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 Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:47 pm
I love to write poems and I have a ton that I will be posting. Sometimes I can't keep track of my artwork so they get lost sometimes, but I do find them, eventually xd . I do have some fanfics but one of them would take me foever to censor and I'm posting that on my journal so you guys can check it out there, the other one will be on YouTube once my friends and me have a set date for when we can all get together and "act" it out. And as I'm thinking about my poems I am trying to translate them into Japanese so once I translate one I may put it up, or I'll put the translated parts in parentheses next to those lines that I have translated.
Update: I made a video of Scared (can't spell) for Life and finally put it on YouTube! If any of you guys want to go and watch it here's the link: Scared for Life
Here's one of my poems:
Confessions of Love
My love for you is so hard to confess.
Though I have to one way or another.
I must confess my love to you somehow.
This will be no easy task.
Why is this so difficult?
Is it because I'm nervous?
Or do I really love you? (ka suru watashi anata honto ni ai suru?)
How do I tell you?
Will you accept my Confessions of Love?
Or reject them?
Someone tell me what to do.
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Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:57 pm
Scarred for Life
Why am I forced to live like this?
I never asked for this life
How do I free myself from this tourture?
Should I confide in my friends?
Should I do nothing?
I'm Scarred for Life.
I can't get rid of these scars...
I have no way out
These scars won't go away
I'm stuck with them
At least I have carring friends,
Friends whom I can confide in.
But would they understand?
I hope they do
I have to free myself
I have to tell someone
I WANT to tell someone
I don't want to be Scarred for Life
I want to be, free ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Picutre  (it's not one of my best drawings but it's okay I guess (I would've used the first picture but my scaner isn't working at the current time))
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Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 8:13 am
I have tried to learn Japanese from another Gaian but that did not work so well, she only knew a few words. I like that your bringing another culture into the guild like this, and hope to read more.
Your poem Confessions of Love is realy good. I realy felt like someone trying to Confess their love for someone. Scarred for Life, hit home in places, and its also realy good.
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 7:50 pm
I thought of a cool idea! I just got over writter's block and I had an awesome idea! I figured that I should give you guys some background on my work and what possesed me to write it! (Sorry I'm a little hyper too when I happened to be typing this xd ) I've also done some thinking about translating my poems into Spanish (since I do know a bunch and speak it in my house sometimes), but that's only if any of you guys ask me nicely. Background: So when I went to break up with my boyfriend I had no idea of how to tell him so I did the dorkiest (not sure if that's a word) thing possible, I e-mailed him and told him it was over. Then about a week later I get this idea for a poem of how to tell someone it's over. So sure stupidity, or some other thing, possessed (remember that I can't spell please) me to write this poem. It Hurts
Whenever I see you,
It Hurts. (Sore itamu)
Whenever I hear you,
It Hurts. (Sore itamu.)
Whenever I, or someone else, talks about you,
It Hurts. (Sore itamu.)
Why does everything about you hurt?
I used to love you,
But now, for some reason, I resent you.
This hurts. (Kono itamu.)
It really does. (Sore hontÅ ni suru.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 9:56 pm
Background: I basically drew this for my English class project cause I need to write a speech over my favorite song and I need a visual aid with the artist/band and I just wanted to draw the younger version of Bill Kaulitz from Tokio Hotel. It was easier to draw too XD. The kanji in the corner is supposed (remember my spelling problem) to say my name which is: Marisa. I wanted to see if my Katakana chart had characters for my name and it did! So I have this memorized. My Hiragana chart has characters for my name too but I don't like using Hiragana cause it's harder to memorize xd . I know the Katakana is not that clear but that's because I had to do resizing and I don't write as heavy with Katakan/Hiragana as I do with regular English letters.
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:21 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:12 pm
Thanks, or I should say domo arigato, for the positive feedback
captain-sama! I hope that Scarred for Life didn't upset you or anything.
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:59 pm
Background: I was yet again bored in Biology class (though I think I wrote this in Geometry XD)! I started thinking about the war in Iraq and all kinds of other military stuff and this popped into my mind! I know the poem does sound "hippyish" (no idea if that's a word) but this is as far as my imagination would allow me that day, I was in more of a drawing mood than a writting one so I drew a picture for it too (then again I do for all of my poems).
Tears of Blood
Tears of Blood come streaming down.
Tears of Blood are cried for those lost in battle.
Tears of Blood are cried by soldiers who lost their friends.
Tears of Blood stream down each soldiers' face.
Tears of Blood cannot be stopped,
Unless the war stops.
