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Divine_Malevolence

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:07 pm


Parts 1-4: Page 1.
Parts 5-6: Page 3.
Parts 7-8: Page 4.
Parts 9-10: Page 5.
Parts 11-12: Page 6.
Part 13-14: Page 9.
It was a beautiful spring morning throughout Artolia. The previous day’s rain had gone, and the sun shone across the war torn continent. The rain had made battle in the dividing mountains near impossible, and with an end to the rain, came an end to the peace that was so rarely found in those mountains.
Of course, while it meant an end to a temporary peace for those at war, the third nation had a single being absolutely cursing the shine. A young Empyrian noble by the name of Cera had been enjoying the rain, and the fact that it impeded travel. For a scholar had been summoned from Decria to act as a tutor, and from personal experience with the people her father summoned to teach her, she knew it wasn’t going to be fun.
“I’m sure you’ll drive him off soon enough.” remarked Clairene, walking alongside the young noble.
“I’m sure I will as well. But I’d much rather not interact with the Decrian swine. My time could be put to such better use! The new additions to the militia need to be properly introduced, or a fight is bound to break out…”
Cera wanted to be at the barracks interacting with the militia. In all truth, the new additions probably wouldn’t cause any trouble at all. But the ability to interact with a large group of nice people in the sun was a far greater way to spend the day. Much better then in a stuffy library with some narcissistic scholar who thinks women, or perhaps twelve year olds, don’t have any way to know anything without his guidance. She just hoped this one knew well enough not to challenge her to a trading of spells.
The last one who had done that ended up with a three week migraine due to a hex and mental exhaustion. Cera was left eating food a dog would turn down for the duration of his migraine. Odd how her father decided to punish her right off the bat, without even bothering to listen to her side of the story.
“Crimson is attending to them.” responded Clairene. “They’ll be fine. At least until we drive this new guy off.”
“I doubt it will be over that quickly.”
“I know we can make it quick.”
“Clairene!” Interrupted Emilia, who had been walking behind them the entire time, alongside a third guard. “Don’t encourage such behavior. Do recall the last time you two decided to try to make it quick.”
“It was difficult to watch the punishment being handed down to our lady.” said the third.
“Don’t sound so sad, Julia.” Responded Cera. “I can’t imagine your face being sad. It’s the only true beauty I get to look upon, and I’d prefer it to be happy.”
“Yes, My Lady.”
“Julia, her name isn’t My Lady!” Exclaimed Clairene, pushing Julia, “It’s Cera! Why must you keep referring to her as my lady?”
“I’ve found that she harasses me more when I refer to her by name. And I’d much rather be yelled at by you then have Cera sick a group of bandits on me telling them I’ve no clothing under my armor.”
She referred to when they met the bandits that were now the new recruits. The groups they encountered were young and presumably single, and were easily provoked by the thought of Julia’s bare body. Even though they never managed to touch her breastplate as she single handedly restrained all three while unarmed.
“I merely made it so that we could plead self defense,” Cera said, giggling softly. “Don’t think we would’ve gotten their leader to agree to our terms if we decided to attack them first.”
“Then why did you command Clairene and Emilia to stand back?”
“Because I enjoy watching you fight. More when the odds are against you then when both sides are even in number.”
“Because you wanted them to succeed.”
“I admit, you would surely have had a magnificent reaction had they actually ripped your armor off, but that’s as far as I would have let it go.”
“The fact that you’d let it go that far almost makes me glad you’re going to have to meet this guy.”
“Who’s right inside here.” remarked Emilia, who proceeded to open the doors to the library. “Now remember, you agreed to make sure he wasn’t worth the time before dismissing him.”
“And don’t even bring up the Decrian king this time.” Clairene said with a sigh.
“Why shouldn’t I bring up the good-for-nothing lout? He’s a perfect example of the ineptitude of the Decrians.”
“Yes, but what you did was bordering on war mongering.”
The four stepped into the library, and began to look around.
“As I said before, I had no idea that he would go back and tell!”
“Tell what?” came a voice from behind a bookshelf. “Tell of why the Lady Melody is so late to coming to this session? I wasn’t summoned here to have my time wasted waiting for children.”
“No, I just never thought a grown man would be so childish as to run to my father to tell of how badly I embarrassed him. Though…. I guess I shouldn’t have thought a Decrian scholar was capable of anything more.”
“Ah, the tongue of the young lady I’ve heard so much about.” the man said, stepping out from behind the bookshelf. “There’s a running bet of three hundred gold pieces that it can’t be tamed. And I intend to make that money my own.”
Cera’s thoughts had thus far not been proven wrong. The man seemed overly cocky, and had the classic Decrian look about it. He even sported a cape, which was an article that had been truly rare.
“Three hundred?” She responded, eyes fixated on the cape, “That all? Three hundred isn’t enough to get a sane person to even attempt it.”
“I’m sure you’ll learn to mind your tongue soon enough. But, for now, come this way. I must assess what there is to be taught.”
He led her behind the book case where a desk had been set up. Upon the desk was a test paper, a quill, and a lit candle, there for the fact that even though it was a bright sunny day outside, the light didn’t reach this specific part of the room. Seeing naught else to do, she sat to take the test.
After two minutes of the scholar looking over her shoulder at the parchment, she finished, and handed it to him remarking on how easy it was.
“You need not treat someone of my intellect like an uneducated child. I mean, I can understand if that’s the best you can come up with, but to even assume I don’t…”
“This was pertaining to information my king would have difficulty answering. I highly doubt you’ve gotten very many of them correct.”
“Your king?” She asked in response. A smile came to her face, but the smile remained closed. Emilia’s last hour long lecture reminded her not to insult the short fused leaders of the other nations. Though it would take two monarchies to wage a pointless war.
“If you’re going to take longer assessing it than I did working on it, might I have leave to check on some things? I don’t wish to be here for an hour waiting to hear I passed all expectations”
The man was far too absorbed by the piece of parchment to listen. He had a look of surprise on his face which made her think he had come unprepared.
“I’ll take that as a yes. Don’t worry, I’ll be back in a few minutes.”
She then turned to join with her guards by the library entrance. And just before exiting, he came out from behind the bookshelf, still looking at the paper, but not so absorbed.
“In all my years, I’ve never heard nor seen someone with the gall to call the Cera, ‘white winged abominations, created by ogres for the purpose of fooling the world into believing them to be angels’. Do you not know of the magnificent creatures you were named after?”
“I do.” She said, not bothering to turn around. “The Cera are a bunch of white winged harpies, created by the Tolerin ogres. All they do is play the part of angels, ever fooling the world into thinking they speak for the divine. I’m not surprised a Decrian still thinks them holy, after what they’ve been doing lately. Nothing but a bunch of elitist, backstabbing warmongers.” She turned to glance back at him. “Who still manage to pull a veil over the eyes of the cape wearing idiots of Decria. I take back what I said about coming back in a few minutes. You’re obviously not worth it.”
As she turned to exit the library, the man began to charge, fists in the air. He didn’t even notice the strange amount of magical rage she had placed within him.
“How dare you insult the great messengers! How dare you insult me! The great Al…”
He stopped his wild charge as Cera’s guards drew their weapons. He obviously had enough self control to not go running to his doom.
“Please.” Cera commented. “Please, try it. I beg of you. This world needs one less of your kind.”
He quickly straightened himself up. “I…. I don’t know what came over me!”
“Your weak mind couldn’t handle my tongue.” She said, before leaving the library. Emilia was shutting the door behind them as they left. “You’ll never attain that three hundred.”
“Three minutes,” Clairene remarked. “That took a while.”

