|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:56 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:10 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:17 pm
abjiehalKjdnfsa!
More amateur poetry!
Sorry for being blunt, i'm probably a very much hated person, but i must say that this poem is BORING!
It sounds more like an essay than a poem.
I suggest you look up more about poetry and it's poetic devices.
Go read some published poetry and take inspiration from that.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 12:49 pm
Why can't a poem be like an essay?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 5:31 pm
and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 9:38 am
Miyaz and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD
Unless it was a metaphor.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 6:00 pm
and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 5:40 am
Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 5:46 pm
.~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago. Criticism may invoke negativity.
Not all criticism is good, but if you don't want to hear and learn from other people's opinions then why post into this forum?
Poetry does not have to have a format, yes i agree, and yes, poems contain emotions in their various aspects.
Where is the emotion in your porm?
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
I don't care when you've learned english, but to have pride in something you do, to feel satisfied by your piece of work is to say that you will not improve anymore.
If you are dissatisfied however, then you can only get better, get wiser in your writing as you learn to become better.
Pride is ignorance, what i see now
"Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinion realy."
is the ignorance of a young writer who will not improve any further than you have already done.
Prove me wrong.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 11:13 am
Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Why can't a poem be like an essay? Well, logically speaking, if a poem were to be an essay, it wouldn't be a poem anymore... it would be an essay.
Duh! xD Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
A question is a poetic device.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 11:25 am
Keats:
Quote: Alone and palely loitering? Double lived in regions new?
Blake:
Quote: And did those feet in ancient time Walk upon England's mountains green? And was the holy Lamb of God On England's pleasant pastures seen? And did the Countenance Divine Shine forth upon our clouded hills? And was Jerusalem builded here Among these dark satanic mills?
Miyaz:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 5:47 pm
and_solo_said Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz and_solo_said Unless it was a metaphor. Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 9:33 am
Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Miyaz and_solo_said Unless it was a metaphor. Haha, no.
If you want to write an essay, then go ahead, write an essay.
Poetic devices and techniques do not include essay writing.
Besides, when you write poems it wouldn't give a good feeling if you're only using ONE 'metaphor.'
You must combine them as to enhance meaning. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill.
I didn't say that because they were used means that they are poetic devices, but they are. Besides, she doesn't just use questions.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:53 am
and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill. Either way, i do not like this poem.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 2:10 pm
Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz and_solo_said Miyaz .~DarkPoisonKisses~. Personaly Miyaz i don't care for your opinon realy. All u have is negativity. A poems doesn't have to be a certain format. A poem is sighn of expression in emotion. I bet u couldn't get out the point any better then how i did with my emotion during the time. Im actually quite proud of my writting since i just learned the english language 6 years ago.
All i see are questions.
Mere questions do not express as much emotion as the poetic devices that you could find were you to research them.
Just because i used a question in one of my poems, and others have too, does not mean that they are poetic devices.
Questions alone cannot be forged into a poem unless you have an unlimited supply of skill. Either way, i do not like this poem. it does not matter weather u like the poem or not allt hat matter is me myself as the ritter cares and loves it.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
