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PostPosted: Wed May 13, 2009 3:34 pm


This is a forum to get your Sonic fan-character critiqued.
It can also help improve their appearance, stats and ideas if you don't feel very comfortable with them and want them edited.
Anyone wish for the critique? Just post your characters here! biggrin


![Update]!

If you have a picture of your Sonic fan character in colour, I'd be greatly appreciated if you could post that for critique. B+W pictures are accepted for critique, but coloured are preferred.

![Update]! ( 10/17/11 )
If you want to be critiqued on certain attributes such as 'uniqueness of my character' or 'how canon/official my character looks' please let me know! I've only critiqued in terms of balanced character appearance and design, and there's actually quite a difference between critiquing just the balance of a design, to how unique or believable the character is in the Sonic universe. Critiques would be marked differently if you want your Sonic character to look as canon/official as possible, or different suggestions would be given depending on how much you're willing to change in your character's design.
PostPosted: Wed May 13, 2009 6:06 pm


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I'm not really good at drawing but if you could give me design ideas that would be nice :3


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PostPosted: Wed May 13, 2009 6:16 pm


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I'm not really good at drawing but if you could give me design ideas that would be nice :3


Hm, I think the simple character design looks nice - but I find that her clothing seems "empty". Maybe if you edit her clothing or add different designs - that may help with your character's looks biggrin

I like how you gave her the long ponytail rather than a stubby one (seen too many of those xp ) Adding bangs to your character would also look great on her.

I enjoy the colour scheme you chose for her, so I think you should stick with that. Hope this critique helped you out! sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 8:00 pm


Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 2:55 pm


Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...


try saving as PNG.
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 4:49 pm


Sario-rip
Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...


try saving as PNG.



....

Why does it matter how I save it?
I'm asking if my characters are origional or not...

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 6:02 pm


Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Sario-rip
Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...


try saving as PNG.



....

Why does it matter how I save it?
I'm asking if my characters are origional or not...


Different ways of saving make the picture pixelated. can saturate the edges or center, making the pixelation stand out more than it should.
If you like the way it looks, I'm in no position to tell you to change it.

And yes, they're original. ^^
I like Milky, she looks evil.
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 6:20 pm


Sario-rip
Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Sario-rip
Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...


try saving as PNG.



....

Why does it matter how I save it?
I'm asking if my characters are origional or not...


Different ways of saving make the picture pixelated. can saturate the edges or center, making the pixelation stand out more than it should.
If you like the way it looks, I'm in no position to tell you to change it.

And yes, they're original. ^^
I like Milky, she looks evil.


I realize that, however, if I do that then Recolorers can easily steal my artwork. :/ I'd prefer giving them a hard time. :3

Milky has Bi-polar. Very severe Bi-Polar. XD

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 7:59 pm


@ "Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX"]
Quote:
http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


The rabbit-like character seems a little... bland with the colour scheme. Blacks & Whites are not always the greatest to use for one character since the greyscale tires the eyes quickly. Try adding various colours such as different colour eyes, clothing or designs. Kuddos to the clothing design though.

Quote:

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


Similar Blacks and Whites issue (but the blue eyes do stand out from the rest of the character). With things such as character form, I suggest you add designs to her clothing (maybe a logo, something such as a necklace, etc.) that stands out so that we pay attention to the whole character rather than the face (which has the cool colours that stand out).

Another thing I wish to add about your rabbit-like characters: Try going WILD with their framework and designs biggrin Try referencing other Anime characters looks or Real life objects and don't always reference from other Sonic characters. I find that your first rabbit-character looks too close to Cream.

Quote:
http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


Although I can't see the bottom of her legs, I quite like her clothing designs. I suggest you test out and try different hairstyles with her quills though - just to see if she looks good in different forms. The long haired quills have been used quite a bit in the Sonic fandom, so they're not very original.



Quote:

http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


I'm not a big fan of edits - but this topic is to critique character designs xp I'm quite fond of this character's design. The angle of his quills seems neat, and I haven't seen any fan-characters with head-wear such as this one. If anything, the only thing that seems to bother me is the amount of red used in the picture. Unless you wish to make the viewer feel tense, keep the reds. (since it symbolizes anger or heat).
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 8:03 pm


The Saiyan Warrior
http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii61/Super_Saiyan_Marita/Sonic/Made-Up Sonic Characters/divine.gif
I'm not really good at drawing but if you could give me design ideas that would be nice :3


I agree with Scars the color scheme is nice but the clothing needs to have more design on them. Maybe some Jewelery could be nice as well?

Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...

The two rabbits are pretty good ^^ Milky scares me though O.o

For Angel I think her bangs should be redesigned. I'm not really to fond of them. But that's just me.

I really like Hotshot's design ^^ There really isn't much I could say :3

I know I didn't put much but I hope it helps somewhat ^^;

Edit: looked at your other Angel Pictures the Fallen Angel one to be exact and not to make fun of you or anything but is that Blood on the paper! err....ketchup XD XDDD

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 8:32 pm


Scars-of-an-Undead

Hm, I think the simple character design looks nice - but I find that her clothing seems "empty". Maybe if you edit her clothing or add different designs - that may help with your character's looks biggrin

I like how you gave her the long ponytail rather than a stubby one (seen too many of those xp ) Adding bangs to your character would also look great on her.

