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Dura stared up at the empty sky of Hueco Mundo thinking of the fate of those that fought there three hundred years prier. A tear ran down his cheek as he thought of his fallen brethren slain by the inferior shinigami. “Why,” Dura paused momentarily “Why would fate allow such a tragedy to unfold right here in our home,” the words passing his lips seemed to have no meaning, no substance, no justice. He bent down and watched the white sand of his desolate home slip through his fingers. Dura laughed softly as he collapsed onto the shimmering done “Truly this place is fitting for the despair I feel in my soul. To think I am one of a dying race, a race doomed to extinction by a far inferior one. Fate you are so cruel to doom us I to an ironic end.” Dura slowly closed his eyes slipping gently into the dark abyss that is his dreams.

Dura awoke several hours later; Dura lifted himself off the ground and began to walk toward the now haunted skeleton of Las Noches. It took some time to reach Las Noches as it was so massive it gave the illusion of being closer than it actually was, and Dura was growing tired. “I’ve been an arrancar ever since Aizen’s time and yet I have accomplished nothing other to wander aimlessly through our home land,” said Dura as he began to stumble on the unsure dunes. He regained his balance quickly just as he reached the outer wall of Las Noches. It had been years since he had resided here with his brothers and sisters, and the memories haunted him as Las Noches did Hueco Mundo. He searched the wall frantically trying to find an entrance, which had not fallen to the ravages of time. Minutes passed with no success and yet his determination would not falter. He found a passage that looked as if it had been built recently, but that was impossible so he shook off his feeling of unease.

Dura exited the passage that had leaded him into his home “Looks like it lead me into the main corridor,” Dura said looking around the long forgotten structure. Dura began to hear whispering seeming to come from all around him, and he clutched his ears as the room began to spin. He caught himself on the wall in front of a grand mirror “I…I look so…tattered. What has it all come to?” he asked himself. The whispering became louder and he began to hear footsteps. Dura shouted with all the might left in him “Leave me foul spirits, I am finally at peace, so just leave,” Dura then fell to his knees with his head hanging low as if he were accepting his delusion as reality . Dura glanced up and his eyes grew wide as he saw a young arrancar watching him from a doorway. Tears welled up in his eyes “I...I’m not alone,” he seemed to mouth the words not knowing if the words actually left his lips. His face dropped into his hands as the tears of joy kept coming. He felt a hand lying on his shoulder and he looked up to see the young arrancar smiling so gently at him and a smile began to spread across his face even though the tears continued to stream from his eyes. Dura stood up “come lets go find the others,” said the young arrancar and Dura was lead into the depths of Las Noches.

(I was wondering if I could be the 1st espada?)

It was a bright, sunny day in Karakura Town. The wind stirred the trees causing them to sway whilst their leaves drifted steadily across the landscape. The clear blue sky was free from clouds and the morning air was quite refreshing for anyone who took the time to deeply breathe it in. Eidorian had just stepped out of his garganta into the air above the Town. His mission was to observe the humans in this world.

Eidorian lowered himself to the ground and turned his head to see he had landed in what seemed to be a bunch of kids kicking a ball around. They had not noticed him, they probably couldn't even see him he thought. The kids continued to play unaware of the arrancat that had just arrived in the middle of their game. Not seeing how this would help his mission, Eidorian used his sonido to appear on the sidewalk.

He began to walk when he noticed some spiritual power nearby. Eidorian could sense several weak humans and a couple of shinigamis. It seemed this small town might be interesting after all Eidorian thought to himself. After several days of observing the humans and keep track of the ones who had the reitsu he had sensed days ago, Eidorian was ready to return to Hueco Mundo and Report what he had just observed in the "Human World." The garganta opened and Eidorian stepped through.

Both of you are accepted.
Altsein, which position would you like?