Within the young noble’s room, Cera changed of the formal wear she was forced to wear for her short session with the Decrian swine, and into more casual clothes. Clothes fitting of a peasant, as they were, perfect for sneaking out of the manor unnoticed.
At the same time, Clairene, Julia, and Emilia were also changing out of their armor. The light blue armor marked with the Melody Crest, the Crest of the elite knights, the crest of Cera’s guard, and the crest of the Female Knights. Emilia’s armor was slightly more decorated, however, with a crown placed upon the final crest marking her position as the leader of the Female Knights.
On the floor already were their armaments. Emilia’s Halberd, Julia’s long sword, and Clairene’s broad sword and shield. Every weapon was also marked with the many crests, same as their armor. And as such, they couldn’t be taken along.
She still wondered why the only three Elite Female knights were commanded to guard a single noble child. How the general could keep three of the greatest soldiers in the kingdom out of the precautionary defensive armies.
No…. She didn’t wonder. None of them wondered. The entirety of the Female Knights were merely given the position of guards. The strongest were placed in the personal guards of the nobles. All because the general didn’t think women capable. If she hadn’t grown attached to Cera, Emilia wouldn’t be able to forgive him. The General. General Marx.
“Have you spoken to the guards at the entrance?” Cera asked Emilia.
“Yes. It’s Chris and Zeke today. They’ve agreed not to stop us.”
“Good,” Cera donned a hood, removing her face from sight. “Such a horrible name to give to such nice people. ‘Bandits’! Ha. The real victims are the rich planters, forcing innocent people out of their homes so that their fields can be worked by goblins. My militia….. Not a true fighting force. Definitely not capable of fighting the horrors of this world.”
And with that, the four set off, looking as little more then a quartet of peasants. Leaving the manor, they walked to the barracks which was only a small ways away. As near to the boarder as they were, forces were needed nearby in case of an unprovoked attacks. Cera had managed to convince Marx to lend her a barracks for her ‘friends’ to stay in. She told her it was a way to avoid having to fight bandits. These…. People. Farmers once, with families. They now lived in a barracks, living merely off the fact they were deemed a militia. But hardly any of them would really be able to fight. Many were too old, many were too young, some too weak. Good thing there was no such thing as too strong.
They were always happy to see her. For as soon as the lookout saw her, he raised the alarm.
“It’s lady Cera!” A large crowd of children yelled, running out of the barracks. “Cera! What shall we do today?”
“I am here for your will. What is it you wish to do?”
“Light up the sky again!”
“It’s not dark enough for that…” Cera said, looking at the afternoon sky. “Once the sun goes down, I’ll put on a show. But, before then, I want to play something.”
The crowd stayed silent for a small while until one child ran up, tapped her shoulder, then ran away yelling ‘Tag!’
And with that, the crowd dispersed, Cera with them. She quickly tagged another child, slightly older than she was.
Emilia then went to find the elders within the barracks. Crimson should be with them.
“After introducing us, the red haired one left to deliver Lady Melody’s message.” said the single elder she ran into. An old man with graying hair, one of the first that Cera had ‘saved’.
“Of course…” Emilia sighed. “Master Cedrick needs not stay away for such long times. Cera needs her brother.”
“And Empyria needs Cedrick where he is. We currently can’t stand up to the brute strength of Toleris and the magical might of Decria. Should one side fall, the other would doubtlessly come after us, and without the weapon that Cedrick is striving to make, it is said we would stand no chance.”
“But-” Emilia attempted to reply.
“You’re turning away from your country because of attachment to the girl…. And here we all thought that duty had rid of your heart.”
“And I thought age had not rid of yours, old man.” She scowled. “How dare you accuse me of not caring for my country!”
“Heh. You’ve changed, from the time we first met. Insulting my age, and not my position now? Perhaps you’ve adopted Cera’s view on us.”
“What’s that to do with anything!? You’re still just a coward who would turn to raiding defenseless people.”
“And you’re still the common knight knowing only what you’re told. You still think me a common bandit. Does that mean you still think Cera a normal child?”
“So now you assume I care not for Cera?”
“No. I’m just amused by the fact you’ve found out who Cera is for yourself, while you still take Marx’s word on who bandits are. Why do you still hate me, child?”
“Not….. I no longer care of what once occurred. I’ve seen no evidence that any bandit is truly evil. But you…. You talk too much.”
“Talking is all I can do these days.” He said with a sigh. “Child-”
“Don’t call me child.”
“Very well then. Knight.” He paused to draw breath. “I’ve finally spoken to Marx. He seemed nice.”
“He talks too much as well.”
“He’s a man that plans, rather then fights. If he didn’t talk, the Empyrian army would fall apart, just like if I didn’t, my fellows would be in a state of chaos while Cera was away.”
“His planning is flawed…”
“He did it to keep you from harm.”
“Is that what he’s saying now?”
“He says he doesn’t want to watch you die in a field, while he can help it.”
“He assumes I’d die.”
“No, he assumes that one of your knights would die. A common man, he doesn’t want to see a woman to take a grave while there are men to fill them.”
“He thinks only men deserve such an honor.”
“There is no honor in death.”
“Not in a common death.”
“Not in an early death. Why do you so wish that you couldn’t live your full life?”
“I don’t want to die.”
“Yes, I know. You don’t want to die. But, at the same time, you fear losing life less then losing worth.”
“What!?” She turned and raised her fist, preparing to strike.
“I enjoyed this.” The man was wearing a wide smile. “Every time we talk, I learn something new. Before I met you, I thought that feeling could only exist in one’s youth.”
She sighed and turned around.
“I hate it. Your pleasure is my pain.”
And with that, she walked off to go look over Cera.
Cera’s game of tag had evolved from simple tapping to tackling, due to the occasional disagreement on if someone had been tagged or not. The children were a mess of red, green and brown, from scratches, grass stains and mud. Cera was no exception. Yet she was smiling wider then one could usually see her smile, so Emilia didn’t stop it.
The game set with the sun, however. Everybody watched it set. And after the sun disappeared from the sky, the crowd gathered around Cera, who had earlier agreed to a performance.
“Which deity should we honor today?” She asked the crowd.
“Serris! Creator of the Cera!”
So, putting aside her scorn for the villainous creatures that had inspired her name, she thrust her hands into the air, and from them, two jets of pure white aether shot into the sky. Once they reached one hundred feet, both jets divided into three, spreading out to the sides and widening to take the appearance of wings. A side product of the split was a large amount of shining dust, that formed into a body in front of the wings. A finishing touch was a third jet of aether, this time red, passing through the figures hand and assuming the shape of a spear. So in the sky stood a glowing white, six winged figure with a crimson red spear in hand.
Afterwards, she was escorted back to the manner by her guards, each telling her she shouldn’t stay too late.
So again, they snuck into the manor attempting to make it seem they hadn’t ever been gone. First order of business upon their return would be to get Cera cleaned up. As it was hardly fitting of a young noble to look so filthy.
However, upon returning to the lady’s room, they saw a figure slumped against the far wall. It was garbed completely in black, and armed with weapons typical of an assassin. Though the real oddity was the cloth thrown over it’s face. And the trail of what seemed to be blood on the wall, apparently coming from it’s head.
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:08 pm


