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Amethyst Darkstar
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:11 pm


::Condemned::

Welcome dear travelers
Please, do make yourselves at home
I see you ave stumbled upon
My darkened cathedral, my home
My shadowed haunting sanctuary
Away from all the fools & the hopeless.

You see I am but an angel
Surely I have wings -
But they are not made of
God's light feathers
Able to glide on wind
Overlooking any landscape beauty.

These wings you see before your very own
Shocked & horror filled eyes, are coloured black
Just like my heart & very own soul.
My eyes are silver & my body athletic but thin;
Judge me not on my size but my strength
For I am sure I will amaze you
With the things I am capable of'
Especially for a female of my five-foot-three-inch frame.

I may be small but much like a pushover
But judge me not on my appearance
I assure you, dear traveler, that I do not
Eat & thrive solely on lost souls...
No, no. That is a former friend of mine.
I am only the angel of the Condemned,
Not some lose freak causing chaos & nightmares.

Sure I am not what you want me to be,
& I'm not what you want to see
But I'm always here, lurking, hiding
In the shadows for that is where I find comfort
Instead of dealing with fools & the hopeless..
Yes, here is where I am no longer judged,
By others whom appear to be as shallow as kiddie pools.

I'm surprised your sanity has survived this long
& that you haven't gone running, or tried to wake
From this indeed, never-ending nightmare.

I've been condemned here to the shadows
Where my brothers Chaos & Havoc run free
& I am the creator of your nightmares.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:27 pm


Very nice freestyle! Very cool! ^_^ I love it!

cooll666725
Captain


Amethyst Darkstar
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:18 pm


I love freestyle. I have a hard time trying to write rhyming poetry. Hence the bad lyrics. Lol. Glad you enjoyed though. Thanks for commenting. ^_^
PostPosted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:33 pm


cooll666725
Very nice freestyle! Very cool! ^_^ I love it!

i really do like it

Xxr and sXx

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Poetry and Lyrics! Awesome!

 
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