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 Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 4:37 pm
Just some poems to explain my feelings this week. Hope you enjoy.
Love heart heart
My heart is soft like feathers
just like you and me. Please
don't break my heart just to
say . All I want is love for both
you and me today. Me and you
together today just don't take our
love away. Together we will be
what I want to be. Together love
will make us birds flying in the
sunlight love. Love is what I say
just please don't take it away.
Sadness sad sad
Sadness fills my heart just to be
right. Walking on the sidewalk can
be a fright. With sadness inside me
I just can't seem to be right. With
all these empty spots nothing to
refill . My body with just sadness
fills me still. Steady as a statue
nothing really a thrill. Please just
don't make more depressed as
for now I can be.
I will add more poems later! Please enjoy!! biggrin biggrin biggrin
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Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 6:53 pm
this is my first poem that i am posting so if it aint perfect im sorry.......first time is a little harder ya know? well here it is..................... sad it is called poetry)
Poetry is
pretty you
see. It livens
your heart then
you cannot part.
For if you do you
will meet again in
the face of poetry
on that same ol' street
and you will feel those
same ol' feet you did
years and years ago. So
when you meet poetry again
make sure you listen in. For
poetry will call you in again,and
again, and again.
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 4:08 pm
Both of your poem is awesome, to bad i don't know how to write a poem!
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Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 2:50 pm
well all i did was rhyme some words together..............u can also talk to blueRose98 and she is a good poet..............well thats all i can say and tell u also thanks for commenting my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 9:26 pm
this one i wrote for the guy i love
your cute,your funny,your kind,your nice thats why i have to break the ice.
your eyes your hair your freckles i love.
you stand out like a golden dove.
your eyes are blue that's one of the reasons i love you
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 3:36 pm
You guys all have very nice poems.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:23 pm
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 4:34 pm
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 1:31 pm
hey guys thanks. i apreaciate that u guys like my poetry!
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