Lol so I made a couple of poems a while back and posted them on the CB (my first mistake) and they dont take things seriously ever so I decided to see what you guys think.

Heres the first one lol:

I feel myself waning in these dark hours, a dark fire brewing in my soul.

I dont know what to do during this dark turmoil but fret.

It continues to consume me, piece by piece and I cant say no.

What malignant creature could spawn this but a Succubus from hell itself.

She spits at me a fire that knows no thirst and it envelops me within and without but at the same

taunts me.

Her eyes seem to be red with passion but contain a deeper secret within.

Her body is tempting but will lead me astray.

Her lips are lucious and full, kisses that will burn marks of passion in my skin.

The nails on her hands are long and sleek, they dig red trenches into my back that burn so good.

Those legs so long and fit, they wrap around my waist as she clenches tight.

Her name is fire and she burns me so.


And the second:

I hear the monster, it calls my name with a familiar tone.

I run from it, almost tripping on old bones.

It calls me again, in that old familiar tone.

I run from it, for I cannot hold my own.

I reach a dead end and I cant move further.

The monster has found me, and it comes at me with fervor.

It swipes me up, holding my body on high.

I struggle but all I can do is die.

Before the end comes to me,

I look at the face of the monster before thee.

And to my horror that gripped my chest

Oh Lord take my soul to rest

That monster with that old familiar tone,

had a face that was my very own.



Let me know what you guys think and also: Im not Emo I just like to write poetry : )