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Sunafire

PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:21 am



Love poetry?
Then check out my poetry in the arena! [Link]

Rate it, comment on it, and fave it if you like it!

I shall put three of my favourite pieces as examples, down below if you're too lazy to look in the arena.

PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:24 am



EXAMPLE
Perforated Dreamer

Now you are at the place,
Of never-ending fantasy.
A pinch to the skin,
And you cannot leave,
Pain doesn't exist.

So I put on the glowing dress,
Seems silly really,
To wear such splendor,
When I'm stuck in a world,
Full of evil and bad guys,
Cause over and over again,
I do the same old monotonous thing,
I have to get it perfect,
Before you can move on,
To the next task,
And from the next task,
I fall a hundred feet,
As my toes slip on the stair,
And I'm flying, I'm falling,
Losing 100 hp.

Waking in sunlit suburbia,
She rubs her eyes and sighs,
Did she ever complete that level?
Did she ever get the guy?
But her memory is perforated,
And images fade like mist,
Picks up a pen and writes a poem,
Of a dream she has now lost.
 

Sunafire


Sunafire

PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:26 am



EXAMPLE
Chasing Demons

Starless night,
Rain down your serenade,
Of moonless sonorities,
Darkness come rescue me,
Darkness bring me heroes.
Afraid of the dark,
Into the blue, the unknown,
Trickle to the forests,
The city is full of monsters,
Woodland embrace,
Night-time chase,
I'm half starved and half born.
Childish fears,
Are meant to vanish,
As the years make us stronger,
Being strong I grab my sword,
Twigs and string,
I could defeat anything,
Demons and dragons, fight me.
And while I fight,
Ghosts are kissing my cold cheeks,
I reach out for a hand,
No hands are there to break my fall.
Falling into vertigo,
While the sun rises in the east,
My demons, those demons...
They disappear.

 
PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 6:31 am



EXAMPLE
Coffee & Cigarettes

Je t'aime,
And the coffee is getting colder,
As it sits on the windowsill,
Created, Sipped, Ignored.
Oh how we intertwined.

Il m'aime,
And the smoke from our cigarettes,
Drifts across the room,
Lit, Breathed, Let go.
Then he kissed me.

And those kisses tasted,
Like summer and the rain,
You said I could come over again,
And those promises,
Well we wrote them on Post-It Notes,
Stuck them on your dirty walls,
Leaving the marker pen on the bed,
The ink spilled and later you said,
"The stars, they can't shine as bright as you do."
And I laughed, I never was the romantic type,
But i'm starting to wonder if that's true,
As I google how to say I love you,
In a hundred languages.
 

Sunafire


Tsume Rokaro

PostPosted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:43 pm


*reads the three before going to the arena*

O.o Your poetry is kinda like mine. o.o biggrin *luffles it--specially the last two here*

I like them~ Love them~ Yay! biggrin *skitters to arena for more looksies*
PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:30 am


You know I love it sexy.
I was the one telling you to write more!

Atlanticism

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