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Shokai

PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:45 am


I have been practicing a lot lately and I am happy with the way I draw bodies. I think I may be starting to see my own style arise ^.^

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I would really appreciate it if you can let me know about any disproportions and any anatomical errors.

Thanks
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 9:25 pm


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The feet could be better, but overall, it looks okay.

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Shokai

PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 6:53 am


Tenko72
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The feet could be better, but overall, it looks okay.

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Thanks.

Up till now, I did not usually draw anything below the waist so I tried drawing the feet. I started off making rectangular boxes and fleshing them in.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:26 pm


overall it's kinda off, but it's a good starter peice, keep working! the one thing some artists don't do is "PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE!!"

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:50 am


Feet are tricky for most people. And while I'm by no means perfect, I think this will help out a little.
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http://calibermengsk.com/gaia/redline/shokai-redline.png

Big thing to realize is that feet aren't just boxes. They are boxes with triangles if you see them as boxes. (though, many people would also say they aren't boxes at all, and are circles completely, but everyone has their own way of seeing things.)

I'm one of those box see'ers like you. But, feet can't be just boxes... otherwise you have some issues with how they look after being drawn (like in your instance). You just have to mainly remember the ankle and the heel. Those are two of the most important things that give the feel of a foot, based on my experience so far with drawing. You can draw boxes off the end of the heel and ankle and people can still tell it's a foot.

In the redline above, I drew off to the side the basic shapes of front and side that I would use in a drawing to give shape to the foot/ankle area, just as an example to try to help out.

I am by no means an expert, but I think this can help you a bit. (I seem to be best at feet and hands... as far as shape goes anyway.) I hope this helps.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:12 am


It's not bad. If you're still practicing.

Overall, it seems a little bit off but you're really getting there. ^^

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 9:04 pm


i hate drawing hands and feet, thats my thing i hate to draw. but other then the feet there are a few things i would like to point out. first of all the, yell at me if im wrong but, calves look a bit short, maybe make them a but longer. also, the left arm looks alot bigger then the left arm, plus, its alot bulkier too. also, the neck looks a bit small.
now for the face, the face shape looks amazing, all i recomend is to remember that they eyes should be at least an eye a part [u should be able to fit an eye in between them] but other then that the face looks good
considering this is jsut practice, it looks good :]

keep up the good workk mrgreen
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