None of the four were thrown off in the slightest. It was a basic illusion, and they all saw it for what it was. They just stood there. Emilia sighed. Cera smiled. Making her hair appear as if blood was a common trick of Amber and Crimson. The one who was supposed to be there was Amber. Yet, oddly enough, there Crimson sat.
“I assume Amber passed the message to you.” Cera stated, walking to the figure against the wall.
It removed the rag with it’s left hand, then grabbed it’s left wrist with it’s right hand. “I gave the message to who?”
“It was given to you.” Cera said, still smiling. “Don’t attempt to fool me, I know for certain Amber has yet to take your habit of grabbing your wrist.”
Crimson looked at her hands. “I… Never noticed that.”
“It’s not the only thing that gives you away,” Cera said before turning to the three knights. “Julia, could you retrieve a container filled with warm water? And Clairene, I’m going to need acceptable clothing.”
“Right away.” both replied.
“Emilia, return to your armor before seeing what plans my parents have this evening.”
“Right.” Emilia replied, quickly abandoning her current garb for the grace of her armor. She didn’t take the time to equip it properly before going on her errand.
“My brother said he would send a stone?” Cera asked, finally turning back to Crimson.
“He sends three,” She replied, pulling three grey spheres from a well hidden pocket within her garb. Each one was covered in white runes in a peculiar pattern. “And a puzzle. I still can’t figure out what it is.”
“That’s easy,” Cera said, taking two of the stones. “He is currently working on controlling the explosion of a certain type of rock. A rock that reacts violently to fire…”
“An explosion?” Crimson looked at her confused. “He’s never mentioned that before. Well, if it reacts to fire, then we need to burn them?”
“Ah, but such a puzzle is unbefitting of my brother. No, only one must be burnt. If another is burned beforehand, I assume the message from the first would disappear.”
“So….. Burn them all at the same time?”
“No,” Cera responded throwing the two spheres in the air. The runes on one disappeared as it landed in her hand. She promptly dropped it and continued examining the other. “This is the one.”
“So…. Burn it?”
“Very well.” She responded, opening her hand and allowing the sphere to rest on her palm. Then, a spark jumped from her hand, and the sphere reacted, breaking apart and sending it’s pieces into the air in flame. As they reached the top of their journey, they changed from red to pink, and slowly fell in much the same way as flower petals would.
“It’s nice.” Crimson remarked viewing the spectacle as a thing of Beauty. Cera, however, was staring intently at it, obviously not taking in the masterpiece.
“A rogue harpy?” She asked, looking at Crimson. “Named Xela? What an odd message to send.”
“Message, my lady?”
“You didn’t see it?” Cera looked puzzled for a moment, before responding with a smile. “You must’ve been enthralled by the distraction. Guh. Why does Cedrick have to put such things into his messages.”
“I still saw no-”
“You must not have been paying attention to it. But, that isn’t important. Tell me what Cedrick said about this being.”
As Crimson was preparing to speak, the serenity of the room was broken by Julia bringing water. With which Cera used to clean the dirt and blood from her skin, before pausing to heal the scratches. Then Clairene returned with a proper garment, which Cera changed into. And lastly, Emilia returned from her errand.
“The lord and lady request that you come to dinner. And bring along the black winged carrier pigeon. They wish to hear of their son’s progress.”
“If they paid as much attention to my hair as my attire, they’d know my name by now.” Crimson responded with a scowl.
“They probably do,” Cera said, leaving the room. “However, just because they know your name doesn’t mean they’ll use it. Ever wonder why all the previous teachers they hired I only called swine?”
“But black winged isn’t as bad as swine.” Crimson said, following shortly after.
“And I suppose you like being called a winged rodent?”
“Pigeon? Isn’t that a common name for a messenger?”
“Not with them.”
The rest of the walk down to the dining hall was silent. As Crimson’s footsteps were naturally silent due to her previous profession and specially designed shoes. Cera didn’t like to be the only one making sound, so she cast a spell to silence all sound around her feet. The few guards they walked by were shocked to see them, as they didn’t hear them coming.
“Enter!” A booming voice echoed from inside the hall before either could knock. Both easily identified the voice as the middle aged lord.
As they entered, they found the lord and lady, sitting at the long table, partaking of the food. Which had only been set in front of them, which gave the impression that Cera was not welcome to sit. And…..
In a corner, a dark figure leaned. Cera couldn’t quite place it, but it looked very familiar.
“If you’re going to hide evidence…” The man started, looking over his daughter, “You should do it well. You over healed your scratches. I can tell where each and every single one was due to the excess energy left over. Not to mention the dirt you failed to remove completely.”
Cera looked down. Crimson looked at Cera. She couldn’t see a single speck of dirt, nor sense any excess energy. And the man was much farther away… Now Crimson knew where Cera’s sensing abilities came from.
“If you’re going to sneak away…” He continued, “You would probably want to avoid putting on such light shows. Or at least put more detail into them. Do you mean to insult Serris with that pathetic display?”
Cera looked down even farther.
“And, finally finishing the things you’ve only done today… If you’re going to cast a hex on your teachers, don’t overdue it so that the energy is still present after the effect wears off.”
“Certainly do.” The figure in the corner responded, stepping into the light and revealing it to be the Decrian swine from earlier. “It causes more nausea then that tongue of yours. Which… Is apparently being held by the cat now? What an interesting change!”
“Silence!” The lord roared, much to the horror of the scholar. “You’ve no permission to talk here, after failing so quickly. My faith is honestly shaken that you were so easily provoked by a badly casted anger hex. And effected so much by it!”
“My-”
“The only reason your banishment from my lands isn’t in effect yet is to send a message. We will not stand for such failures as yourself, such a being that can’t even control a twelve year old girl. Is your entire nation incompetent?”
“N-”
“Don’t answer that. The answer is in the senseless war you continue to provoke. It’s… Truly sad that I can only search for sages in your nation, as the Tolerins don’t have a single brain between them all. And all the Empyrian scholars are at work. So I’m stuck with you and your ilk.”
Cera agreed with him. Quite a bit, actually. Many of her outlooks on the world came from him, as much as she cursed it. The only thing they really seemed to disagree on was the Cera. He loved them enough to decide to name her after them, and yet she cursed them.
Well, in any case, how he treated the ‘teacher’ made her smile. A smile that rarely went un-noticed.
“Don’t get excited, young girl. I’ll tend to your consequences later. For now…” He turned to face the other man in the room. “Leave this manner. Leave this nation. If I ever hear of you being here again, the consequences will be far more dire.”
His reputation was far older then Cera’s. Far older, and far more ignored. The manner in which he responded to annoyances was harsh. The lucky ones got to leave unharmed. The unlucky were, in essence, martyrs.
“Now, Cera. I assume you remember young lady Astel?”
“I do.”
“She’s turning thirteen in three days, and has requested your presence. I assume you can cut the five day ride to two, if you set out tomorrow?”
Cera often enchanted the horses to make them faster. Not healthy for the horses, but it made the ride oh-so-much quicker. And her father couldn’t help but notice.
“I can.”
“Good. And be sure to behave, I don’t want your reputation to become any worse.” the lack of respect in his voice was undeniably present.
“Understood.”
“And Emilia won’t be accompanying you ‘till she learns to wear her armor appropriately.” The lady began, quite peeved. “Had the nerve to speak to us only half decent. What nerve!”
Her mother was aging. Brown hair and blue eyes, like an older version of Cera in all ways other than personality. The older lady was stuck up and jealous, tossing any beautiful woman that approached her husband into jail without a moments hesitation. Emilia…. Hadn’t equipped her armor appropriately, and that allowed skin to show in multiple places. And dear old mother wouldn’t allow that to go with impunity.
“Now, Black wing. What news of Cedrick do you have to tell us.”
Crimson didn’t really have any intention of telling them. Cedrick only wanted it to reach the ears of Cera. Naturally she gave an expression saying very strongly, ‘I refuse’.
“Crimson…” Responded Cera.
“He told me not of his work.” Crimson began with a sigh. “But he did tell me of the current events at the mines. The fighting between nations only stops with the rain, and they’ve began to stretch their war southward. He says they may soon be fighting within Empyrian territory if they continue.
“But, that isn’t all. Apparently the higher worlds are in a state of chaos at the moment.”
The higher worlds were the mountain tops where the Harpies resided. A simple world with little to no food, the normal harpies scavenged the lands for weak or dead food to bring back to their white winged leaders. The accursed Cera that treated their underlings much like slaves. Cera still wondered how the world didn’t see these demons for the tyrants that they truly were.
“He encountered a rogue harpy near death outside of one of the mines. A vulture by the name of Xela. He said she was attacked by Andreas of the Cera, for reason she has yet to explain. Cedrick nursed her back to health and is keeping her nearby for questioning.”
“Is that all?” Lord Melody asked.
“Salg is doing well.”
“I care not of Cedrick’s guard.”
“Then that is all.”
“Very well. You are dismissed.” he bade them exit with a hand motion.
Cera immediately exited the hall, Crimson following right behind her. And, as if by magic, Cera was restored to her usual self, merely because she was away from her parents. It made Crimson glad that she never knew her own parents. She was under the assumption they were all… Evil.
Upon returning to Cera’s chambers, they found only Clairene and Julia, now in night dress. In front of them they had food enough for four. It all looked… Horrible, and probably tasted worse then it looked. Such was the way Cera was punished most often.
So they all proceeded to eat. Choking it down as best they could. Then Clairene and Julia proceeded to lay in front of the chamber entrance, while Crimson sat at the head of Cera’s bed, Cera’s head in her lap.
“Truth is, the harpy found Andreas speaking to a human. And upon spying on them she overheard something of a mass slaughter, that didn’t relate to the war. And was found shortly after, before getting ravaged by the spear and left to bleed to death at the base of the mountain.”
“Those damn higher harpies are nothing if not overconfident. They probably didn’t think she had a chance.”
“The vulture isn’t in perfect condition. She may not be long for this world.”
“She’s in Cedrick’s hands. This Xela will live yet, I’m sure.”

