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Verdias94

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 7:03 pm


For You Are The One

For you I would climb
The highest mountain peak
Swim the deepest ocean
Your love I do seek.

For you I would cross
The rivers most wide
Walk the hottest desert sand
To have you by my side.

For you are the one
Who makes me whole
You've captured my heart
And touched my soul.

For you are the one
That stepped out of my dreams
Gave me new hope
Showed me what love means.

For you alone
Are my reason to live
For the compassion you show
And the care that you give.

You came into my life
And made me complete
Each time I see you
My heart skips a beat.

For you define beauty
In both body and mind
Your soft, gentle face
More beauty I'll ne'er find.

For you are the one
God sent from above
The angel I needed
For whom I do love.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:14 pm


Very, VERY good! I'm impressed. I think that's the absolute best thing I've read on gaia. XD ^_^ Even tops most of my stuff.

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Verdias94

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 4:34 pm


Thanks I wrote this for this girl i like also, i wrote it a 4:30 am lol
PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:09 pm


Not to be mean, but. I've read this somewhere else.

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Verdias94

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:55 am


I've put this on multiply sites and my cuz but t on sum to for me...so thats prolly y, you've rerad it be4
PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:16 pm


Sadly, I don't believe you wrote it. The way you just replied to me doesn't help you convince me of this. I'm sorry. To me it just seems that you took someone else's work.

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cooll666725
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:00 am


This post is now under investigation. Once a decision is made, it is final. Do not complain if the decision is made incorrectly or is made against what you wish.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:25 pm


i like it i really do honestly biggrin

Xxr and sXx

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