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PostPosted: Fri May 08, 2009 5:57 pm


Closure to this emptiness,
A part of me that is falling away,
Regretting my dreams entirely,
What hopes I had are hidden away,

This pain I've come to know,
It lingers with my thoughts,
The sign of your light that shined,
It's slowly fading away,

Forget the chance of your happiness,
Blessing me with that smile,
once soft lips turn to sour words,
Bitter sounds of hatred staining,

Your smell that once was so sweet,
Burns my fragile nose,
Close the eyes and seeing,
This darkness that remains,

Soft snow covered street,
Passion and longing,
A memory of what the past held,
What am I longing to forget?

Give me a reason to smile,
Give me a reason to live,
What you've taken,
And what you've had,

Take my hand and lead me,
Show me how to live again,
I've been wandering in this place,
Where I am better of dead,

I wished so many times
And this time I wish again,
For you to come back,
And I wished I could see your smile again.

One last time I'd like to say,
You're the one I'm alive for today,
I will love you forever and always,
Time means nothing anyway.
PostPosted: Thu May 21, 2009 3:06 pm


Then she slowly saw their nightmares were her d r e a m s



This poem really touched me. I feel exactly how this poem foretells. Keep up the great work dear!


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