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 Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:02 pm
This is where I’m going to post all of my poems that after 5 ratings in the arenas have a 4.0 rating or higher. I hope you guys enjoy them all. Also, doing my poems this way will save space in the forums and make it easier to reply to the posts. Thanks!
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:04 am
True Love
I really wish that you could see
All the pain inside of me
I love you more than life itself
And I need you,
More than anything else
I want you more than the air I breathe
I need you more than anything needs me
Except for you, if you’re the way you say
When you need me, I’ll always stay
I love your eyes
And the beauty they own
Even more than any jewel or precious stone
My love for you even extends
Unto the most far universe,
And further, to it’s ends
As it stretches so very far
It leaves a gapping hole, and horrid scars
On anything that comes between
The destined paths for you and me
To add on to this, I even will say
I love your body, each and every way
It’s great built for my desire
Though, if I’m not careful, it could set lots of fires
One more detail
To this I must add
Your hair, I love
No matter how it is “bad”
I love you so much
Every part of you is keen
And one day for me
It all will be seen
For now, I’ll live with
Your personality, and being friends with
For it I love,
More than all the rest
Because it is the part for which I confess
That I have indeed fallen for,
And will never lose grasp
It is the part I cherish
The part that shows your best
Your best is not perfect
But much more than I’d expect
Therefore, it is perfect for me
And I’ll give it even more respect
As I think of what you’ve endured
Just to make it this far
As I think of all the cuts,
And all of the broken scars
I forgive you of them all
Because even I’ve taken that fall
I’ve taken the quick way out
And it left all the pain for which you pout
“I’m sorry” I do say once more
For having done that which I had
And not bearing what should’ve been bore
I promise I’m doing much better
And will never again resort
To those inflictions that I’d once gave in to
And will never again restore
I forgive myself for the past
As I look towards the future
I usually try not to look back
For fear of losing my path on the tracks
A great joy I feel
Every time I’m near you
I know for my future
I will always be near, too
While I love every part of you
I’ll dearly admit
My heart moves closer to
Every part of you it can get
Your breath stale with beauty
Your heart purer than diamond
Your eyes shining like sapphire
Your hair perfect as it’s lighten
Your aura masonic as vampires
Your body more perfect than gold
Your personality more fun than star-gazing
Your life is blessed---more than known
I know this to be true
When I give my love to you
I share something new
But yet it is not so new
For it is as old
As time itself
It’s more philosophical
More than anything else
It’s called “true love”
Quite pure as it is
It shows us the best in life
And allows us to love
For as long as we both shall live
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:19 am
This is my absolute favorite of all of my writings. I hope you all enjoy!
Written By: Jeffrey Davis Kirby
Near Life
I hate the Lies
I hate the Cries
I despise the things they say
I know the world is bad
(I’ll make it fade away)
I know the wars
I see the scores
The little games they play
The world’s bad
Life is sad
(I’ll make it fade away)
I see you
Smiling back
(I see you; I love you, too)
I know the world’s a scary place
(Except that I have you!)
You are the life
Within my veins
(You are the sun,
Shining through the rain)
You are the light
Within the spirit
You are perfect
And you KEEP ME NEAR LIFE…
I cry too
When I see pain
I despise the things they say
I know the world’s bad
(I’ll make it fade away)
I want to live
I want to give
All the things I have
All to keep you to myself
You’re keeping me in check
I see you
Smiling back
(I see you; I love you, too)
I know the world’s a scary place
(Except that I have you!)
You are the life
Within my veins
(You are the sun,
Shining through the rain)
You are the light
Within the spirit
You are perfect
And you KEEP ME NEAR LIFE…
You are my life
You are my light
In a world where darkness rules
Keep me here forever now
(Don’t worry I need you, too)
I see you
Smiling back
(I see you; I love you, too)
I know the world’s a scary place
(Except that I have you!)