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:09 pm


The night passed like a breeze, leading to an early wakening. Cera was actually looking forward to meeting with Astel. Astel was pure. Happy. Loved. She had not fallen victim to the hellhole that was reality yet. Of course, such innocence it made more fragile with every passing year, and Cera found herself thinking it was only going to be too soon before Astel adopted her mother’s mindset. And Cera wanted to know as much of the innocence that came before that as possible.
Of course, as the horses and carriage were being prepared, Cera had some free time to wander. Julia and Clairene were seeing to the preparations, and Crimson was off, doing what she does. One could only hope she stayed out of trouble in her spare time, but with such abilities, none would ever know.
Cera went to pay Emilia a visit in her holding cell. There was no interaction, as Emilia was asleep, but it wasn’t possible to overlook the many dents in the wall, and occasional broken bar in the cell door, most speckled with blood. Emilia’s hands were cut up a decent bit. Cera made very sure to heal them before leaving.
Then came the ride. A ride that usually took five days, yet one with extraordinary ability could cut it down to three. Cera had cut it down to a day and a half, through combination of performance enhancement and healing, of the horses. She did, in effect, give them magical steroids and cut out the side effects. Yet doing so was a task requiring of much concentration and effort, which always kept her mind busy while traveling.
Julia and Clairene, however, weren’t kept so busy. Throughout the early portion of the ride, they remained only half awake. Julia was tired enough to rest her head on Clairene’s shoulder. Clairene was so tired she didn’t even notice. Cera, who was sitting opposite them, paid them no mind, thinking only of her only true friend in her age group.
Astel. The only person who Cera felt human around. The militia… She felt as though she was an evil puppet master, drawing together the unfortunate and forcing them to live in a barracks. None of them seemed to mind, having been given the choice to avoid the life of a bandit. She was sure she was the only one who thought that way, but all in all, it wasn’t a pleasant feeling.
Her parents thought nothing of her. With Cedrick, the Melody line continued. This was all they were concerned with. Cera had just been an unfortunate bump on the road. Another being to care for, another mouth to feed. They expected everything of Cedrick, and nothing of Cera, and didn’t hesitate to show it.
Julia and Clairene were paid to be there. Clairene was originally in it just for the money, happy to play the part of the mercenary knight. It had taken months to get her to open up, and now she felt like a sister. But her original purpose still slightly bothered Cera.
Julia didn’t really care for the money. The money came alongside the honor. The honor of wearing armor. The pay was insignificant, so long as she could prove her family wrong. ‘They always said a woman would never be in armor,’ she often said. Truth is, she didn’t care much for fighting, only for the honor that it could bring. Julia was overjoyed when sent to guard Cera. Cera was ever so angry at the fact that this was merely because it meant she would have a smaller chance of being forced into a fight. So, on every chance, Cera would attempt to rid her of her armor, or get her into a fight. And it evolved into a habit that she had Crimson and Amber aid in.
Then there were Crimson and Amber. One night, general Marx had been staying at the Melody Manner. He had, at the time, been making decisions that had angered the upper middle class. And one had gone so far as to send two of his personal assassins to rid of the general. Cera sensed them as they passed her room, and stopped them to talk. There she befriended them, even though they both refused to tell her why they were there. To this day they shroud their purpose, even though Cera had known it all along. Even though they were no longer working for the man who sent them, Cera wasn’t very happy they were keeping secrets from her.
Cedrick was her brother. She honestly felt that if it wasn’t for blood, he wouldn’t care either. Far too much time he spent at the mines, refining exploding rock into weaponry. Too long he left her to the mercy of the lords of the house. If not for her guard…
And last but not least was Emilia. Commander of the female knights. Titles galore, she had. One of the greatest warriors in Empyria. Then she was downgraded to the rank of personal guard. She wanted to fight. She wanted battles to be won off her spear, and yet it was all taken away by one decision by General Marx. The outrage was overpowering in the first few weeks. She treated Cera like an enemy rather then a charge. And while the outrage had long since died down, Cera still felt she was a burden to the dreams and ambitions of Emilia. But she’d die before letting it show.
But Astel was different. The first time Astel met Cera, both had no idea who the other was. Astel thought Cera to be of the middle class, and thought no differently of her. Cera was harboring under the illusion that all nobles were like her father. Astel was pleasantly surprised at Cera’s identity. Cera was horrified to find one so pure could have been bred in a similar situation. Since then, they had gotten along fine, calling upon each other more often then any other. Cera was very used to this road due to it.
Julia yawned, breaking Cera’s concentration. And for a moment, the balance within the horses was thrown off, which rattled the carriage violently, waking both Julia and Clairene simultaneously. And so the late morning began with two people being suddenly awoken.
“Cera,” Julia said, rubbing her eyes. “Is that really good for the horses?”
“Yes,” She responded, still attempting to concentrate.
“Of course it is,” Clairene said with a smile. “These horses were bred to run. And they’ve got the advantage of having Cera here. Nothing can go wrong when Cera’s here.”
“But it can’t feel good. … For the horses and all.”
“The horses feel fine,” Cera responded again. “I’m ridding them of any negative occurrences as they pop up, making them faster, better, stronger… Harder even. All in all this is the best work out a horse can get.”
“But how can you be sure they feel fine?”
“By monitoring them closely. In all honesty, I’m doing everything to keep them comfortable short of giving them the feeling that they’re being fed. Which they will attain when it’s time to feed them.”
“It’s funny, though,” Clairene responded, still smiling. “They do so much for us, and all they get is food. … Bad food, in comparison.”
“They enjoy it, though. Giving them more would spoil them.”
“Makes me wonder if we’re spoiled.”
“No, not quite. You have to work that much harder to get that much more. It doesn’t spoil, it gives incentive.”
“Incentive,” Julia responded with a laugh. “No better incentive then getting thrown in a dungeon for doing your job.”
“Mother is easily frightened by beautiful women coming around her man.”
“I didn’t go anywhere near him, and yet every single time out of the three I’ve agreed to speak with them, I’ve been imprisoned. And now they’ve started doing it to Emilia.”
“That’s because Emilia wasn’t wearing her armor appropriately.” Clairene responded, with a low chuckle. “And because you’ve got such good looks about you.”
