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Mitsuki Colthearts

PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:19 pm


OKay, this is a story I've been writing for a while. If you have seen this before on TenshiChimamire, that's my main account. Before we start, here are the settings: Tokyo at the present. And for some of the words, well yankee means a juvenille delinquint and moe means a fetish for a certain manga/anime type character. Alright, this is Yankee Maid's Prolouge!

Voices rang out from a large, lonely, abandoned building in one of the back alleys of Tokyo. A young girl rushed from where a glass door once stood. She had short dark brown hair that hung wet just above her shoulders and purple eyes that sparkled with the joy of life. She was wearing a long skirt that went against the fashion most girls were following nowadays. “I’m going off to work Yuki-chan! Tell Mio-chan when she wakes up!” A sleepy voice replied and the girl chuckled to herself. She turned down a narrow side street and walked past many other dying buildings. To her, they were a part of the scenery, something easily forgettable, yet to the young man on the other side of a fence close by it was a depressing and frightening parallel universe. He looked out of place in these slums, he had short blonde hair that clung around his face and bright blue eyes that made him look like a foreigner. His arms trembled at his sides and crossed his arms to hide that fact. He grumbled to himself angrily, checking his wristwatch impatiently.

A limousine pulled up next to the teenager and he happily pulled himself into it. The girl was running toward the fence, getting ready to hop over it and run to her day job at a small grocery store. By some twist of fate the boy had accidently left his jacket on the fence so he rushed out to grab it and locked eyes with the girl. Her hand was resting on the fence, readying for her body’s weight at that moment, right beside the coat. He smiled pleasantly at her, giving a princely aura to match his visage. She gasped slightly before blushing brightly and looking away, her hair creating a curtain over her face. He laughed softly and moved back into his fancy car, after grabbing his coat. The closest window on the car rolled down and the boy moved so his face was in the middle of it. He grinned at the girl and waved a polite goodbye to her.

Once he was gone the girl gripped her hands together and looked at the ground. “Was he…” she whispered softly, “my kind of moe?” She pulled herself up straight again and giggled slightly before biting her fist. “I suppose I might as well check. Work was getting boring anyways.” With that the girl jumped the fence and followed the limo at a fast pace.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:27 pm


And this is chapter 1! Yes, I suck at paragraphing...

“Kodo-sama! You’ve arrived just in time!” A maid ran towards the blonde teen who had just emerged from the limosine and dragged him into the large mansion. He tottered after her, throwing off his shoes at the door. A large man stood beside a proper English woman, he bowed slightly at them.

“Mother, Father. I’m sorry I was late coming home, I got lost on my way to practice.” He shrugged slowly and brought up his face to look at his parents. The blonde woman smiled happily at him and pulled him into a hug.

“ I was so worried about you Kenji!” The woman cried, unlatching herself from her son. The boy grumbled something about being too old to be treated like this and then turned toward his father.

“So…I get a maid of my own today, right Father?” He asked anxiously. The old man nodded, chuckling.

“We are holding interviews in a few minutes. Come back to the sitting room and wait.” The teen bounced slightly and rushed into a door behind them, past a line full of beautiful girls and then behind a screen.

Meanwhile, the brown haired girl was in front of the large mansion, sweaty and clutching the apron she wore at work. “s**t! This place is huge! Well…I mean…crap!” She laughed loudly before walking towards the front door. “This dude really seems like my moe…I really hope he is!” She was about to knock on the huge door before her, but it was opened before she ever had a chance.

“You’re late! Hurry inside!” A middle aged woman pushed the girl inside before she could protest and led her to the back of a large line of girls.

“Wait! I-Late? For what? A-!” She turned, seeing all the girls in front of her and gasped. “…Why are all these girls here?”

The maid groaned with exasperation before she replied. “What? You didn’t think you would be the only girl trying out to be Kodo-sama’s maid did you?”

“Maid!?” The girl stared at the woman blankly. “No way, I’m not trying out to be this dude’s maid I-!” She thought quickly and turned back to the woman. “Umm, never mind what I just said! I am trying out to be Kodo-sama’s maid! Sorry!” She laughed weakly and scratched the back of her head.