You are the life
Within my veins
(You are the sun,
Shining through the rain)
You are the light
Within the spirit
You are perfect
And you KEEP ME NEAR LIFE…
(I want you staying here
I want you to keep me, dear
You are the love of my life
You are the one who gives me light)
I need you
(I need you, too)
Keep me here… (I need you)
As long as I live… (I need you)
As long as I give you…
{MY LIFE!}
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Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:20 am
My Life Story
(Dedicated to Kayleigh Rachel Kirby)
Part 1: The Husband
I had loved many
In many ways
I had dated girls
And, in them, I lost taste
They would always leave me
Though, I’d never leave them
They would abuse my love
And, try to make me hate them
My life was so bad
I was all alone
My parents were okay
But my life was my own
I wanted out
I saw the quickest way
I took that rugged knife
And, plunged it horridly
I was always used
My love was abused
My life was turmoil
And, pain was always due
I felt the knife
I used to make those scars
That was my life
And, it wasn’t going far
My friends were very few
My life was going fast
I told my friends
About my rugged past
One of them was true
She came to save my life
She saw me in my room
And, she took away the knife
Part 2: The Wife
(My life was only pain
My parents were my fall
They never set me free
They kept me in their walls
That was my life
If I could not get out
I would want to die
More than waiting there in doubt
I had a few friends
I never got to see
My parents kept me trapped
There was only one thing
The rope was looking nice
I tied it to my throat
I stood up on my chair
Then knocked it to the floor)
(I was always used
My love was abused
My life was turmoil
And, pain was always due
I felt the knife
I used to make those scars
That was my life
And, it wasn’t going far
My friends were very few
My life was going fast
I told my friends
About my rugged past
One of them was true
He came to save my life
He saw me in my room
And, he took away the knife)
Part 3: Their Life
{Our lives are twined
Two became one you see
Her and I
Are now the same thing
We are each others’
Other half in life
We kept each other
From dying from the knife
We were just friends
Then soon became more
Now we have love
And we closed all the doors
We keep to ourselves
Concerning what we’ve done
It’s our little secret
But, also how we found love}
{I was always used
My love was abused
My life was turmoil
And, pain was always due
I felt the knife
I used to make those scars
That was my life
And, it wasn’t going far
My friends were very few
My life was going fast
I told my friends
About my rugged past
One of them was true
He/she came to save my life
He/she saw me in my room
And, he/she took away the knife}
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:23 am
In Hell's Dark Depths
Souls are burning in the dark
They light the world with every spark
Why inside we see they lay
Only they will die one day
For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance
They are alive only in spirit
They will not live to see or hear it
What they want they will never receive
Because they have chosen death over me
For I have come to save them all
Though they had rejected my humble call
Therefore, unto them I do say
You must burn; Just Burn and wait
For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance
Understand I do love you all
You all are unique and you all have a call
you that are rejected and left to be denied
By the only creature who can burn your eternal hide
You still are mine I want you to be saved
Therefore you’ll get a second chance if you wait
Wait and burn in the depths of hell
Wait and burn until you hear the trumpet call
No fun will there be
No fun will you have
Not a soul you will see
That isn’t burning and past
Everyone there is dead and feels pain, burning
They all will be read and have a second chance at burning
So wait till I come you might make it out yet
If you just burn down in hell’s depths
For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:26 am
Written by, Jeffrey Davis Kirby (me, I go by Davis, though)
Envy of Life
I feel no pain
I breathe no air
My hands are numb
And my feet are bare
My eyes are rotten
My skin is pale
My fingernails are black
And my breath is stale
My heart is ripped
By the world around me
The sight of me
Would be astounding
My feet are broken
My wrists are cut
Why can’t this world
Be nice, and not rough
My house is a wreck
My pots are boiling over
My sandwich is moldy
And my food is leftovers
My estate is to be sold
My car has been towed
My money is gone
And my family turned cold
The love of money
I know had corrupted me
As none of it’s with me
I feel so unlucky
To have to be here
And not at my home
To be in this hell
I’m all alone
I feel like my life
Has left me for good
My family, my friends
They all want my goods
I see now who I was
And just what I’ve become
If I could go back
I would not be the same one
The one who cursed
The one who hated
The one who loved money
And the one that was hated
I’ll never get another chance
To do it again is all I wish
My family, my friends
I would teach them
To love and be loved
And not to love hatred
To be kind and nice
Not cruel and degraded
That is my wish
It’s for them to know
Will you please tell them
Whoever you are
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:29 am
The blood is dripping
From my fingertips
Everything is slipping
I hear my skin rip
Pain is oozing
As the blood flows
I feel it inside me
Until I grow cold
Once the dead rise
They feel better then
I know because now
I am of the undead
No blood is running
Not from head to toe
You feel cold
But you are not alone
You have many friends
Many, many are near
You hear their screams
And you feel their fears
They touch you
And you touch them
Yet you feel nothing
Except for pain
The pain you feel
They feel it too
You somehow feel theirs
And they know that you do
For they are pained
Just as you are too
The burdens they bear
Sometimes out do you
Yet still for some reason
You can see blood
You cannot feel it
But see puddles in the mud
You watch it as it drips
Straight from your heart
You know you are dead
But you cannot depart
Your spirit has been trapped
And your soul is held down
By the fears you have feared
And by the hate for which you frown
This world which you have hated
This pain for which you endure
You will always be stuck with
Until the end of the earth
You know this in your heart
You see the others who are with you
You try to depart
But are trapped and no one can hear you
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:31 am
Center of Life
You are my life
You are my mate
I love you now more
Than I loved you then
I could not live without you
I desperately know
Everything I feel is perfect
Everything in you I know
I need you now
More than I ever did
You are my center of life
And you are my friend
You are the one I look to
When I cannot find the answers
You are the one I live for
When I feel pain like cancer
The pain pulls me away
I do not wish to go
Please let me stay
I’ll be your angel
Please show me you love me
Show me you have no hate
I never hated you
So please don’t sit and wait
I need you now
As my heart pulls
I need you now more
More than anything in the world
Show me how you love me
Show me you really care
I really cared for you
When no one else was there
Please show me you love me
Before I break down and cry
Show me how much you love me
Please show me before I die
The truth in your eyes
It beats me down inside
The beautiful blueness
It pains me deep inside
I need you now more than I ever did
Please show me you love me
Before it is the end
You only have so long
This world is moving fast
The end will surely come
And it’s coming on too fast
So Show me that you love me
Tell me you really care
Show me that you love me
So I can play with your hair?
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Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 8:33 am
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