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One More Sleepless Night

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Elousia

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:19 pm


I sat in the cool darkness of the local park. I was leaning against an old tree’s trunk. The leaves were all different colors and had started falling to the ground.

A calm breeze blew some leaves around me and one landed on my pale arm. I picked it up and let it go in the wind.

I was waiting for my dinner to arrive. Waiting could take all night, but that was okay with me. It’s not like I needed to sleep tonight, or ever.

I ran my fingers through my long black hair and sighed. Nights like this were the best for waiting. It wasn’t too hot or too cold and there wasn’t a cloud in the sky. Perfect, for them.

My eyes scanned the park and I noticed something. A child around fifteen was walking down the park’s path alone. I stood and smiled. My meal was finally here. I was beginning to feel very hungry. I could hardly stop myself from running all out towards him.

“Good evening child.” I said in my sweet musical voice.

He turned around and his jaw dropped “You can’t be much older than me.”

I smiled widely showing my white fangs and my eyes went from brown to crimson, the sign that I wanted blood.

“I am nearly one hundred and twenty years older than you, pathetic human.” I replied getting closer to my meal, about an inch away from him.

He took a step back with genuine fear in his eyes and I stepped with him putting my hand behind his neck. I laughed lightly. He was shaking really badly, he was amusing me.

I lowered my head and bit into his neck. Warm blood ran down his neck as I drank deeply. The scent of his blood was the most wonderful thing I had smelled all month.

When there wasn’t a drop of blood left in his body, I threw it down to the ground and stepped over it. As I walked I wiped some blood off my face and licked it off my fingers.

With my hunger satisfied I ran into the forest for one more sleepless night.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 12:21 pm


I don't like this one much. Not proud of it at all actually. It's, in my opinion, my worst piece ever, but I guess thats up to you to decide.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 4:56 am


it' s quite good, because it has an interesting hook to it, it isn't bad at all.
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