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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 4:23 pm


So I work for a newspaper and went to a restraunt called Romano's with my co-workers last week. They tricked me! They said I needed to write a review to add to the story they're going to write. So I thought I'd share. Perhaps they'll like my writing and want me to start writing more. AND THEN I'LL DEMAND A RAISE! scream

Being the only one who ordered something other than a 3-inch thick stuffed pizza (but I had thought about it), waiting on everyone else's order was a little (JOY - What's the word I'm looking for?), but in retrospect I'm glad mine didn't come out before the rest of the table. I'm not a sports fan so I couldn't admire the fact that there was a great quality screen wherever I turned my head, but the sport fans that were at our table sure enjoyed it. My meal consisted of two large calzone-type thingies, filled with delicious mozzerella cheese, sausage, onions and bell peppers. It also came with a nice portion of marinera sauce which tasted amazing. I was only able to eat one so the other was packed in a box with TWO sides of marinera sauce to make sure I had enough when I decided to eat it later (which didn't lose it's amazing taste in the microwave). The option of ball park type food was definately interesting, probably a great thing for true fans who miss going to real games, and some of the original food names (a veggie sandwich is referred to a 'sissy' sandwich) were amusing. Perhaps not to a vegetarian. All the same, good place to have a nice meal with friends and almost guarantee you'll have a meal portion of food left over.
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 5:31 pm


It sounds more like a blog than a review. This is due primarily to
two large calzone-type thingies

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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 5:48 pm


XpyrodaemonX
It sounds more like a blog than a review. This is due primarily to
two large calzone-type thingies
I'm not going to drive over there to find out the real name for it. That's the editor's job. She'll probably just reword it. I couldn't find the right word.
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 7:45 pm


Hmm. Not sure what that word you want at the beginning is...can you name some words you were thinking of that aren't quite right?

All in all I like it, just a couple things:

I agree about the "thingies"

And marinara is spelled as such smile

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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 7:57 pm


Narishkye
Hmm. Not sure what that word you want at the beginning is...can you name some words you were thinking of that aren't quite right?

All in all I like it, just a couple things:

I agree about the "thingies"

And marinara is spelled as such smile

the word(s) she is looking for is ANNOYING AS ********, and spelling is for editors. You could just call them stuffed pizzas.
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 8:36 pm


Narishkye
Hmm. Not sure what that word you want at the beginning is...can you name some words you were thinking of that aren't quite right?

All in all I like it, just a couple things:

I agree about the "thingies"

And marinara is spelled as such smile
Unnerving is wrong. Impatient is wrong. I'm looking for along the lines of sort of disappointed and irritated.


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