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PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:10 pm


this is just a little thing with my poetry i don't expect anyone to like it but i did and i just want to share the only form of art i can even try to do.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:16 pm


ok so this one i did as an English assignment and it took me forever but i liked the final product. The assignment was to create a poem based off a picture on the wall of the class room.



Hard unyielding rocks beneath me
Clear blue sky above
A saphire river smooth as silk
A half shadowed world beyond it all,
And then there's me
A solitary mortal awed by the beauty
Nulled by the silence
At peace in this oasis.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:33 pm


this one is about a dream that was about a girl having a dream, it is an interesting piece and it is kind of sad.



Please can i move on?
I saw you again,
this time in a dream.
I saw you run,
just like that day.
I saw the car hit,
but this time it wasn't you,
this time you lived.
Oh what a horrible dream!
Your dead, and i know that ,
but i keep seeing you not die.
I don't want to see though!
I don't want this anymore.
I would prey to god to let me move on,
but no god would let you die.
So instead i beg you!
You've moved past this life,
so let me move past you!
Let me stop hurting over you,
let me stop crying!
I don't know what you'll have me do,
but i just want the pain to stop,
i want to be normal again.
I won't ever forget you,
and I'll never stop loving you,
but i want to move on!
You'll always hold a piece of my heart,
but the rest of me needs to be let go.
Please, i beg you,
Let me go!
Oh please just let me go now!
PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:43 pm


i was tired of all the lies



I hear the words fall from my mouth,
I can almost see them in the air,
And in my mind i know they are a lie.

I try to catch them,
swallow them back up,
but i just end up looking like a fool.

I don't want to lie to you,
but I'm afraid you won't except me,
for who i am and what i want.

I desperatly want to turn on the light,
show you the true me,
but i can't swim far enough,
through my lies to reach the switch.

I have never feared the dark,
but as i drown so far away for the light,
i am afraid of this closing darkness,
and the lies that caused it.

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