Hinako sighed as she just layed on her bed in her room with nothing to do. This had been her second week in a row where nothing special seemed to happen. 'Damn this is just getting way too boring now!' she screamed in her mind. 'Well I for one don't mind. I mean it's been peaceful here and no one's had to die for a really long while.' her other's side, Ko, responded. Hinako growled as she heard the other's voice. It had been so long since she had last heard it too. She was hopin that perhaps she had just disappeared from exsistence. 'Hey that's not nice. Besides I know you really like me around.' Ko pouted to Hinako. She just growled at her sweeter half's repsonse. "Like I even need you around. The only good you are to me is that extra power you have. If you didn't have that I'd see if there was a way to get rid of you." she said aloud rather angry that her 'peace' had been interupted. "Now excuse me as I go look for something to do for right now." she added as she sat up on her bed.

When she sat up her honey blonde hair had fallen around her and she just brushed it back over her shoulders. Standing up she headed to the door to look from something interesting to do. Walking around for a bit she spotted a gang of Arracar bickering among themselves about something. Hinako just smirked and quickly made her way over to them. "Well what do we have her. Some small fry yelling and creating a big show for us big shots. Now what could have you all riled up." she said with a sadistic tone in her voice. "Oh it's nothing Hinako-sama! We were just...wondering which Espada was the best right?" the one said while the others nodded hoping nothing would get them hurt or more possible killed. "Oh is that right? Then who is your's?" she asked. "That's easy. Of course it's Hinako-sama with her amazing beauty that can't be surpassed." the same one responded. The others quickly joined in with praise and such hoping to save their hides. "Ah just for that I'll let you all live for today alright. Just don't get into anymore trouble or else I won't think twice before having to kill you all." she added as she just walked away. 'Oi that was mean. I think you really scared them silly.' Ko thought to Hinako. It just causd Hinako to give a loud laugh at the mental image of it.

Continuing on her walk she sigh in disappiontment by not finding anymore Arrancar or even anyother Espada. Getting an idea she headed outside of Las Nochas and raised her reiatsu a bit to see if any hollows would respond. To her luck she was able to get five large hollows to appear before her. Chuckling she took out her zanpaktou and tore throught them within seconds. "Man the hollow out here are just small fry now." she said with disappointment in her voice. 'Then why bother killing without any reason?' Ko thought to her. "Well I was bored of course." she answered without hesitation. She could hear Ko sigh and giggled while heading back inside to go back to her room hoping that someone else would wonder by her path wishing to spare.

You have a good Start but you'll have to be more desbritive and add a little more content. Remeber to try and tell a story with this post after all this is an important tryout am I right? Use a large varity of words as well and good luck.

Tchk, tchk, tchk tchk,.... Those were the sounds created by the mixture of Jinzo's feet grinding over the desert's sand. This desert was empty, cold and looke dead, however it was full of life. But anyho, the desert..yeah...It looked as good as dead. It was as if there had never been any form of life here before, except for the trees and the huge white dome behind Jinzo.

The moon was shining brightly, the stars were sparkling at the ebony sky, yes..everything looked normal. Jinzo sighed, not because he was bored (or annoyed), but because he found it relaxing to be outside. If I have to die, then let my body rest here forever.... he thought. A smile appeared upon his face after he closed his eyes. He breathed in deeply and enjoyed the fresh air, but coughed afterwards as he sniffed in some sand by accident.

He scratched his nose and lowered his arm. He opened his eyes and looked around, only to narrow them a moment later. What was..? Is it...? Yes, he saw a bump in the sand...a bump which was racing towards him, and not quite slow. Jinzo stood still and watched the bulge race towards him.

But just a couple of feet before Jinzo, the bulge exploded, and hollows popped up in the air. How many growling hollows were there? 1-2-3-4..hmhmhm....8 hollows. 8 Hollows, and they all aimed at Jinzo. "Now that's rather unfair. Couldn't you guys bring any more? Pathetic. Oh well..." his right hand pulled out his zanpaktou "Let the massacre of the maggots begin!" he grinned with an evil smile and he rushed towards the group.

isn't there character profile good enough?