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 Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:01 pm
Playful
Playful, the rippling
Surf, washing over our toes
Fearful, the watching
Crowd, seeing as the waves rose
Joyful, the windy
Meadow, crickets in our hands
Sorrowful, the gray
Sky, ready to drench the lands
Beautiful, drifting
Snow, floating across our sight
Bountiful, ice cold
Flakes, that froze the land in white
Wonderful, leaping
Flames, that warmed our frigid hearts
Hateful, the flying
Sparks, That sent us jumping apart
Disdainful, dark gray
Clouds, that block the light of day
Faithful, the shining
Sun, that sends the gloom away
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:58 am
I love how you use simplicity with the utmost complexity.
Where you use such little words to create such a large, beautiful image.
I think I've started to turn into a fan of your work.
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 7:30 am
Thanks so much! I'll try to write more poetry from now on, I haven't for quite while.
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:48 pm
Maybe we could exchange poetry sometime. :]
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:16 pm
I'd have to actually write some for that to happen...
sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:22 pm
Duh, We'll write each other one. :]
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:23 pm
Let's just say that poetry is not often my friend...
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:26 pm
I'm going to ask you to dip into my style. No planning, no rules. Just raw emotion. Just write what seems to go. Just write.
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:45 pm
Okay, I tried. I'm not really sure what to make of what came out, half of it doesn't make any sense. I'm not sure if it's really emotion that came out, but it was something...
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:55 pm
Post it. I would adore to see it. <3
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 3:05 pm
Umm... In a bit, I've got to go eat dinner.
sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 3:31 pm
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