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[WIP] Suits and Ties Sketch

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Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:18 pm

Unfortunately, my scanner is in hate-mode, so it's not very clear.
Any critique on anatomy will be greatly appreciated. A red-line will gain you fervent hero-worship. Use deviantArt's download feature to see the details please.

Suits and Ties Sketch

And so far, I've inked about this much:

Suits and Ties LINE ART

...before realizing that something's wrong with their posture and their clothing folds, but I can't pinpoint what's wrong. Any pointers?

Thanks in advance.

Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 5:03 pm

Damn thats cool.

the only problem that i could really see is the perspective of the bench and the counter thing in the backround.

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I think that the counter at the top should be fixed to fit the bench or the other way around. Or you could just compromise the space between the two. Like 50-50

But really Its easier to fix the top than it is to fix the bottom. Thay way you dont have to redraw the chick

Also where are they?
Are they inside or outside?

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