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~Make Up Break Up~

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PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 10:56 pm


Make Up Break Up
Written by: Hillary

Verse 1:
There's no making up,
When you're breaking up,
I don't want to do this,
Don't want to end this,
I have to stay true to who I am,
Relationships should be give and take,
Ours somehow turned into a big mistake,

Chorus:
You're faking,
I'm breaking, tired of the lies,
It's time to Break up,
I refuse to Make up, with you anymore,
Stop lying to yourself, it's not doing us any good,
You know it's over and we should,
So honey take your time,
I'll be gone by dawn's first light,
Cause we're saying good bye, tonight,

Verse 2:
Every fiber of my being screams for me to stay,
Not sure how to go on my separate way,
I've got to make up my mind cause it's breakin' me up inside,
Break up's are something that happens in life,
Take a deep breath,
And take it in one stride,

Chorus:
You're faking,
I'm breaking, tired of the lies,
It's time to Break up,
I refuse to Make up, with you anymore,
Stop lying to yourself, it's not doing us any good,
You know it's over and we should,
So honey take your time,
I'll be gone by dawn's first light,
Cause we're saying good bye, tonight,

Verse 3:
Not sure how I'll make it on my own,
The world seems scary when you're all alone,
But I can't let my fears hold me back,
Sometimes you have to step off the track,
Head out into the great unknown, it's a risk I gotta take,
Rather than spend the rest of my life regretting a mistake,
We're breakin' up,
And there's no making up,
This time,
I'll find,
Love again,
This isn't the end,
Just a new start,
Baby it's time for us to part,
Break up,
Make up,
Breakin' up again,
Make up,
Break up,
This is finally the end.


Let me know what you think of this song! =]


This song is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivative 3.0 License. http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/us/
PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:34 pm


Very Good I think. It may need a little work on the flow but I'd rate it a 4.5 out of 5 stars. ^_^ I liked it a lot.

cooll666725
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