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because i miss him.
  and HIM. but not quite as much, yet....
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:15 am


The greatest enemy is Time--
Why must the sun still rise?
We wish for one last page
One last hit
One last kiss
But it has other plans.

It speeds, it flies, as I drag along
Like a much-abused shoe
Clattering behind the wedding car
Dizzy, confused, the landscape all a blur.
And then it jerks, it lulls, it stops,
Leaving me screaming in the silence
Wondering why no one can hear me.

And all this time,
My mouth was torn, stained red
I could not speak, I could not breathe
I was silenced
And choked on blood when I tried to cry out.
Is that why
You aren’t here
To kiss me?
PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2009 8:15 am


It was good, but it makes me awfully sad to see you unhappy. *sigh* Is there anything I can do?

Voxxx


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2009 8:37 am


well, I don't even know what to do. So if you think of something it probably wouldn't hurt to try, but I have no freaking clue. I just get so lonely all the time :/
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