The maid huffed and walked to the screen the blonde boy was sitting behind. She instructed all the girls that they would be taken into another room and asked a variety of questions to see if she was what Kodo wanted. All the girls in front of the brunette squealed and began talking anxiously. The girl stared down at her attire and then looked at all the other girls. “s**t…I’m not going to make it. Damn kogals! If he is my moe, which I really hope he is, then he would never choose me!” She whispered angrily.

Once it came to be her turn the girl walked into the room and sat stiffly in a high backed chair. An old man, most likely the family’s butler, sat before her with a clipboard in his hands. He cleared his throat and began speaking in a monotone voice. “May I have your name please?”

“Umm,” She hesitated for a second before deciding to give her real name. “Kuhaku Mitsuki.”

“Alright then, Mitsuki-san. Are you in school?” The man asked, scratching notes down on the clipboard.

Mitsuki glared venomously at him for a second before answering. “No, I can’t afford it. I work full time.”

‘Uh-huh.” More scratching. “What kind of things do you enjoy?”

“Umm, I-I like reading…having fun with my friends…And working I suppose.” She swore at herself inwardly, ashamed of her honesty.

“How would you describe yourself?”

“Hard working, a leader, and self reliant, I suppose.” She twitched her fingers, worried.

“Alright, last question. Why do you want to work for Kodo-sama?”

“W-well, I…I think I would enjoy working for him and…that’s all I guess!” She bit her lip, frustrated with herself, this boring old man, and this Kodo kid. Why did so many girls have to like him?

The butler sighed and opened the door on the right side of him, opposite of the way she came in. “The exit’s this way. Please leave.” Mitsuki’s mouth opened in horror and she pulled herself out of the chair. As she walked through the door she took deep breathes to calm herself.

Kenji was grinning from ear to ear as he saw the girls go through the questioning. He had been in a room with a one way window behind the interview room. “So many cuties there!” He frowned when a slightly familiar looking brunette went in, but once she started answering the questions he lost all interest in her. She was too normal and she had an air of delinquency about her. Once she left and the interviews were over he stretched and walked into the front hall to announce his decision.

Mitsuki was passing a large window on her way to the front of the mansion. She knew she wouldn’t win, but at least she could get a feel for this Kodo. A man came crashing in through the window and Mitsuki froze. The man stared at her before shrugging and running towards the front hall. Mitsuki growled loudly and rushed after the intruder. She caught up to him quickly as he fell upon the blonde boy. All the girls in the room gasped and began running toward the exits.

The man pulled out a small dagger and put it to Kenji’s neck. Kenji struggled weakly, fearing for his life. Out of nowhere the brown haired girl he saw earlier kicked the man in the face and sent him flying, the knife soaring to the ground. Kenji looked in awe at the girl who was glaring at the intruder. “You b*****d! How dare you ignore me like I’m nothing!” She yelled, grabbing the downed man by his collar and punching him repeatedly in the stomach. To finish off she kneed the man in the crotch before dropping him disgustedly to the floor. “Vermin!” She hissed before looking at the wary young man. “Are you alright, Kodo-sama? He didn’t hurt you did he?” Kenji shook his head rapidly and Mitsuki sighed in relief.

A loud clapping came from across the hall. Kenji’s father stood there, smiling. The English woman rushed to Kenji, clutching him to her again. Mitsuki bowed towards both the adults. “Young girl” The old man said. “You showed real bravery just now…I was wondering, do you want to work as my son’s maid?”

Both Mitsuki and Kenji opened their mouths. Kenji began to protest angrily but Mitsuki smiled happily at the old man. “I would be honored to.”

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Mitsuki Colthearts

PostPosted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:51 pm


I would love any comments you all have! heart
PostPosted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:36 pm


Sounds good =] Keep writing, its a great start into the story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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Mitsuki Colthearts

PostPosted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:51 pm


Thanks! I have a bit of writer's block at the moment though.
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