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 Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:20 pm
 This is where we talk outside the roleplays. I know that we already have one, but this is meant just for us. 
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:23 pm
DEATHDRAMON SAYS:
Okay, Captain Dvonte seriously. Stop with the one liner posts. It's not that hard to write about the place your in or how he feels. It's getting really annoying. So if you could please try harder on your posts.[ Oh yeah as well, could you edit your post? Thanks.
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:26 pm
sorry about that I,m in a war right now, my last post in the common room was good though, but yeah sorry just in the middle of a war right now. I will be at my house soon, what do you want me to edit?
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:30 pm
DEATHDRAMON SAYS:
Not you silly, I meant our 4th seat. Here we don't use Captain because we are out of character. So your fine, you actually have atleast two paragraphs in your posts.
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:34 pm
Oh my bad,I will edit them immediately.
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:37 pm
DEATHDRAMON SAYS:
-rubs my temples-
Did you even read my post.
Or did you simply stop have way?
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:52 pm
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 6:53 pm
What do you think now?Is there things I need to change?
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 7:03 pm
I think its better! you are getting it, I,m not saying your posts have to be like me and Lazzy's but deffinately practice more detail and use whatever means to make your post longer, even the simplest things can make a huge difference, but your not bad at all! if you want to edit your post go ahead, you dont want to dont.
I posted by the way XD
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Posted: Thu May 14, 2009 9:34 pm
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