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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 6:53 pm


Username: Wrath_Master
Character Name: Zarin Akinseth
Character's Race: Shinigami
Character's Rank: (Hopefully Lieutenant )
Nickname: Akin.
Appears to be: 23 years old
Is actually: 173 years old
Gender: Male
Appearance: Zarin Akinseth
Zarin is a tall, athletic man who wears a black leather coat in lieu of the traditional robes of a Shinigami. On his chest, he wears a belt that holds three containers which contains soul candy, a single hell-butterfly, and a Soul Phone. He has fiery red hair, and cold eyes. He stands at 6' even, and, while his frame isn't bulging, he is streamlined. He wears black, leather gloves, matching his coat, and black Hakama.
Personality: Zarin is a calm, strong hearted man. He has a very strong sense of justice, and will do whatever it takes to get a job done, as long as he feels it's the right thing to do. He's kind, and watches out for those close to him, and will gladly betray the Seireitei, as well as the whole Soul Society to protect them. He has an eye for women, and, while he's not a womanizer, likes to try to flirt with cute women. Sadly, while very humorous, he's bad at it.
Bio: Born to an average family in the Soul Society, and taught the way of the sword. He showed a great deal of skill, and sooner than he thought, he was off to try to become a Shinigami. Zarin had always excelled at defensive fighting, and always loved learning about the heroes of the past. (Sorry, I'm horrible at bios, and I'm kinda new to BLEACH.)
Zanpakuto's name: Kuroiryu
Zanpakuto's appearance: Kuroiryu
Release phrase: Snarl, Kuroiryu!
Shikai appearance: Shikai
Shikai attacks: Black Drive: An attack that sends a black wave of spiritual energy from the tip of the blade.
Midnight Dance: An Advanced form of the Black Drive, simply a succession of sword attacks at close range, each one using a black Drive, essentially making it a close to long range attack.
Envelop: A black flame covers the blade, drains Zarin's spiritual energy to use it.
Black Hole: An attack Kuroiryu allows Zarin to use, despite Zarin not being strong enough to use it. Creates large, black fireballs around Zarin's fighting area, that spin around him. The Fire from each is than siphoned, by means of the fire making a line towards the hilt of the sword. The fire than comes together, grows, and creates an explosion. This damages Zarin, and usually knocks him unconscious. Thus, it's dubbed an emergency attack.

False Shikai release phrase: Rend my foes with your terrible might Kuroiryu!
False Shikai form: False Shikai
False Shikai ability: The only ability is it transforms his entire left arm into a massive black dragon claw.

Bankai release phrase: Lash and crush, terrible tail of the great onyx wyrm! Lend me your strength Kuroiryu!
Bankai appearance: Just much, much larger. (The color black and the sword is flat-side as the blade. The spikes are the spikes on the dragon tail, get it?) When he unleashes the Bankai, he becomes clad in Draconic armor. (If is coat is on, it dissipates.) The sword is the tail of A great black dragon that fights along side Zarin.
Bankai attacks: Other than calling Kuroiryu out to fight with Zarin, it enhances his Hado 31 and 33, turning them black.

Hado: 33. Sōkatsui, 31. Shakkahō
Bakudo: 61. Rikujōkōrō, 26. Kyakko, 8. Seki, 37. Tsuriboshi, 39. Enkosen
Abilities: None.
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 3:51 pm


OKay. I'm not accepting or rejecting your profile, because I'm not sure exactly how strict Raccoons wants to be about this.

You applied to my squad, but unfortunately your profile hasn't been accepted yet. You should wait until it has.
As for applying to the 11th squad, your sample post isn't bad. I will rate it and place you eventually, once Coons and I have discussed your profile. I'm not sure how she'll feel about you not including a Bankai. If you can think of one, I suggest you put it.
Also, squad 11 is a physical combat squad and in Bleach, it doesn't use Kidou based weapons. Your shikai is kidou based. I'm not saying that I will not accept you for this reason, but I just thought I'd let you know. It is not unheard of for a member of squad 11 to have a kidou based weapon (Ayasegawa Yumichika has a secret kidou based attack), but those who do have it are considered cowards. I will ask Coons how she feels about that. Personally I like tradition, so I'll keep my squad as close to the original rules as possible.
Just something to let you think about.
If you like, you could do like Yumichika and have your zanpakutou start off physical, then change to kidou based at a certain command. If you need any ideas I can help you come up with something.