Julia responded with a sharp look.
“But even more then either of those reasons,” Cera responded, still concentrating, “It’s because of rumor. Rumor that I had a young half sister, named Tet. I’m still wondering if she was frightened more by the fact she might exist, or by the fact her name might not begin with a ‘C’.”
“Driven to such lengths by a rumor…”
“I truly hate that I was imprisoned multiple times because of a rumor.”
“Rumors are annoying,” Cera sighed.
“True,” The two knights agreed.
And so the carriage continued out. Cera concentrating, Julia thinking, and Clairene watching the scenery go by. A nice spring, it was. The constant rain that accompanied the winters of northern Empyria were becoming less common, and flowers were beginning to grow. A few would be blooming as they returned from Astel’s place of residence. It was truly something to look forward to.
At about mid day, they stopped in town to get something to eat. A relatively quick stop, in which Cera was adamant in getting the horses nourishment. The way she had been pushing them, they would really need it. Previous experiences with horses… Dieing… Had taught her to give them a certain amount of care in the very least.
And as soon as business was finished, they set off again. Clairene took to annoying Julia, while Cera continued blessing the horses. The faster the trip, the better. Entertainment along the way…. Was limited, and Julia’s patience was wearing thin. In the mid afternoon, Cera noticed what she realized to be the halfway point. A small town, of little importance, far enough from the greed of the wealthy to be in no danger of losing their lands.
“One town which will never be turned by the hands of the… Noble… to a path of banditry.”
“Truly a blessing,” Responded Julia.
“Heh,” Said Clairene with a smile. “You fear more people joining your militia?”
“My lady does not fear it.”
“My lady has a name. And a want for people to live lives of their own.”
“I’d prefer that the arrogant slobs would not take the livelihood of men, and turn it into the torture of goblins.” Cera responded. “If only all three nations didn’t have their evils about them. The overconfidence of Decria, the mindlessness of Toleris, and the greed of Empyria.”
“It’s nature. The same that binds you to your will binds them to their greed.” Julia sighed.
“My will.” Cera gave a chuckle. “Such a force that dives people the wrong way. It’s…. Impurity, and I’m not exempt from it.”
“One can only learn to live with it,” Clairene said with a smile. “Force it to work for the good of all, rather then one’s self.”
“How I do try…”
“How you do succeed! Cera. Don’t go doubting yourself. The remaining purity in the world is rare, and can’t afford to doubt its intentions.”
“I’m sure Astel goes on without doubt in herself. Knowing no other way, yet.”
“So you’re comparing yourself to Astel?” Clairene asked.
“All is impure compared to her. The gods, even..” Julia remarked.
“Once mortals, who attained power to transcend. They have power, not purity.” Cera responded.
“Must you be so negative of all symbols?”
“Of all but lady Astel Derrice.”
And with that, Cera dropped out of the conversation to concentrate fully on the horses. The place she planned to rest the night at was only a small ways away, and she wanted to get there as soon as possible. So as Clairene and Julia continued to talk, she continued to concentrate. On the purity of Astel. On the pure minds of the horses, who knew not the troubles of the world they were in.
And all to quickly, the sun set. Right on time, as they were passing through a mid sized town. A mid sized Manse held it’s place at the towns edge, single handedly holding sway over the decisions made within the town. But, alas, this was irrelevant as they were just looking for an inn to stay at. And a stable to house the horses temporarily.
“All right. Since I doubt the innkeeper or stable owner will take me seriously, it falls upon you two to set things up,” Cera sighed, getting out of the carriage.
“I’ll deal with the inn keeper,” Julia started.
“No, I think I will,” Clairene responded.
“Fine. Deal with the inn keeper. I’ll tend to the horses.”
“Now that you’ve put it that way….”
“Clairene,” Julia responded, getting ever so slightly annoyed. “Which do you wish to do?”
“It all depends on what you do,” Clairene said with a smile.
“Then I’ll deal with the inn keeper.”
“No, I wish to deal with him.”
At this, Julia got fed up. She drew her long sword and pointed it at Clairene.
“Test not my patience, Clairene.”
Clairene’s grin merely widened at the show. Julia, the reluctant azure blade, drawing her sword first. Not something one caused very often. She wanted to savor it.
“Not your patience, but your sword arm. I’m surprised you can still hold that thing.”
“I can do more then hold it.” Julia said, making a small motion with it to cut Clairene’s cheek. “Want to see it’s limits?”
And with that, Clairene pulled the shield off her back and bashed it into the broad side of the sword, before punching it forward into Julia’s chest. And as Julia stumbled back, Clairene drew her sword as well.
“I do need some exercise,” Clairene remarked, playing with her sword a little.
“Make it quick,” Cera pouted, beginning to feed the horses what she could. They still had a half a day’s worth of running to do.
“Right.” Clairene responded, hurling her shield at Julia’s face, then running behind it as it drew her attention. As it was deflected, she moved to press her cross guard again Julia’s upper blade, forcing it back. And as it was forced back, she placed the blade of her sword against Julia’s neck.
“Earn your pay,” She said, rolling to the side to pick up her shield again, and held it at ready.
“Earn your armor.” Julia responded, running forward and making a slash at Clairene’s shield side. And, though Clairene blocked it with her shield, the oddly large amount of force behind it sent her rolling into a wall.
“Playing…. Like that?” Clairene’s smile was now gargantuan. She threw her shield again, this time with a lot more force behind it. Julia was forced to duck under it. Of course, this time the shield meant very little, as Clairene wasn’t using it as a distraction. This time, as she attacked, she relied on the armor of her gauntlet to grab hold of Julia’s blade, forcing it out of the way before she made a stab at Julia’s face. She moved her hair out of the way, but her sandy brown locks weren’t exempt from the attack. And as Julia couldn’t fight with Clairene holding her blade, she delivered a kick to Clairene’s stomach, forcing her back quite a way and relinquishing her hold on the blade.
After which, she removed her left hand from the hilt, and slid it down the broad side of the blade, causing it to glow blue. She then grabbed it halfway down, and charged forward at Clairene. All until Cera yelled ‘Halt!’
“Clairene wins due to a strike on Julia’s hair. Clairene….”
“I’ll…” Clairene looked at Julia, still smiling. “I’ll tend to the horses.”
And with that, Clairene placed her weapons back, then lead the horses off. And Julia, with a sigh, sheathed her sword before entering the inn. A short while after, she procured a room, and brought Cera inside. To a small room completely unlike Cera’s. A single bed….
“I do hope you’ve brought a comfortable shirt, as you’re to serve as my pillow today.” Cera paused. “And I don’t wish to rest on armor.”
“I’m sure Clairene would be more comfortable.”
