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 Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:51 pm
I was running. they thought they could catch me ha pathetic. They didn't even set more than two guards only one more than last time. "Stop" a stern voice said. I thought it to be a soldier. Then i saw the sword a lage broad sword. Then I realized they hired a mercinary. They were that pathetic. I took out my twin baldes and ran. He easily blocked my swift attack. I tohught a challange I was locked on my target I would not run I would kill as I am made to kill. He swung his sword skillfuly but not quite fast enough so I went in for the kill, how good it felt to fight someone that was a challange instead of the other pathetic men.
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:53 pm
That's it? Its so short. And it has run on sentences, too. But that's it? Well, it has potential, and I really hope that's not all.
Its. Way. Too. Short.
Like, incredibly too short. UGH.
No offense.
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