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rachelmvy

 
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PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 1:57 am


Always there for me
You never cheated
Always filled with glee
Never been beated

I've cheated on you
I'm sorry to say
Which is not true
He lured me to play

I couldn't help it
He made me feel right
That can't help one bit
Not even at night

Please please forgive me
I never meant to
Didn't want you to see
Now I feel all blue

I need you right now
Please don't leave me
I don't no how
I just want you to see
It's really me now
PostPosted: Sat May 09, 2009 1:58 am


this poem was approved by Atra Angel

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PostPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 5:09 pm


nice, but sad crying
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 6:44 pm


I...with all honesty here...did not like it. I mean it's so simple and I love simple poems but I feel like other words can/should be used in it. This poem is just too straight forward in my opinion. That's just my itty bitty opinion though. rofl

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