“Clairene’s tending to the horses. You’ve got the job of everything related to this inn.”
Julia was void of clothing beneath her armor. And didn’t come prepared with a shirt. So with a sigh, she responded, “You can’t cast off the habit your nurse formed? Just for this night?”
Cera’s look clearly said no. And so Julia removed her breastplate. But not before tearing a part of the bed’s sheets to wrap around her upper body. She would allow Cera to use her stomach as a pillow, but nothing more.
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In the early hours of night, Clairene was returning from the stables, through a town that seemed lifeless.
Well, almost lifeless. She noted a single shadow traversing the building tops. No sound came from it, no real sense to give away it’s presence, minus the fact that the shadows of buildings seemed to be shifting in shape. This much told her she wasn’t alone. But, at the same time, enemies that lied within the shadows were only dangerous to the unaware.
Which meant no immediate danger to the sword’s maiden. Or so she assumed.
“Was that intentional?” Rang a voice from atop a building to her left. Female, slightly angered.
“Of course….” She responded, unsure as to what the shadow was asking about. “The horses needed to be tended to.”
“Not that!” The voice was now to her right, higher, and angrier. “Your little stunt back there alerted the townspeople of your presence. The Manse owner of your presence. You’ve made my job a royal hell today, knight.”
“I can only assume that’s a…” She paused, looking around. “Good thing?”
“To you, maybe,” This time, the voice was coming from directly behind her. But turning around with a drawing slash availed to cut naught but air.
“Not accustomed to dealing with those of the night?” The voice, in it’s original tone, echoed from seemingly nowhere. “Against the masters of illusion; Auditory, and visual?”
As the voice came, a shadow formed from the ground, bearing a gleaming scythe. Clairene didn’t bother blocking it as it swung. The object that was clearly an illusion merely passed through, causing no harm.
“No, but such harmless creations pose no threat in any case.”
And, just as she said this, a hand grabbed her left shoulder, and the cold tip of a blade could be felt against the base of her neck. Under the armor. Pointing down into the torso.
“A distraction can bring no harm,” The figure remarked, “But that does not void it of purpose.”
Clairene elbowed it in the stomach, and it was forced back a small bit. Apparently not in pain from the shot. Clairene then turned to point her blade at the figure.
A tall slender figure stood, pointing a thin, edgeless blade forward. Garbed in black that seemed to evaporate into the night, the only thing one could see clearly was the white of the eyes, the pale skin surrounding them, and the long silver hair that looked akin to a strong breeze.
“I’ve a message for Lady Melody,” The figure said, casting it’s blade into the abyss that was it’s clothing. “Tell her to… Stay pure.”
And with that, the figure disappeared in a flash of blinding light. Clairene, thinking the entire event little more then a dream, continued back to the inn. Where she found the room her charge was in, before curling up on the floor, and drifting off to sleep.
The morning came, with Cera’s head nested between Julia’s stomach and breasts, and Clairene on the floor, above a small bloodstain. Her cheek had still been bleeding when she laid down, and it now showed on the floor.
Cera was the first to stir. And immediately, she noticed the remains of high leveled illusions cast on Clairene. She knew very well such illusions weren’t in Clairene’s possession, and would question her about it when she woke up. But, first things were destined to be first. There was a lake nearby, and she wanted to be clean as possible before meeting Astel.
So she untied the cloth from around Julia, and wrote a quick note upon it. ‘At the lake.’ A quick prank, she was allowed to play on the unsuspecting, no? She only wished she could watch as Julia woke up topless, and inevitably freaked out.
But, regardless, she proceeded to the lake, quick as possibly. Due to it being early morning, she hoped that nobody would be there doing anything, and she could bathe in peace and tranquility.
Such luck, however, was not awarded. In fact, it wasn’t present in the oddest of ways. Three figures were present in the middle of the lake. One was laying within a boat, only visible as it allowed it’s legs to hang outside the boat. The second was splashing about in the water, as if it was drowning. And the third…. Was just sitting there. Meditating atop the water, sitting not on wood, but the lake in itself. Garbed in the robes of a high priest serving under the Cera, hood up over it’s face, casting a shadow that hid it’s appearance entirely. And it was the only thing that seemed to stir as Cera approached.
“Boss!” Cried the one flailing about in the water. “Boss! I can’t do this!”
“Of course you can’t, you mindless ingrate. It takes concentration far beyond what can be expected of a novice.” responded the one in the boat.
The third responded in a whisper, before raising it’s hand. And in turn, destroying a boat with a quick spell, causing the man within the boat to fall into the water as well, before beginning to splash around.
“Looks like I’m…” The figure who was originally splashing around went underwater for a second, before popping back up. “Not the only one without the proper amount of concentration.”
“I said far beyond, not just beyond. It takes a master of the-”
And before the figure could finish the sentence, the one sitting on the water raised it’s hand again, which caused the other two’s heads to explode into a fine bloody mist. And if Cera didn’t find that the life force remained, she would have been very disturbed by this.
The third figure then stood up, pulled two sapphires from it’s robe to examine, then walked over to Cera, across the water.
“Apologies about that,” It began in a very obviously cloaked voice. “They didn’t listen as I told them to be quiet, and the only way they seem to learn things is when their heads get blown off.”
“How is it I still sense them?”
“Those weren’t their true bodies. They merely returned to where they originally belonged.” The hooded figure looked directly at Cera. “I’m attempting to find a way to transplant one beings soul out of a body cursed to destruction.”
“That sounds….”
“Dark? Of the accursed arts?” The figure looked up and began to laugh. “It most certainly seems that way, doesn’t it? But if it’s for the good of the people, how could it possibly be bad?”
“It’s unnatural.”
“Are you to talk of unnatural?” The figure remarked, looking back at Cera. “Because if all things unnatural are evil, then that would make you evil as well.”
“What!?” Cera remarked, a look of shock gracing her face. “What would give you that idea?”
“I sense a power within you that isn’t among normal humans. If I were to…” The figure reached up to hold it’s cloak. “Remove this, you’d sense the same power from me.”
“What power?”
The figure then walked off, removing it’s hood to reveal the back of it’s head. And what had been a previously unnoticeable aura turned into an aura that couldn’t be ignored. One of power, chaos, and a mess of other things. Closest, Cera found, to her own then any other she had ever sensed.
“It’s odd. I had to go through so much to attain this power, and you’re completely clueless about the fact you have it,” The voice, belonged to a woman. “How… Interesting.”