LoL: That's funny, it makes some sort of shape that flows or something. I noticed that when I went to preview it. xd
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Posted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:10 pm
Background: Bored in homeroom this time (I think). I didn't realize this until one of my friends told me this that this poem reminds her of Twilight, if you have not read the saga shame on you, unless you're a guy that doesn't like the Twilight saga. In my notebook the two people are Person One and Person Two though since it relates to Twilight by a bunch I'll have the two people be Edwarrd and Bella.
Why? Because...
Bella: Why?
Why do you go so far for me?
Why do you risk your life for someone like me?
Why am I worth saving?
Why am I always in danger?
Why can't I save anyone?
Why am I always the one being saved?
Edward: Because.
Because I love you.
Because you're special to me.
Because you are my everything.
Because you're accident prone.
Because you are not ready to save anyone.
Because you like to draw attention to yourself.
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Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 11:16 am
Scarred for Life did not upset me, but the last two here made me cry. You are a very talented writer.
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Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:01 pm
That's good to know. But the other two making me cry makes me feel sympathetic. Thanks for telling me that, I used to suck at writting xd . You're good at writting yourself.
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Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:47 pm
Bakcground: I was for some reason thinking about Naruto and me moving to Nebraska that got me to write this. I think that's the case but there might've been another reason for why I wrote this that's what my memory is conjuring up at the moment so I'll have to go with that. Update: Picture in progress! Keeping Bonds
Bonds of friendship.
Bonds of Love.
Breaking those bonds is easier said than done.
How can I break those bonds without hurting the ones I love?
Is that even possible?
Bonds of friendship.
Bonds of love.
I never want to break those bonds.
I want to keep the ones I love.
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 6:29 am
Everyone sucks at some point, but than get better with practice, and Thank You.
Naruto: thats funny, I like that poem too. xd
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 7:58 pm
You do have point there. I can't argue with that logic. People do get better with time and practice, sometimes lots of practice.
Thanks.
This has been burning in my head and I really want to know, what inspired you to start writting and drawing? You don't have to answer it's just something that burns in my head when I meet a good writter/artist, I just have some sort of feeling of wanting to know what made them start.
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Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:28 pm
Background: I seriously made this one on the spot! I 've been reading Cirque Du Freak, which is about vampires, and I can't get vampires out of my head! I can't think of a title, but if you guys have any suggestions let me know. I have a feeling that I'll make this a continuing series thingy cause all of my stories get really long so I figured just posting a little bit at a time should be good and not as overwhelming for you guys and my fingers xd . Please keep in mind that I can't spell.
No Title
As the vampire closed in on me I saw my entire life flash before my eyes. My younger brother teasing me about my crush, Dad helping me with geonetry homework, Mom letting me cook with her, playing tackle football with my friends, and some many wonderful things! I started to wonder if the vampire would spare me if I made a deal wiht him. What if, I joined him?! Though I really didn't like vampires their ways intrested me and for some reason I've always wanted to become a vampire. Though I would be throwing the rest of my life away since I was only sixteen I figured it was either join him to save my life, or die.
"Wait!" I said frantaically.
"Why should I wait? Your blood smells so good!" the vampire stated.
"I want to join you," I said desperately.
"A child?! Though you only look about sixteen so it shouldn't be a problem with the higher ups. Though you have such tastey blood! Why would you want to become one of my kind?" the vampire questioned.
"I've been fascinated with vampires since I was little, my dad told me a bunch about them and I've always wondered if it was true and deep down my mind wanted me to become one," I sort of lied though some of that was true, my dad did tell me about vampires and I was fascinated by them since I was little.
"Hmmmm, I'm not sure, you'd be giving up the rest of your life for a life like this. Are you sure?"
"I'm as positive as I'll ever be," I insisted. "Wait aren't you going to kill me anyway?!"
"Heavens no! I would never do that to a mortal! I don't believe in killing my victims!" the vampire retorted.
"I thought vampires killed their victims?"
"Your father must not know much. Vampires do not kill their victims unless it's a loast resort and they've been starving, or they've gone made," the vampire explained. "Is that why you wanted me to turn you? Because you thought I was going to kill you?"
"Well sorta, I do want to be one and find out what it's like. I know I'll be throwing my entire life away for this but I'm will to do it."
"Well there's a few things I have to ask you, then there are other items that must be attended to before I can decide if you can be turned."
"Like what?" I asked.
The vampire thought for what felt like an hour. I dindn't know if he was trying to trick me or if he was trying to remember everything that his kind had to do before they could turn someone into one of their own. The vampire finally said everything we had to do.
To be continued..........
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