the Eula deserts. Fairly rare and reasonably expensive, the material is soft to the touch and when starched can range from slightly toughened to 'rock-solid'. It comes in all colours, but blue, white, pink, and light purple are the most common since these colours take much better.

[+] Thau - The new ruler of Exos is refered to by many as the Thau. This is a shortened form of Thaumaturge, which means 'One who practices magic or sorcery'. He is said to be very powerful.

[+] Hydeinem (Hyde ' en ' em) - A small climbing flower, ranging from a light dark blue to a light purple. It likes dark roots, damp rotting wood and is seen in its rarest form when it is the striking indigo. (NB: The bolder colours are more rare because the sun tends to bleach the colour from the plants where they grow.) It grows most commonly in the damper areas around the Kalippe lakes and the Itymnur Springs.

[+] Aeveism (Aay 'vism) - The majority religion of the masses until the Thau came to power. It is heavily revolving around the Goddess Aeve who was said to be a Fairy Queen travelling from world to world and blessing all with the gift of life. There is little to support this pagan worship but many Exosians still cling to it in the hope that during their darkest hours their Lady Aeve will return to save them.

[+] Lyelett (Lie ' let) - A bird of flight with the ability to speak. Commonly referred to as Pfenick(s) they are purple in colour with tail feathers that fan like that of an Earth Peacock; male Lyeletts have gold edgings to their tails and golden plumes that sporut from their foreheads when they are alert; female Lyeletts have silver edgings and wings- this is how they may be distinguished from one another. They are the rarest form of talking animal in Exos, hunted for the magnificence of their feathers, and protected by only the more religious clusters. The Lyelett was the mascot of the rulers of Eastern Exos before the Thau. In some areas they are now close to extinction.

[+] Nurse - Robotic TickTock creations, made specifically for the purpose of chaperoning young, richer girls without chaperones at the university. They act as a human Nanny would, taking the girls to their lessons and following them when they are outside their lessons at pretty much all times. The girls are not allowed off the campus without them, nor are they allowed out at night. The Nurses are made of brass, have purple eyes and tinny-female human voices. They are also programmed to listen for any talk which could be detrimental to the university's reputation- therefore they are effectively spies for Madame Delehan.


Last updated: 26.o5.o9
PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:39 am


Maps

Exos is a land surrounded on three sides by desert, and on one side by a large ocean. None that have ventured outside of Exos borders have been recovered, whether because they have perished or because they have found better on the Other Side people can only speculate.

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Before The Thau came to power, Central City was two separate entities and government of Exos was split directly down the middle of the world. The city of Itur ruled the East, and the city of Ziranel controlled the West.

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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:40 am


Chapters

I feel bad for not posting anything, since the novel is already nearly finished. But, here's some stuff (excerpts, really) to keep people busy. =D

Introduction: [x]


Daily Progress:

June 16th: 5,625 words written. Novel finished! Rather earlier than expected. Oops. >____o

Last updated: 16.o6.o9
PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 11:42 am


Soundtrack

- Kerry Ellis: No One But You, Defying Gravity, Someone Else's Story.
- Wicked Original Broadway Cast recording Soundtrack: especially The Wizard and I (with Idina Menzel), Defying Gravity (with Idina Menzel), No Good Deed (with Idina Menzel), Thank Goodness (with Kristin Chenoweth), As Long As You're Mine (with Idina Menzel), Popular (with Kristin Chenoweth), For Good (with Idina Menzel and Kristin Chenoweth).
- Idina Menzel: a selection (aka as many as I could find) especially Jealous, Penny, Minuet, Gorgeous, It Ony Hurts When I breathe.
- Kerry Ellis and Idina Menzel: I know Him So Well (Live at the Chess Concert in the Royal Albert Hall on May 12th 200 cool .
- Kristin Chenoweth: If You Hadn't But You Did, The Girl in 14G.
- We Will Rock You Original London Cast Soundtrack: especially Killer Queen, I want It All, Who Wants To Live Forever?, No-one But You, Play The Game, Hammer To Fall, Under Pressure.
- Rent Musical Soundtrack
- Making April: Roses and Butterflies
- Wolfgang: Self Destructive
- Heather Dale: Mordred's Lullaby, Kingsword
- Covenant: We Want Revolution, Pulse, Brave New World
- Eels: Lone Wolf
- Jonathan Coulton: Code Monkey
- KMFDM: Dogma
- Styx: Mr. Roboto
- Trembling Blue Stars: Helen Reddy
- VNV Nation: Nemesis, Perpetual, Arena
- Mountain Goats: No Children
- Scissor Sisters: Return To Oz
- The Fray: You Found Me

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PostPosted: Tue May 26, 2009 8:50 pm


I guess I should post, yeah? =O
PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:55 am


Yes! I mean, I'd like to get this thread all... happy and active? It'll make me feel better about not doing anything. XD

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PostPosted: Thu May 28, 2009 6:04 pm


whee I plan on stalking this story. Sci-fi/Fantasy (I can't really tell exactly what genre this is) isn't exactly my favorite... and that map kind of scares me... but... I will be stalking it. And posting. Are you looking for any specific kind of critique/comments?
PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 3:04 am


It's more fantasy than sci-fi. I don't have the patience to write sci-fi. whee

You're welcome to stick around though. =D I don't really want any criticism on this novel especially, since it's actually almost finished, but once I start the final novel in the trilogy I'd be greatful for somebody to just read it and let me know of any huge errors in style etc. that probably wouldn't get fixed in a rewrite? =] That's if you want to read the third novel, haha.

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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 10:19 am


Those boundaries between fantasy and science are so pesky. XD

I've had the most trouble with the mid-ground stuff, where my fantasy crossed over with industrialization. I think it's a sign I would suck at steampunk. >_>
PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 10:30 am


I don't think I'd be any good writing ANY kind of genre fiction. I can't usually tell what genre I'm writing in because I don't think about it. Next time I might think about things first. xd But, that would require forethought which is NOT something I'm good at. =P

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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 12:54 pm


That's a problem, because I think you ARE writing genre fiction. XP At least, this series strikes me as fantasy, of some kind. Subgenres are too hard to keep straight.

I still want to write monsterpunk at some point. ninja That would be a good thing to write after my series, as it requires very little outside research.
PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 1:08 pm


Nah, this one IS fantasy. At least, that's what I intended. >_o Normally I can't tell what genre I'm writing in, so this time I started with the genre. xd

I think it worked?

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PostPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 8:49 pm


Weren't some of your other books set in an unreal world? I remember something about strange cities. Then the characters and stuff were a little like historical fiction. So... historical fantasy? Fantasy historical? rofl

Or maybe I'm totally off. I only pay the barest of attention to things. XD
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