“How annoying.” Came a third voice, from a tree near the lake. “First the entire town stands in my way, and now a fake high priest? Who doesn’t even take the time to note that only men wear such garbs. The cloak of a high priestess is far shorter.”
“And the time of the assassin is night. You’ve no power at this moment.”
The figure then hopped out of the tree, staring the two people down. “Two targets, alone. Why at this time of day?”
“Targets?” Cera looked at the person, confused.
“Don’t ask me why, but you’re wanted. They won’t tell why, or even by who. But you’re wanted.” It kicked the turn and turned to walk away. “Alive.”
As the figure walked away, the priestess placed the hood back over her head, before turning around. Her face was still a mystery.
“She didn’t say anything.” The priestess remarked, again with a cloaked voice. “Odd things have been going on as of late. And the children of the Melody line seem to be at the center of it all. I think I’ve a clue now. Cera… Demons, do you know of them?”
Cera, who was now undressing to bathe while protected by this figures presence, was slightly set off by the question.
“Not a common subject.” She paused. “Beings twisted by dark magic?”
“Beings ever so different then the norm, in a way that people fear.” The figure remarked. “Sometimes twisted by dark magic, yes. Others physically or mentally traumatized. Anything that looks, acts, or feels different… Called demons.”
“Really now?’ Cera was getting into the water, submerging everything below her neck.
“Yes. And, by that definition, I am among their numbers.”
“How so?”
“You are as well. Your aura has been twisted, not by something dark, but something strange.”
Ever since she could sense auras, hers had been that way. Yet, it had always been very different from everyone else’s. And, they all said she shouldn’t have been able to sense such things at her age. They said it was strange… Evil, even. But she always ignored them when they said that.
“Like what?”
“I know of five things that could do such a thing at the moment. Weapons. Deemed dragon slayers. Facts about them are few, but there are five, and they work in odd ways.”
“What do they look like?”
The figure laughed a small bit. “It changes shape and color, according to who wields it. And at the same time, the wielder changes because of it. I spent months trying to find one. I was surprised to see what it looked like. A shining rock, changing into a halberd as I touched it.”
“I’ve seen, and created, a great many shape changing items,” Cera said, looking into the morning sky. Oh so many odd things…. Like, perhaps… “How did you know my name?”
But as she returned her gaze to the place where the figure had been, it was gone. Torn away from here. Only the gods had such power…
“Who… Was that?”
As she bathed, she attempted to recall all of the shape shifting items she had come across… Most had been insignificant. Once she had made wooden armor, replicated to look exactly like that of her guards. And moments later, it had turned to ash.
“Probably not that….”
All the things that went through her mind didn’t fit the description. A weapon, it was. A weapon! All the ones she could remember were purely miscellaneous. Thinking on it wasn’t helping all too much.
“And you didn’t expect that!?” Rang a voice that sounded to be coming to the lake.
“I don’t know why I didn’t, but it just never occurred to me that she’d remove the cloth and steal my armor like that! She used to only go so far as to remove it.”
“Funny you should mention the armor….”
“Why?”
“I placed it beneath that bed before waking you up.”
“What!”
“I told you, you should have looked before assuming it wasn’t there.”
Then sounds of a person turning and quickly running reached Cera’s ears. And Clairene emerged from the trees, before sitting at the side of the lake.
“You caused us both a bit of a scare, Cera. What if something were to have happened?”
“Nothing would have happened…” She lied, “What could happen at a lake?”
“What couldn’t happen at a lake?”
“I don’t know.” She climbed out of the lake, and got dressed again. “I bet you wouldn’t find a priest sitting on water.”
“There are stranger things.”
“Never mind that. Nothing happened, and that’s that. Now, are the horses ready?”
“I left a note in Julia’s armor.”
“That’s my thing…”
And they commenced with idle chatter, walking the path back up to the inn. As they arrived, they found Julia with an annoyed look standing by the horses, who still looked a little tired. They would need a rest after today’s ride.
This ride was shorter, however. A half day. Julia spent it angry at the world. Clairene spent it attempting to get further into Julia’s nerves. And Cera was concentrating on the horses. At least until they made it into the city. Third largest in Empyria, quite a bit larger then the city the Melody family looked after. And this city, unlike the one Cera lived near, had their representative living within, whereas the Melody Manner was a small way north of it‘s.
And the carriage didn’t go un-noticed. As unassuming as it was, it had the look of a carriage from Northern Empyria. Of the three families ruling over Northern Empyria, only one had a daughter. A daughter that didn’t need a carriage driver. And there was no driver on the carriage, so the people put two and two together, noting that it was probably the young Lady Melody, to see the young Lady Derrice. Surely enough, the news would reach the manse before they did.
And, surely enough, young Astel stood out front, waiting anxiously. The child, not yet thirteen, had long blonde hair and stunning blue eyes. She was wearing a smile that could reach the soul of the worst murderers. Truly an icon that a nation could be happy standing behind. Astel Derrice. The beauty of Empyria.
“My lady Melody, you’re early!” The beautiful figure began. “As always. Everybody said you wouldn’t be able to make it in time, but here you are! Men, tend to these horses. Knowing young Melody, they’re going to need all the rest they can get.”
“Early?” Cera responded. “Am I not wanted before hand, to help with setting things up?”
“I wouldn’t want to impose.”
“But I insist!”
“Alas, that can wait for a small while.” Astel remarked, running up and grabbing Cera’s hand. “There’s someone I want you to meet.”
And with that, Astel dragged Cera away from her guard, and into the manse. Down the maze like hallways, up the marble staircases, down a path that Cera knew as the path to Astel’s room.
Inside was a girl. Not quite old enough to be a woman, yet almost there. Obviously most of the way through the process of change. The process Cera dreaded, both for herself and Astel.
The girl was of average height, average weight, average in all ways it seemed. Brown shoulder length hair, green eyes, not similar at all to any noble Cera knew of. And… The aura that came off of her. Radiating not of a single aura, but multiple. Hundreds of different auras all tied together within a single body, all pushed under one that happened to be dominating at the time. The current one was benevolent enough.
Which all changed when the girl saw Cera. Almost immediately, the aura changed into something horrendous. Murderous. Powerful as the one in the possession of the woman by the lake. Shortly after it came into control, it began focusing it’s energies into the girl’s hands. Preparing for an offensive spell, no doubt.
“Astel…” Cera began. “Who is this?”