I enjoy the colour scheme you chose for her, so I think you should stick with that. Hope this critique helped you out! sweatdrop

Thanks ^^ I'll probably play around with the clothing soon :3
I'll probably be back too with an entry for this Contest XD Though I'm probably not gonna win but whatever XD
PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 9:10 pm


xxxChaos Sodaxxx
The Saiyan Warrior
http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii61/Super_Saiyan_Marita/Sonic/Made-Up Sonic Characters/divine.gif
I'm not really good at drawing but if you could give me design ideas that would be nice :3


I agree with Scars the color scheme is nice but the clothing needs to have more design on them. Maybe some Jewelery could be nice as well?

Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX
Mii... I've got to try this out...

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


So...

Tell me what you think...

The two rabbits are pretty good ^^ Milky scares me though O.o

For Angel I think her bangs should be redesigned. I'm not really to fond of them. But that's just me.

I really like Hotshot's design ^^ There really isn't much I could say :3

I know I didn't put much but I hope it helps somewhat ^^;

Edit: looked at your other Angel Pictures the Fallen Angel one to be exact and not to make fun of you or anything but is that Blood on the paper! err....ketchup XD XDDD


XDD no... It's Eraser... Some eraser bits are stuck on meh Scanner, so yeah...
I've redesigned Angel's bangs too many times... I'm too lazy to think right now..

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PostPosted: Fri May 15, 2009 9:34 pm


Scars-of-an-Undead
@ "Xx_HeartlessXLoveless_xX"]
Quote:
http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Milky-s-Passion-COLORED-112032848

-----^ Milky Way Hatari


The rabbit-like character seems a little... bland with the colour scheme. Blacks & Whites are not always the greatest to use for one character since the greyscale tires the eyes quickly. Try adding various colours such as different colour eyes, clothing or designs. Kuddos to the clothing design though.

Quote:

http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-leave-me-117319598

-----^ Orelina Freene Rabbotto (AKA Oreo)


Similar Blacks and Whites issue (but the blue eyes do stand out from the rest of the character). With things such as character form, I suggest you add designs to her clothing (maybe a logo, something such as a necklace, etc.) that stands out so that we pay attention to the whole character rather than the face (which has the cool colours that stand out).

Another thing I wish to add about your rabbit-like characters: Try going WILD with their framework and designs biggrin Try referencing other Anime characters looks or Real life objects and don't always reference from other Sonic characters. I find that your first rabbit-character looks too close to Cream.

Quote:
http://chaosangel111.deviantart.com/art/Hang-in-there-Sonic-121592373

-----^ Angel Marie Parker (AKA Angel (Female on right))


Although I can't see the bottom of her legs, I quite like her clothing designs. I suggest you test out and try different hairstyles with her quills though - just to see if she looks good in different forms. The long haired quills have been used quite a bit in the Sonic fandom, so they're not very original.



Quote:

http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff41/A_Shaden_Angel/Hotshot Hedgehog/Hotshotisangry.jpg

-----^ Hotshot Mecha Hedgehog (AKA Hotshot (My friend made this for me when I asked her to make a redesign for me...)


I'm not a big fan of edits - but this topic is to critique character designs xp I'm quite fond of this character's design. The angle of his quills seems neat, and I haven't seen any fan-characters with head-wear such as this one. If anything, the only thing that seems to bother me is the amount of red used in the picture. Unless you wish to make the viewer feel tense, keep the reds. (since it symbolizes anger or heat).


Hmm... Most people say that Milky and Oreo are their faverites.

For Milky I can't come up with other designs.... I've tried to give her more color, but it looks all wrong... Thats why she is a Psycho path... XD

Oreo's name mathes her design. I can't really change her design to another color... I can probably throw in a blue Necklace and such....

Angel's Bangs are a pain in the a** to get right... I have a different design for her bangs, but her quills will have to remain long.

Hotshot is supposed to syboize Heat and anger. He's a pyrokinetic Hedgehog after all. He wears the hat for a special reason.
PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 9:43 am


Oh lol XD

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PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2009 10:24 am


The Saiyan Warrior
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Hm, I think the simple character design looks nice - but I find that her clothing seems "empty". Maybe if you edit her clothing or add different designs - that may help with your character's looks biggrin

I like how you gave her the long ponytail rather than a stubby one (seen too many of those xp ) Adding bangs to your character would also look great on her.

I enjoy the colour scheme you chose for her, so I think you should stick with that. Hope this critique helped you out! sweatdrop

Thanks ^^ I'll probably play around with the clothing soon :3
I'll probably be back too with an entry for this Contest XD Though I'm probably not gonna win but whatever XD


Oh! I've read about that contest! It looks like something really hilarious to try out! xd
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