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Creepy Doll

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Multa Paucis

PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:56 am


Creepy Doll by Katie(aka Eva-jee-jay)
I am a creepy doll, hiding in the black.
Watching your every movement, waiting for you to turn your back.
Scissors in one hand, knife in the other,
Your sisters will be without their brother.
You open up the closet, and what do you see?
A creepy little doll that looks like me.
It turns to dust when it sees the light,
and you pray with all your might,
that the little creepy doll which gave you a scare,
was only a silly little nightmare.


I wrote this for my older brother, just as a random, funny comment and his profile.
Opinions?
PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 12:05 am


Vary well made out of the two you posted i like this one better. The tempo was steady and it stayed on one topic. plus it had i nice innocent demon feel to it. great work.

bhalucard


Harle_MoonDancer

PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:26 am


the rhymminig was very creative. i very much liked it.
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2009 1:59 pm


i wont be able to sleep at night.
o.o

ii heaven


BroHanSein

PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 7:00 pm


AHHHHHH! SCARY POEM! xd I'm gonna be nom-ing on this tonight! YAY! The ending is especially good! lol ...that ain't no nightmare boy SLEEP WITH ONE EYE OPEN!
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