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 Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 5:30 pm
okay i will be putting some of my rough draft art in here for all to critique
fell free to post your rough drafts here to
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Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 5:32 pm
i don't know whether I should leave her naked or put cloths on her; or what kind of cloths to put on her. I also don't know if I should do the detail in the wings, I think it might take away from the whole drawing. 
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 1:53 pm
looks good
real good
4laugh
when you do the shading and coloring the wings will have all the detail needed.
if i may add when you go to add color to make the stars more like bursts of light rather than stars could bring a new depth to the pic. the flair tool could be nice.but i am an amateur at computer art and this is only a suggestion.it looks great as it is.
her form is perfect and so is the moon.
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 2:35 pm
thanks i drew the moon by hand meaning i didn't use anything to make a circle it was just going to be a doodle but i really liked it and wanted to make something good out of it.
i don't really have any good tools to help me use photoshop sadly i use a laptop and it makes photoshop hard to do so i was going to color it with color pencil but i will make the stars shine brightly.
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 3:33 pm
i like the form of the wings, and the angel face n.n maybe if she has the feet, just a little bit larger, i guess that the feet are small dont you think?
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 3:52 am
I saw this one in the picture post. Very nice. I do agree with KIM_RAY though. the feet should be a little bigger, not too much bigger though.
Also, i think the wings look great as they are, and you should leave her naked. clothes would take too much away from the picture.
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:57 am
KIM_RAY i like the form of the wings, and the angel face n.n maybe if she has the feet, just a little bit larger, i guess that the feet are small dont you think? yea i agree they are a bit small i shall fix them
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:59 am
magister magi kairi I saw this one in the picture post. Very nice. I do agree with KIM_RAY though. the feet should be a little bigger, not too much bigger though.
Also, i think the wings look great as they are, and you should leave her naked. clothes would take too much away from the picture. thanks i did manage to put a simple elegant dress on her though but so far it is only on the rough draft i am doing the final draft on a different sheet of paper i have a small light table so i will see what i like better
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 6:59 am
 um isn't very good but this is it i chose cherry flower cuz my best friend and me like japan in the top in corners i make tatoos (we love tatoos, we want 1 tatoo each) i hope you like wink
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 7:29 am
thats not bad at all i think it is very creative
and i love the flowers in the corners
what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 8:10 am
nice job guys lol ^.^ ill psot some pic's that im drawn in real and a pic that ive edited <3 im new at editing editing but its actually pretty good :O im way better at makeing pixels lol
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Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:03 am
littlecherub512 thats not bad at all i think it is very creative and i love the flowers in the corners what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want my friend want the eye and me the simbol wink
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:13 am
Shynay kuciky littlecherub512 thats not bad at all i think it is very creative and i love the flowers in the corners what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want my friend want the eye and me the simbol wink cool
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:14 am
IvyCrush nice job guys lol ^.^ ill psot some pic's that im drawn in real and a pic that ive edited <3 im new at editing editing but its actually pretty good :O im way better at makeing pixels lol i will be looking forward to seeing them
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 5:59 pm
littlecherub512 i don't know whether I should leave her naked or put cloths on her; or what kind of cloths to put on her. I also don't know if I should do the detail in the wings, I think it might take away from the whole drawing. I think you should add detail to the wings, because that will give the drawing a point of focus.
I also think you should give her clothes, but you should go about it in a very minimalistic way.
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