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Xxr and sXx

PostPosted: Sat May 02, 2009 12:21 pm


look into my eyes what do you see
a helpless person
full of pain misery and sorrow
thinking of you is the least thing i want to do
but i see you all the time
i cant seem to get you out of my head
your making me go insane
i hate this ,i hate you ,get out of my mind
why you doing this, after all that we've been through
love,friendship
suddenly i feel something sharp
cutting my skin "why" i scream "i love you"
PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 3:43 am


WOW! Best one of yours I've read. ^_^ That really makes me think of my girlfriend when she was suicidal before I met her. Bad times, but a very good poem. I give it a 4.5/5 rating. XD

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