Edit: Also, until you're sure that you're a lieutenant, please don't include it in your title. ^^ *edited it for you..* xD

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:14 pm


Understandable. I didn't add a Bankai because he's not a Captain, and only a single Lieutenant had a Bankai (Renji), So I thought it'd be smarter to lack it. As for the Squad/style discrepancy, you do have an excellent point. I suppose I could reverse that, having his Bankai (When he achieves it (I was planning for him to do this within the rp)) be a physical style.
Or your idea is good as well. (I just got what it meant)

PS, sorry for all problems, I'm still kinda new to BLEACH.

Edit: I changed that in the actual post. Thank you for bringing it up.

Edit Edit: All's well if I'm not accepted, It's not like I have my heart set on 11, it just seems the squad that Zarin would aim for.
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:17 pm


Looking at Yachi's post and then at your profile, I can see where she is coming from. Here's a few things that you need to go back and fix. ^^

1. Add a bankai....you're creative, it won't be too hard to come up with one. If you wish to have the rank of Lieutenant, you have to have a bankai. :3

2. Like Yachiru said, squad 11 is a physical combat squad. You'll have to fix your shikai accordingly. =D

3. Also, it's up to Yachiru whether or not you will be her Lieutenant position. n-n

Best of luck, and I look forward to seeing your completed profile!

iLavi the Exorcist


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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:21 pm


I'm just curious as to how far into bleach you are.. as in what episode? Or what chapter of the manga? whee
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:25 pm


I follow the English dub XD But I've missed some pieces. I use Bleach Wikia for most of my info.

But, onto business.

1) Making the Bankai is no problem, I just thought it'd be a little better not to have one XD

2) Yachiru, when you said turn Kidou based at a certain command, did you mean the entire Shikai changes?

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:32 pm


Hmm sorta.. I'll give you the only example I know of. Sorry for any spoilers.

Yumichika has Fuji Kujaku (Wisteria Peacock). It doesn't like that name, so when he calls it, it only goes half-way into shikai (the four blades that look like a garden tool! XD). He uses this to fool his squad members into thinking that his weapon is simply physical so that they won't call him names.
When he calls its true name, Ruriiro Kujaku (Azure Peacock), it fully releases and is kidou-based.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Da2qre2sKis
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:33 pm


Oh, in other words, It's a fake Shikai, and it only looks like a better sword?

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:36 pm


... No, it has it's advantages too. Fuji Kujaku is a useful weapon and does lots of damage. Just Ruriiro Kujaku is stronger and more efficient, as well as the true nature of Yumichika's zanpakutou.
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:38 pm


I see. *Learns*
Alright. *Works on it*
I apologize, I've always been a Red Mage Balance whore.

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 4:59 pm


Lol .. a what? O_o; XD Nevermind..
I'm lookin forward to accepting your profile. xD
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:18 pm


There we are!
And Red mage is from the original Final Fantasy game. They could use mid-level magic from both healing and killer magic, and were good with swords to. In a word, they were versatile, and could be used for everything.
And Balance whore is someone who tries to be good at everything, but great at nothing.

I hope the profile is acceptable.

Edit: Switched the false Shikai and the true one, cus the false one looked better XD

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:28 pm


Lol I see biggrin I -sadly- have never played Final Fantasy. D: Lol I always feel ashamed when I tell people that. xDD

It looks good to me. Just one thing I couldn't figure out...
In the Bankai appearance.. is your sword that linked metal blade that sort of resembles Renji's? Or is it a black dragon tail? o.o

Quote:
Just much, much larger. When he unleashes the Bankai, he becomes clad in Draconic armor. (If is coat is on, it dissipates.) The sword becomes the tail of A great black dragon that fights along side Zarin.


Also, if you like you could add that Bankai increases your speed a bit.. just so it's stated and no one can argue later.
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:31 pm


It's the tail, but it's in the shape of the sword that looks reminiscent to Renji's Sorry, should've explained that. Think that it is a sword (though black and upside down XDD), that becomes a dragon.

And as for increasing his speed, I think that'd be over-kill. O-o, it's a trade for the sheer power of the dragon, but Zarin lacks the speed of other Bankai.

Edit: I edited it to say the sword IS the tail, not becomes XD
Edit 2: More edits, that is all XD.

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PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2009 5:46 pm


Okay.. XD I think i get the dragon thing now. Rofl. Just try to be descriptive if you ever talk about it in RP, so people can picture what you're talking about lol.

And I agree with the speed thing lol.
I officially ACCEPT. Dx
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