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:41 pm


hm... everyone must still be reading =o
It's well written o.o
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:44 pm


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Crap... text wall...
D= Give me about 6 hours to read it
xD Nah, should take me a few minutes.
I'll edit in a bit.

((edited))

Very nice =o



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:46 pm


CH0Z0
hm... everyone must still be reading =o
It's well written o.o
Zis is a lie.
Well writen is highly improbable.
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:48 pm


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hm... everyone must still be reading =o
It's well written o.o
Zis is a lie.
Well writen is highly improbable.

Awe, looks quite well written to me, just needs to mention more names since I had a kinda hard time keeping up with the characters.

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:49 pm


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hm... everyone must still be reading =o
It's well written o.o
Zis is a lie.
Well writen is highly improbable.

Awe, looks quite well written to me, just needs to mention more names since I had a kinda hard time keeping up with the characters.
>.<
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 5:58 pm


*reads* Very well done Divine!

keito melfina


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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:01 pm


'Tis better than my last story. 42 pages of off-colour humour and inside jokes. D:
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:04 pm


=O That's a lot! Too bad I don't really read =l I am lazy dumb

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:05 pm


Valheita
'Tis better than my last story. 42 pages of off-colour humour and inside jokes. D:
Any inside jokes I could fathom getting?
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:11 pm


Divine_Malevolence
Valheita
'Tis better than my last story. 42 pages of off-colour humour and inside jokes. D:
Any inside jokes I could fathom getting?
Probably not. They're all products of my high-school friends' twisted imaginations.

The basic premise of the plot is that Turkeys have taken over the world.

Hmm, I wonder if there's somewhere I could upload the .pdf.

Valheita

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 6:40 pm


I spotted a mistake. I am for the your will?

Anyways, is nice!
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